Alkris said:I could always participate on the tournament lol
Razgriz said:Yeah, the dialogue in 5Ds was spot on. And if I recall, even the English VAs had the best cast (imo in that there were hardly any super annoying squeakers).
Also, Vik...Love Kaden's sass. Keith despises being interrupted, so that was brilliant.
*thumbs up*
Kaybee said:Oh Kaden is very appropriately creepy with the juxtaposition between his thoughts and his actions.
Razgriz said:Heh, well thanks, I appreciate it. I haven't participated in too many group stories, so I'm still trying to learn to transition between characters.
But your writing's nothing to sneeze at either; I could feel Kaden's soul-less nature starting to overtake him at points, and you do a pretty damn good job of illustrating how him having no soul is starting to alter the finer aspects of his personality.
Though I'm starting to wonder now, since we have two essentially soul-less dickbags that are puppets of higher-power entities...Maybe a meeting is in order in the future? (Your evil woman spirit and the Emperor, I mean). Amicable or not, I think them having to confront each other would be a spectacular display xD
Kaybee said:Vik, the secret is that beyond societal conditioning, men and women really aren't that different.
You're the 'man with the plan' as it were, and I know that I for one wouldn't want to take on the role of your big bad. I might be able to play her, but I don't think I could necessarily do your plans for her justice.
She's your character, I have confidence in your ability to write her.