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Scars of War: The Long Road Home (Spots Open)

Onica

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Girls are still needed but they can be worked in as the RP goes on if none join right away. (By being found and so on)

At the end of World War II, after dividing up the nation, the countries that defeated Japan failed to rule the island. As a result, many independent powers were established, fighting amongst each other and trying to seize control. They developed a hatred of one another, leading the country into a never-ending spiral of a civil war. Our story opens with a gang of soldiers raping Tomoko in front of the other women. The fact is that the women are under the protection of these sexually charged soldiers. The women and the soldiers are trapped in enemy territory, separated from their main force, and they must find a way to rejoin the main force -- if they are to survive the war.

Intertwined with Kaoruko's memories of a happier past are shocking scenes, where the soldiers savagely rape and humiliate the women. At the same time, a mysterious sniper kills them off, one by one. In the process, Fukushima, a timid, young soldier, transforms into a brutal beast, after his girlfriend is raped by his fellow soldier and killed by the sniper. Becoming a monster, just like the other fighters, he goes on a rampage, violating the woman he's supposed to be protecting.​

That's the plot from the anime but I was thinking about changing it around to something like this adding some twist to it:
At the end of World War III, the United States had been divided by the countries that attacked. As a result, many independent powers were established, fighting amongst each other and trying to seize control. They developed a hatred of one another, leading the country into a never-ending spiral of a civil war between the attacking countries. There goal to find and take over a weapon that started the war in the first place. Our story opens with a gang of about three-six American soldiers and a small group of one-four women. The fact is that the women are under the protection of these sexually charged soldiers. The women and the soldiers are trapped in enemy territory, separated from their main force, and they must find a way to rejoin the main force -- if they are to survive the war.
Our story starts with two of the soldiers fighting, the group already formed and trying to make there way to rejoin the main force. The actions of the female Soldier Ghost, having strayed away from her post, causing the death of one of the solder's girl friend and three other solders.​
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Soldiers
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Onica said:
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Name: Ghost
Age: 21
Gender: Female
MOS: Sniper
Weapon: Sniper Rifle and two hand guns
Rank: Cpl
History: Ghost is the only female soldier in the group, her personality normally coming across as cold. Even though she is the "Guarden Angel" of the group, her platoon dose not seem to care for her much. Blaming her for the death of one of other soldier's girl friend and three other soldiers who where shot during a cross fire. She keeps her past to herself, but there seems to be more about here then meets the eye.
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DareToDream said:
Name: Brody Parker
Age: 22
MOS: Army Infantry
Weapon: M16 combat rifle, M203 grenade launcher (attached to the M16), M9 pistol and combat knife
Rank: Corporal
History: Born and raised in the mountains of North Carolina, Brody didnâ??t have many options when he graduated high school so he enlisted in the Army. Physically fit from spending his days hunting and hiking in the mountains, he moves through the enlisted ranks, becoming a corporal before the war struck. Now, trapped behind enemy lines with a group of fellow soldiers and the women they are protecting, he must use all of his hunting and tracking skills to help them survive.
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Battleship44 said:
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Name: Angel
Age: 23
Gender: Male
MOS: Stealth & Reconnisance
Weapons: 2 BK11 Becker Necker Knives, 2 UZI SMG.
Rank: Lt.
History: Axel Christopher Foxton was first born to a wealthy family In California. From his early youth, his parents would send him off to countries all around the world, In the process learning stealth from the Chinese, Reconnaissance from the British, and tracking from the Egyptians. He was scout by the army and recruited, much to his father's joy. He's given the nickname "Angel", because despite his dead accuracy and skill, He never kills his enemies. Always just impairing them to the point where they cannot react. Its also the reason he never ranks up form a Lt.
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ArcturusV said:
Name: Daniel Markstrom
Age: 23
MOS: Tank Gunner
Weapon: Standard Issue M9 double action pistol
Rank: Sargeant
History: Was part of the third armored division, leading a spearhead assault into enemy territory. They ran afoul of difficult terrain however, and got pinned down by the defenses until they were hammered to scrap by artillery. Daniel managed to escape before one of the lethal shells scrapped his tank, along with several other members of his division. Over the trek to get back to friendly territory the rest of the survivors got picked off. Daniel was the only one to run into the current squadron, joining up with hopes of getting back home sometime soon, and realizing he couldn't make it alone. He's been out there a long time, and seen too many people just disappear to enemy bullets, wandering off to never be seen again, or other means. He has definately seemed a bit, unhinged, though he is capable of holding it together when the group needs to do something, for now. But when it's quiet his odd behaviors start coming out. He doesn't talk much about himself, his squad he is attached to knows he was part of a tank crew, and that he is a survivor of an offensive gone wrong, probably like many of them. What they don't know is that he's been out there for a lot longer than the most recent assaults. And survival and evasion from the enemy has taken its toll on him over this time. Parnoid delusions, insomnia, seemingly irrational phobias have all started developing within him. Overall, he's just not right in the head.
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Spake759 said:
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Name: Ethan Allen Spaight
Age: 38
MOS: Infantry Sergeant
Weapon: a M4 5.56mm carbine, M1911A1 .45ACP automatic pistols, a k-bar combat knife, a pair of kurki combat knives, a pair of matching tomahawks
Rank: Master Sergeant
History: MSG Spaight is a career infantryman, who has risen to the rank of Master Sergeant but has always found a way to keep himself in combat positions. He is a dedciated soldier who has devoted his life to defending the ideals that the American Republic were founded upon, instead of doing other things. He has discovered that he is missing something, and discovered exactly what that is. And has decided to take it now.
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Girls
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Skelace said:
Name: Nataca Resnik
Age: 25
Gender: Female
History: Was born in New York, New York and was put up for adoption. She was never given to a family and eventually placed one of the civil service women as a motherly figure in her heart. The woman died the same year she was able to get Nataca into college, leaving Nataca having one thing in her life... her studies. She graduated top of her class as a psycaitrist, hoping to help veteran soldiers who had developed PTSD. During the war she enrolled and helped out soldiers in the field but left after seeing her first fire fight. Now wondering around America for a place to just be safe.


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kikora said:
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Name: Teyha Lockra
Age: 18
Gender: Female
History: Teyha left to join the military young to escape the abuses of her family life. Almost immediately she was sent overseas to fight in an endless war, and the horrors of war became obvious to her almost immediately upon entering the country. She refused to follow military protocol she named cruel and unnecessary brutality, and had her rank stripped for her insubordination.

She was bounced from squad to squad, a disgraced criminal in the eyes of the military as they waited for the opportunity to ship her back to the states for her court-martial. That time never came though, as one of the squads she was sent to spearheaded an assault into enemy territory. The operation turned sour almost immediately, and Teyha watched in horror as soldiers were gunned around her. She tried to stay behind to help the wounded, but the advance of enemy soldiers drove her and any other survivors back, murders any that lingered in the slaughterground.

Eventually, Teyha made it back to the surviving troop, alive, but shaken.
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kikora said:
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Name: Nadira Kawasuki
Age: 26
Gender: Female
History: Nadira is the daughter of a large Japanese family in Tokyo. Her family was wise enough to realize that there was no resisting the American soldiers, and Nadira studied English to earn herself a job as a translator between the troops and civilians. It paid well enough for the risk, helping to support her elderly parents and young siblings.

Nadira working on helping translate when the troop was advanced forward. despite her pleas to not be involved in a direct battle, she was held by the American troops in fear that she would leak vital information to the enemy troops if released.

Quickly the Americans began to lose, and those holding Nadira were gunned down. She tried to run to safety, but was pinned under fire. Desperate for escape she fled forward, behind the American soldiers. Eventually the battle ended, and Nadira was alive, but she was a captive of the American solders she was hired by, a plaything for their use.

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Raiden said:
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Name: Masako Rallis
Age: 25
Gender: Female
MOS: Infantry (discharged)
Weapon: M4A1 Carbine, M9 Beretta, 3 Frag Grenades, 2 Smoke, 2 Chaff Grenades, Combat knife, Sawed-off .12 gauge shotgun.
Rank: Cpl (discharged)
History: AFter High school, Masako joined the US Army and served in the Afghan war but had been severely wounded during a roadside ambush when she rescued a team member from a PMN mine. She'd also use herself as a shield to protect her comrade and got wounded several more times by gunfire. Afterward, she was medically discharged with a final official rank of Corporal with a medal of valor, a purple heart and a another. Ever since, she's lived alone; facing nothing but disrepect and even shunning in her hometown (that hadn't supported the entire thing to start with).
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~Other Characters: Unsure of there Placement~​

Broomhandle45 said:
Name: Alexi Titov
Age: 28
Gender: Male
Rank: Starshina (Master Sergeant)
Weapons: AK-74 Assault Rifle, Yarygin PYa handgun.

History:
Conscripted into the Russian Federation forces at his youth, Alexi found himself in the brutal and violent training of the Russian Spetznaz. The training left him embittered and hateful of the Federation, despite him thriving in the environment.

Once the Spetsnaz were dispatched to the east coast, he found himself at a dilemma that left him with his superior officer dead and him fleeing into the ruined East Coast.

Skelace said:
Here ya go, hope it looks good.

Name: Deston Chechak
Age: 21
Gender: Male
MOS: Interpreter/Translator
Weapon: Nikonov AN-94
Rank: Praporshchik
History: Part of the Spetznaz, he was one of the many that left the army in the midst of battle. Now finding that America virtually destroyed he roams the city looking for an army other than the Russian to join. He has been able to hide between many armies looking for a group he would be willing to join by disguising his accent through his gas mask that he constantly wears.
 
Even using those... the way she did it was wrong. the only one with the power to do so is Angel. As for his threats. that was what you said you wanted him to do. I wouldn't have done them if not for that. i played the character the way you asked me to play him. after you changed your mind i started playiing him the way I wanted to.

yes this is a fucking game. that's why i joined it. to relax and have something to fucking do when i can't sleep. and to make some friends. but instead i'm having to deal with insults on both this thread, and in PMs.

i joined this for fucking fun, and because you asked me to.

but you have to accept responsiblity for the fuck ups as well. Ghost didn't tell the people downstairs his orders to set up watches or that he definately did not tell them to rape the women or for the women to have sex with them. but to be appreacative and help the men by doing the light work so that they could rest.

if someone took it that he was talking about anything else. that was their fuck up. and when he realized that they were thinking that was what he ment. he told her to put them to rights. because he was trying to set up the communications gear and security network.
 
Making friends with someone who freaks out over everything is very hard. :S You started it with that one misunderstanding and it escalated from there, so just drop it and start over. Let your character be taken down and play him how you want.

No more jabs at him in posts, but no more changing his character either. Wait for your turn, and respond to everyone in the area you're in. There's no need to get so angry.
 
kikora said:
The mary-sue and Gary-sue litmus test is a useful tool for creating balanced characters, Asua. It's not the first time I've taken it for someone else, since it's simply putting in answers for behaviors and attitudes I've seen so far. If Spake disagrees he can always take it himself. Actually, I would suggest everyone take the test. But, you have to play it fairly. ((I have been a roleplaying tutor before. ^^ Admin on other sites, checked work, critiqued characters, ect.))

Teyha's score: 18
Nadira's score: 17
I just wish I had a chance to actually roleplay them, it'd be a shame to have the RP die when they are still in that awkward working up stage... Especially Nadira since she is new.

And Spake. If you're not having fun then you can pull out, but don't ruin it for everyone. I'm being serious, you have choices to make here, don't make one that will kill this for everyone. And stop taking this so seriously! It's a game for goodness sake.

why should i take a test when i know that Spaight isn't me, or anything like me? I was a combat medic. not a commando. and never wanted to be one. the closest I came was when i tried out for the SEALS and wasnt able to complete it because of my eyesight. when that happened, i was like okay. no skin off my nose. i'll stick with working with the marines. and had a fucking blast doing it. even the injuries that ended my military career. i'd still do it.

And to be seriouis... you've done nothing but bitch and compalin and insult me every fucking chance you've gotten. it's a fucking game. i'm playing my character. tryiing to get the people under his command home alive. that stress caused him to rely on a subordinate to deliver his messages. yes that was abig mistake considering everything since she didn't do her job. and is now trying to take over the command.

If he was to pull the pins on the grenades when someone is holding a gun to his head, that is exactly what someone with a gun held to their head would do. especially when said soldier is unhinged and trying to take your command when youv'e not gotten anyone killed, and the one who has gotten people killed is leading the damn munity.

THAT is why GHOST couldn't e the one to relieve Master Sergeant of command. because she was the one in the wrong just as much as the Master Sergeant.
 
kikora said:
Making friends with someone who freaks out over everything is very hard. :S You started it with that one misunderstanding and it escalated from there, so just drop it and start over. Let your character be taken down and play him how you want.

No more jabs at him in posts, but no more changing his character either. Wait for your turn, and respond to everyone in the area you're in. There's no need to get so angry.

Uh... freaking out over everything? You're the one who freaked out first. and bitched first. and started slinging insults first. talk about the pot calling the kettle black.
 
kikora said:
http://www.springhole.net/quizzes/marysue.htm
For reference, this is the Mary-sue litmus test, I always use it with my characters to make sure I don't make Mary-sues.


Spake...I took the test for your character.... He didn't do too well.

holy shit that is alot of questions
 
Spake759 said:
kikora said:
Making friends with someone who freaks out over everything is very hard. :S You started it with that one misunderstanding and it escalated from there, so just drop it and start over. Let your character be taken down and play him how you want.

No more jabs at him in posts, but no more changing his character either. Wait for your turn, and respond to everyone in the area you're in. There's no need to get so angry.

Uh... freaking out over everything? You're the one who freaked out first. and bitched first. and started slinging insults first. talk about the pot calling the kettle black.
Actually, you turned the RPs mood black when everyone assumed we could hear you walking to Onica, and you forced me to change, re-change and re-re-change my characters post. Then when I did it, you still acted like an ass to me, and started regularly skipping my turns. That is why I got aggravated at you to begin with. Have I handled it well? No. But don't pin all this on me.



And Gary-sues are overly cliched or 'perfect' characters, not always characters just like yourself.
 
Onica said:
kikora said:
http://www.springhole.net/quizzes/marysue.htm
For reference, this is the Mary-sue litmus test, I always use it with my characters to make sure I don't make Mary-sues.


Spake...I took the test for your character.... He didn't do too well.

holy shit that is alot of questions
Yeah, but if you answer it all honestly it can help round out characters sooo well. XD By helping you realize where the chiches are, paticularly. Makes it so much more interesting too. ^^
 
kikora said:
Actually, you turned the RPs mood black when everyone assumed we could hear you walking to Onica, and you forced me to change, re-change and re-re-change my characters post. Then when I did it, you still acted like an ass to me, and started regularly skipping my turns. That is why I got aggravated at you to begin with. Have I handled it well? No. But don't pin all this on me.

And Gary-sues are overly cliched or 'perfect' characters, not always characters just like yourself.

No. You were acting as if you had heard everything they had said when they were talking. causing you to rewrite your posts. and i didn't act like and ass to you. i said that PLAYER KNOWLEDGE being used by Characters was a pet-peve. I didn't say you where the onlyone doing it. And I appoligized for skipping you, and even deleted posts when i did it.

And even if i was to take the test. he's not a fucking gary stew. he's far from it. because he's not perfect.
 
Everyone heard what you were saying, it was in EVERYONES post. You didn't make a fuss until mine. :S And you skipped me at least three times.

Whatever you say.... He scored over 60 when I put him through, that is classified as 'kill him with fire'.
 
Spake. Please? Move on? Or go offlinen to prepare for your VA meeting. That might be best..just my two cents.


And Kikora, I'd try it myself but I can't get through some of those questions because some of them just don't make sense to me when I try to do it for the char I plan to use here.
 
kikora said:
Everyone heard what you were saying, it was in EVERYONES post. You didn't make a fuss until mine. :S And you skipped me at least three times.

Whatever you say.... He scored over 60 when I put him through, that is classified as 'kill him with fire'.

how can you do my character? that's very asinine... because you don't know the charcter. really you don't. and i didn't make a fuss until i was able to read everyones post of things happening in a different room. because i didn't want to color what my character would know when making a post between Onica's character and my character.

When i got caught up. i made the post about EVERONE using Player knowledge.
 
Fuck....I was about to in roll everyone on the Jerry Springer Show....

"RPs gone WILD"
 
Oh and this is for AG

She is the only one that skipped the posting order and did it right.......*Throws a Party*

She quoted what she wanted to respond to...did a short post and left it like that.
 
I'm saying you did it right......its not an ass chewing. You did it, did not fuck up anyone's post and keep the story going.
 
I think we're waiting for Battleship to post. :S To push the story forward.



((And it's easy to drop something after you make sure to get the last word in Spake.))
 
((Slaps hands over kikora mouth))

I didn't hear anything did your....

(Drop it..K...be happy and RP))
 
Nope Skelace
Then Raden wants to be skipped for now
Then Me.


Okay Skelace is not one so my post. Going to fast forward some so our crazy friend can wake up and post KK?
 
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