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Rudolph Quin
Erotic Apocalypse Race Building
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3
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1,478
Rudolph Quin
Rudolph Quin
Mr. Sanderson
Forum based RPG combat system
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2
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1,220
Nihilistic_Impact
Nihilistic_Impact
D
I gots ideas and needs a place to puts them..
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1
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1,133
DoneWriting
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ImperatorK
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Some adult (erotic) suggestions ofr a D&D campaign/adventure?
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19
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10,692
As Day Fades
As Day Fades
Alvis Alendran
Modern Fantasy
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4
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1,552
Trygon
Trygon
KatarineMeow
Alice In Wünderland (world building help. Plot/storyline as well.)
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1
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1,179
Morlock
Morlock
WriteMood
Submission Calls
2
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33
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17,915
KatarineMeow
KatarineMeow
KatarineMeow
Alice In Wünderland (world building help. Plot/storyline as well.)
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0
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935
KatarineMeow
KatarineMeow
Zoophilian
Fallout-ish. (Need some feedback!)
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0
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996
Zoophilian
Zoophilian
Nihilistic_Impact
Flint Knapping a Setting
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3
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1,433
Nihilistic_Impact
Nihilistic_Impact
Yoshie
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*Help* A Little Too Close For Comfort
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17
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3,353
Ivory11
Ivory11
Dane Stalling
Smooth dialogue in RP?
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4
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1,408
Dane Stalling
Dane Stalling
T
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Expanding my writing
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0
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966
tigressofthenight
T
dev
Text Base Game
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0
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1,013
dev
dev
greg grey
Critiques please
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0
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1,048
greg grey
greg grey
T
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Plot-driven RP Help
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1
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1,132
☢☢Zombies Galore☢☢
☢
The Dungeon Master
Using Dice and Math in Forum-Based Role Play
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0
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976
The Dungeon Master
The Dungeon Master
Faelina
details,details,details..
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6
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1,756
Traveler
Traveler
ToXiCrAiNbOw
Help!
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3
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1,149
Dogged
D
Zim
Help! Need constructive criticism!
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13
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2,201
Zim
Zim
littlerooster
What makes a successful request thread?
2
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30
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5,694
Mr Quixotic
Mr Quixotic
Okabe
Need help for my writing.
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3
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1,236
Lindxi
Lindxi
darkangel76
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Interest Poll & Overview
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8
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3,313
littlerooster
littlerooster
Xanaphia
Critique Me (gently?)
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2
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1,119
Alan23
A
S
What am I doing wrong?
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9
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2,479
littlerooster
littlerooster
Mr Quixotic
Past tense?
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7
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1,711
Mr Quixotic
Mr Quixotic
CougarGirl
Who raped me?
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2
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1,268
littlerooster
littlerooster
Zero_Kyrael
Criticism please!
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9
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1,929
Zero_Kyrael
Zero_Kyrael
Squishypink
Nanowrimo and the best advice I ever heard
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2
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1,137
Squishypink
Squishypink
ThomasRHellsing
NaNoWriMo? WTF do I know? ((Beta request thread.))
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0
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925
ThomasRHellsing
ThomasRHellsing
V
Rate my Writing?
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11
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1,967
Vic Rattlehead
V
Dementia
Not Understanding.
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7
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1,682
amol
amol
MysticSparxman
Do My Roleplaying Skills Need Improving?
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4
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1,592
Mitsu
Mitsu
x~bloodandshadow~x
..
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0
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855
x~bloodandshadow~x
x~bloodandshadow~x
Firm Master
A few ideas to consider
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5
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1,989
littlerooster
littlerooster
The Lost Soul
My writting
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0
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916
The Lost Soul
The Lost Soul
J
Working Title: Dark Dragon (Need Help!!)
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0
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1,081
JayMatthews1125
J
I
I'm a bit worried...
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3
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1,304
angelduskgirlcat
angelduskgirlcat
WriteMood
Ask the Editor Day
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15
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2,720
WriteMood
WriteMood
Slimpies
storytelling
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1
Views
988
Crescent
Crescent
Yoshie
Making Good Better...
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9
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1,976
Yoshie
Yoshie
V
Care To Take A Look?
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0
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957
Vic Rattlehead
V
Inquisitor Lasengral
Idea for a WH40k Open Roleplay
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4
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1,568
Houndof Fenris
H
Sanoci
Assistance/Suggestions for a Half-Orc [D&D]
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0
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879
Sanoci
Sanoci
TheCloaked
Editing help wanted
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0
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955
TheCloaked
TheCloaked
D
Needing Monster Ideas
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0
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951
Djinbu
D
Rudolph Quin
Bullet Wound (a masochist's story)
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0
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956
Rudolph Quin
Rudolph Quin
S
Long time no see bmr!
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0
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967
suicidal butterfly
S
leestud
World building help- sci-fi in space [Group Help]
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3
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1,393
leestud
leestud
Mistress Legacy
I would like to know
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16
Views
3,125
Mistress Legacy
Mistress Legacy
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