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Want a second opinion or some constructive criticism on your writing style, Character and/or world? Here is the section where you can get just that! Flaming will NOT be tolerated.
xanaphia
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Writing Resources (Do Not Comment)
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xanaphia
xanaphia
darkangel76
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ConCrit & Idea Development Ettiquette
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0
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4,225
darkangel76
darkangel76
Motoharu
Faster Combat
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2
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66
Silverbird
Silverbird
BreezinBy
Feedback on my Thread
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18
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399
Laa
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WanderingBlackDragon
Need help sharpening my Edgelords
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7
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79
WanderingBlackDragon
WanderingBlackDragon
Malice_Nightshade
My poetry (i would love feed back)
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7
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88
hallucinate
hallucinate
ImaginationGoneWild
Gods at Play
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0
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32
ImaginationGoneWild
ImaginationGoneWild
Mr. Ross
Detailed Male into Smut, Story and Mature Women - looking for feedback on my thread!
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5
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170
Mr. Ross
Mr. Ross
HasturTheKing
General Request Thread Feedback
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3
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162
Birble
Birble
Arkwright
Thread Feedback! can someone tell me if my plan, and my characters, are believable?
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0
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100
Arkwright
Arkwright
SassySub
Seeking help with evolving some of my ideas
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1
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237
Arkwright
Arkwright
Bene
Thread help
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9
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129
Bene
Bene
C
What do you think of the 'stories' I put?
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5
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170
DigitalSiren
DigitalSiren
JennaThorne
Tell me what you think of my threads!
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10
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214
JennaThorne
JennaThorne
MissShelby
Need help summarizing an idea for my thread
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2
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179
MissShelby
MissShelby
Shiver
One quick tip to improve your thread's response rate
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25
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824
wolfeamongweeds
wolfeamongweeds
Andy French
Evaluate my thread
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11
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147
JennaThorne
JennaThorne
knockknock
What am I doing wrong?
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10
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188
Staine
Staine
The8thVirtue
Turning Smut Heavy Into Story
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2
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146
Gambuiness
Gambuiness
The Goodman
Need RT Help? Come on in. [CLOSED]
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5
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260
The Goodman
The Goodman
Exfuel
Need fresh minds to flush out a Dnd campaign
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11
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245
ShinseiDrayga
ShinseiDrayga
MythyDragonwolf
Working on a (mech-based) game-inspired setting for a story I want to make, comments appreciated! (ConCrit Edition)
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4
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137
Pazzo
Pazzo
Ser Issac of Clarke
Slaughterhouse Rulez!
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5
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249
Ser Issac of Clarke
Ser Issac of Clarke
MaximusDecimus
Good and realistic(-ish) incest ideas?
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37
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1,443
DukeJohn
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PC-98
A "Choose Your Own Adventure" Story?
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3
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135
PC-98
PC-98
AngryLambchops
Looking for critique on my request thread
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3
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140
AngryLambchops
AngryLambchops
AroDelta
In need of a fresh pair of eyes...
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4
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164
AroDelta
AroDelta
DominusSilvarum
Critique my request thread
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6
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233
DominusSilvarum
DominusSilvarum
ptarmigan
Erotic D&D Adventure input?
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12
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312
Shiver
Shiver
Tia Ruby
Luck based RP
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9
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250
Dirty Fingers
Dirty Fingers
ImaginationGoneWild
Skyrim fanfic idea - need opinions
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3
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213
Gina in Orange
Gina in Orange
JuneBuggy
Plot Samples?
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4
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272
JuneBuggy
JuneBuggy
Kaldor
help?
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22
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534
Kaldor
Kaldor
Chalarm
Ideas Workshop
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4
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280
Dirty Fingers
Dirty Fingers
AkityMH
Book 1 Terra Rough Draft 1
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7
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699
AkityMH
AkityMH
Caligula
Critique My F-List
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10
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380
Caligula
Caligula
taffy_felice
ConCrit on my Request thread
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3
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255
Dirty Fingers
Dirty Fingers
Fandomizer
Request Thread Critique?
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6
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205
Dirty Fingers
Dirty Fingers
47Haven
Need Some Help "Balancing" My Character
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5
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475
Jaredthefox92
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LordLicentious
Story Prompt Feedback
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5
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260
LordLicentious
LordLicentious
MissShelby
Seeking suggestions on improving RT appeal
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16
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597
Perversion
Perversion
BlackWingAngel
Communication!
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3
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482
skyfetcher
skyfetcher
ImaginationGoneWild
Wix website, and world-building.
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4
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802
skyfetcher
skyfetcher
JenivueGrimm
Need Some Outside Input
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0
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240
JenivueGrimm
JenivueGrimm
Arclight1988
Anime Fourm Character sheet... Help me create something!
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1
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238
Arclight1988
Arclight1988
Enjoytowrite
Critique on my Request thread
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2
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240
Shiver
Shiver
susan_haynes19
Need Some Feedback On My Request Thread
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6
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432
Dirty Fingers
Dirty Fingers
NCC17071
Mentally Unstable Characters
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9
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644
Amaranthine
Amaranthine
babyloveuwu
naruto shippuden AU help!
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0
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275
babyloveuwu
babyloveuwu
A
Expectations?
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9
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852
fakevacation
fakevacation
Eir
Random Prompts and Critiques with TaniMancer
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4
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468
Eir
Eir
Darklaz
The Return or The Homecoming (a work in progress)
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0
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301
Darklaz
Darklaz
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