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ConCrit & Idea Development

Want a second opinion or some constructive criticism on your writing style, Character and/or world? Here is the section where you can get just that! Flaming will NOT be tolerated.
xanaphia
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Writing Resources (Do Not Comment)
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6,915
xanaphia
xanaphia
darkangel76
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ConCrit & Idea Development Ettiquette
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0
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2,234
darkangel76
darkangel76
MissShelby
Seeking suggestions on improving RT appeal
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13
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154
MissShelby
MissShelby
LordLicentious
Story Prompt Feedback
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3
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53
skyfetcher
skyfetcher
AkityMH
Book 1 Terra Rough Draft 1
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7
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265
AkityMH
AkityMH
BlackWingAngel
Communication!
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3
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224
skyfetcher
skyfetcher
ImaginationGoneWild
Wix website, and world-building.
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4
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622
skyfetcher
skyfetcher
JenivueGrimm
Need Some Outside Input
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0
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97
JenivueGrimm
JenivueGrimm
Arclight1988
Anime Fourm Character sheet... Help me create something!
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1
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97
Arclight1988
Arclight1988
Enjoytowrite
Critique on my Request thread
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2
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107
Shiver
Shiver
susan_haynes19
Need Some Feedback On My Request Thread
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6
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219
Dirty Fingers
Dirty Fingers
NCC17071
Mentally Unstable Characters
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9
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416
Amaranthine
Amaranthine
babyloveuwu
naruto shippuden AU help!
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0
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128
babyloveuwu
babyloveuwu
A
Expectations?
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9
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579
fakevacation
fakevacation
Eir
Random Prompts and Critiques with TaniMancer
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4
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320
Eir
Eir
Darklaz
The Return or The Homecoming (a work in progress)
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0
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171
Darklaz
Darklaz
Complementarity
Lovecraftian worldbuilding intro: what do you think?
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2
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175
Saber Arturia
Saber Arturia
ImaginationGoneWild
Worldbuilder's Corner
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0
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200
ImaginationGoneWild
ImaginationGoneWild
D
Would anyone review a sex scene that I wrote? (virgin IRL)
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10
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743
stillsee420
stillsee420
G
Need some help with character building
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2
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260
tribulus_terrestris
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Elleinar
What is my Request missing?
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4
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270
Silverknight
Silverknight
deeperinmypower
Feedback on my request thread, please?
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3
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275
deeperinmypower
deeperinmypower
littlelilacs
Suggestions?
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2
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202
BloodRedRomeo
BloodRedRomeo
mypgems
Is my request any good?
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0
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167
mypgems
mypgems
Kiki
Exposition/plot dumps... best ways to try to front load information and lore early...
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0
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151
Kiki
Kiki
susan_haynes19
Can Anyone Suggest To Me A Real Good Taboo RP That Is On Here To Read?
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0
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201
susan_haynes19
susan_haynes19
xanaphia
Abandoned Openers
2
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29
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3,809
Deadsexy
Deadsexy
coldharlot
Request Criticism
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3
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238
coldharlot
coldharlot
Hawk887
Calling for an editor for Hawks old Nest
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2
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281
Dogged
Dogged
xanaphia
Writing Tips (Comments and Questions Welcome!)
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7
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587
HeyThereLittleBear
HeyThereLittleBear
MessedupRp
Troubles With World building
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9
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1,001
VerboseVillain
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Hisako-K
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In search of critics and editors
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4
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310
RedRose
RedRose
Squishypink
Cold Calls
2 3 4 5
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101
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13,188
Mela
Mela
K
If Resident Evil 2-3 was a porn
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0
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453
Kinginwaiting
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Cypherxk2
Feedback on my thread
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4
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2,043
Cypherxk2
Cypherxk2
Squishypink
Why so much god mode?
2
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32
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6,316
Emily Whierd
Emily Whierd
WarERPer
Idea of ERP-specific software.
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13
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1,268
cobaltglass
cobaltglass
ImaginationGoneWild
Which is more inviting? [closed]
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4
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1,074
mystictiger
mystictiger
Encryptment
Help give feedback to my threads
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4
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1,865
darkangel76
darkangel76
R
Looking for Feedback
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0
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653
RapeWorld
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Icelandic
So, let me ask. Is there anything I could do to improve these two threads?
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2
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596
SithLordOfSnark
SithLordOfSnark
MessedupRp
Writing Request Threads?
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3
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815
megyn
megyn
batman4560
Help me get better.
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24
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3,961
RedRose
RedRose
NSWAVR
Search Thread Review
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0
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351
NSWAVR
NSWAVR
N7 Minibit
Can't seem to keep a rp?
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3
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605
xanaphia
xanaphia
how_is_you
OC Development Assistance
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9
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828
how_is_you
how_is_you
C
Hi Ghost Recon Wildlands idea development (help needed)
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0
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341
christian7_41king
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littl3
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Writing Perspective
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3
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1,067
Squishypink
Squishypink
Rudolph Quin
Questions About Cars
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4
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969
bad girl
B
how_is_you
Request Thread Review
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2
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622
how_is_you
how_is_you
LR-Studios
I need some help to improve
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2
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692
LR-Studios
LR-Studios
Exfuel
Jumanji inspired game. All welcome to help create.
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0
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819
Exfuel
Exfuel
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