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ConCrit & Idea Development

Want a second opinion or some constructive criticism on your writing style, Character and/or world? Here is the section where you can get just that! Flaming will NOT be tolerated.
xanaphia
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Writing Resources (Do Not Comment)
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5,790
xanaphia
darkangel76
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ConCrit & Idea Development Ettiquette
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0
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1,584
darkangel76
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Would anyone review a sex scene that I wrote? (virgin IRL)
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6
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287
fiend
Elleinar
What is my Request missing?
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4
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96
Silverknight
deeperinmypower
Feedback on my request thread, please?
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3
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122
deeperinmypower
littlelilacs
Suggestions?
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2
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57
BloodRedRomeo
The Goodman
Your First Message
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4
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88
NadiatheTinkerer
mypgems
Is my request any good?
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0
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71
mypgems
Kiki
Exposition/plot dumps... best ways to try to front load information and lore early...
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0
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40
Kiki
romansoldier
Request Criticism
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0
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156
romansoldier
susan_haynes19
Can Anyone Suggest To Me A Real Good Taboo RP That Is On Here To Read?
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0
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122
susan_haynes19
xanaphia
Abandoned Openers
2
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29
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3,561
Deadsexy
coldharlot
Request Criticism
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3
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136
coldharlot
Hawk887
Calling for an editor for Hawks old Nest
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2
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206
Dogged
xanaphia
Writing Tips (Comments and Questions Welcome!)
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7
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490
HeyThereLittleBear
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Rate My Request
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6
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331
Esoterica
ImaginationGoneWild
Wix website, and world-building.
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3
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538
TorstenGa
MessedupRp
Troubles With World building
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9
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904
VerboseVillain
Hisako-K
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In search of critics and editors
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4
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217
RedRose
Squishypink
Cold Calls
2 3 4 5
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101
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12,719
Mela
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If Resident Evil 2-3 was a porn
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0
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383
Kinginwaiting
Cypherxk2
Feedback on my thread
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4
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1,953
Cypherxk2
Squishypink
Why so much god mode?
2
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32
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6,085
Emily Whierd
WarERPer
Idea of ERP-specific software.
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13
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1,188
cobaltglass
ImaginationGoneWild
Which is more inviting? [closed]
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4
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997
mystictiger
Encryptment
Help give feedback to my threads
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4
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1,779
darkangel76
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Looking for Feedback
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0
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600
RapeWorld
Icelandic
So, let me ask. Is there anything I could do to improve these two threads?
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2
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550
SithLordOfSnark
MessedupRp
Writing Request Threads?
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3
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740
megyn
batman4560
Help me get better.
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24
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3,886
RedRose
NSWAVR
Search Thread Review
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0
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302
NSWAVR
N7 Minibit
Can't seem to keep a rp?
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3
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539
xanaphia
how_is_you
OC Development Assistance
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9
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751
how_is_you
C
Hi Ghost Recon Wildlands idea development (help needed)
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0
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294
christian7_41king
littl3
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Writing Perspective
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3
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1,018
Squishypink
Rudolph Quin
Questions About Cars
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4
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904
bad girl
how_is_you
Request Thread Review
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2
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575
how_is_you
LR-Studios
I need some help to improve
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2
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635
LR-Studios
Exfuel
Jumanji inspired game. All welcome to help create.
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0
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743
Exfuel
Princess Pittooey
I need help with comma usage
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14
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1,655
Sleepingskill
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Developing characters for the DC Universe. If this is the wrong place; tell me
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0
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461
MoonWarlock
TameTheBlackNeko
Help improve my writing?
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1
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422
TameTheBlackNeko
Asphodel Terrarium
How to Further Dating Plot After Coitus
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7
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1,059
November
Subkitty
Blackmail ideas (F/F)
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2
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650
Subkitty
riahxoxo
let me bust your creative balls [brutal feedback thread]
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8
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1,663
riahxoxo
muscularguy4F
Need some advice - it's called THE PUSSY PASS
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4
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1,036
ice_clover
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Pokemon geneological idea development, or why human are
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7
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2,547
Absinthresher
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Time To Buy The Farm? (Help Topic)
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9
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1,582
Sheep_4
Sio
Rehab for Roleplayers
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2
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754
Hyatt
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Aesthetic Models
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0
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510
Drielle
Rainbow Party
(Delete This)
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2
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803
Princess Pittooey
bond007
ENJOY TO READ MYSTORYLINE BASED ON REALITY
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1
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671
Squishypink
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