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ConCrit & Idea Development

Want a second opinion or some constructive criticism on your writing style, Character and/or world? Here is the section where you can get just that! Flaming will NOT be tolerated.
xanaphia
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Writing Resources (Do Not Comment)
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xanaphia
xanaphia
darkangel76
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ConCrit & Idea Development Ettiquette
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0
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3,538
darkangel76
darkangel76
Shiver
One quick tip to improve your thread's response rate
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17
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218
dragonsen
dragonsen
The Goodman
Need RT Help? Come on in. [CLOSED]
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5
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134
The Goodman
The Goodman
Exfuel
Need fresh minds to flush out a Dnd campaign
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11
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148
ShinseiDrayga
ShinseiDrayga
SassySub
Seeking help with evolving some of my ideas
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0
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90
SassySub
SassySub
MythyDragonwolf
Working on a (mech-based) game-inspired setting for a story I want to make, comments appreciated! (ConCrit Edition)
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4
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61
Pazzo
Pazzo
Ser Issac of Clarke
Slaughterhouse Rulez!
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5
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179
Ser Issac of Clarke
Ser Issac of Clarke
MaximusDecimus
Good and realistic(-ish) incest ideas?
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37
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1,186
DukeJohn
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PC-98
A "Choose Your Own Adventure" Story?
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3
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71
PC-98
PC-98
AngryLambchops
Looking for critique on my request thread
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3
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79
AngryLambchops
AngryLambchops
AroDelta
In need of a fresh pair of eyes...
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4
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82
AroDelta
AroDelta
DominusSilvarum
Critique my request thread
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6
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155
DominusSilvarum
DominusSilvarum
ptarmigan
Erotic D&D Adventure input?
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12
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235
Shiver
Shiver
Tia Ruby
Luck based RP
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9
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170
Dirty Fingers
Dirty Fingers
ImaginationGoneWild
Skyrim fanfic idea - need opinions
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3
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159
Gina in Orange
Gina in Orange
JuneBuggy
Plot Samples?
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4
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202
JuneBuggy
JuneBuggy
Kaldor
help?
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22
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427
Kaldor
Kaldor
Chalarm
Ideas Workshop
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4
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206
Dirty Fingers
Dirty Fingers
AkityMH
Book 1 Terra Rough Draft 1
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7
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640
AkityMH
AkityMH
Caligula
Critique My F-List
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10
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268
Caligula
Caligula
taffy_felice
ConCrit on my Request thread
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3
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198
Dirty Fingers
Dirty Fingers
Fandomizer
Request Thread Critique?
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6
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137
Dirty Fingers
Dirty Fingers
47Haven
Need Some Help "Balancing" My Character
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5
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387
Jaredthefox92
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LordLicentious
Story Prompt Feedback
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5
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206
LordLicentious
LordLicentious
MissShelby
Seeking suggestions on improving RT appeal
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16
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519
Perversion
Perversion
BlackWingAngel
Communication!
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3
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406
skyfetcher
skyfetcher
ImaginationGoneWild
Wix website, and world-building.
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4
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730
skyfetcher
skyfetcher
JenivueGrimm
Need Some Outside Input
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0
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190
JenivueGrimm
JenivueGrimm
Arclight1988
Anime Fourm Character sheet... Help me create something!
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1
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181
Arclight1988
Arclight1988
Enjoytowrite
Critique on my Request thread
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2
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187
Shiver
Shiver
susan_haynes19
Need Some Feedback On My Request Thread
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6
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353
Dirty Fingers
Dirty Fingers
NCC17071
Mentally Unstable Characters
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9
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572
Amaranthine
Amaranthine
babyloveuwu
naruto shippuden AU help!
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0
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215
babyloveuwu
babyloveuwu
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Expectations?
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9
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746
fakevacation
fakevacation
Eir
Random Prompts and Critiques with TaniMancer
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4
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413
Eir
Eir
Darklaz
The Return or The Homecoming (a work in progress)
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0
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247
Darklaz
Darklaz
Complementarity
Lovecraftian worldbuilding intro: what do you think?
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2
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289
Saber Arturia
Saber Arturia
ImaginationGoneWild
Worldbuilder's Corner
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302
ImaginationGoneWild
ImaginationGoneWild
D
Would anyone review a sex scene that I wrote? (virgin IRL)
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10
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922
stillsee420
stillsee420
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Need some help with character building
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2
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369
tribulus_terrestris
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Elleinar
What is my Request missing?
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4
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363
Silverknight
Silverknight
deeperinmypower
Feedback on my request thread, please?
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3
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349
deeperinmypower
deeperinmypower
littlelilacs
Suggestions?
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2
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296
BloodRedRomeo
BloodRedRomeo
mypgems
Is my request any good?
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0
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234
mypgems
mypgems
Kiki
Exposition/plot dumps... best ways to try to front load information and lore early...
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0
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248
Kiki
Kiki
susan_haynes19
Can Anyone Suggest To Me A Real Good Taboo RP That Is On Here To Read?
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0
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268
susan_haynes19
susan_haynes19
xanaphia
Abandoned Openers
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29
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Deadsexy
Deadsexy
coldharlot
Request Criticism
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3
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321
coldharlot
coldharlot
Hawk887
Calling for an editor for Hawks old Nest
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2
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378
Dogged
Dogged
xanaphia
Writing Tips (Comments and Questions Welcome!)
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7
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695
HeyThereLittleBear
HeyThereLittleBear
MessedupRp
Troubles With World building
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9
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1,139
VerboseVillain
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