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ConCrit & Idea Development

Want a second opinion or some constructive criticism on your writing style, Character and/or world? Here is the section where you can get just that! Flaming will NOT be tolerated.
Xanaphia
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Writing Resources (Do Not Comment)
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10,021
Xanaphia
Xanaphia
darkangel76
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ConCrit & Idea Development Ettiquette
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0
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4,647
darkangel76
darkangel76
Silver Screen Fiend
I would appreciate some critiques on my request threads
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6
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159
Amortentia
Amortentia
WanderingBlackDragon
How does this RT look?
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3
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118
Lady Irony
Lady Irony
MythyDragonwolf
Help With Wargame RPs?
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0
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47
MythyDragonwolf
MythyDragonwolf
The8thVirtue
Some Constructive Criticism, Please?
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7
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217
The8thVirtue
The8thVirtue
Bluekrimzen
Making my content a broader spectrum
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8
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257
wuvixunu
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FallenHero
Criticism/Feedback for my RT
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5
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185
Lady Irony
Lady Irony
BreezinBy
Feedback on my Thread
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22
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840
Lady Irony
Lady Irony
MaximusDecimus
Good and realistic(-ish) incest ideas?
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39
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1,791
kckolbe
kckolbe
pyrofox1313
Request Thread Feedback
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5
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257
Lady Irony
Lady Irony
Motoharu
Faster Combat
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4
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215
Thufir Hawat
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MythyDragonwolf
Help for a Setting for RP and Stories?
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5
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119
Shiver
Shiver
Zazaz
Group RP idea, noob GM, send HELP!
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7
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174
Zazaz
Zazaz
Malice_Nightshade
My poetry (i would love feed back)
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7
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150
hallucinate
hallucinate
Mr. Ross
Detailed Male into Smut, Story and Mature Women - looking for feedback on my thread!
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5
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238
Mr. Ross
Mr. Ross
HasturTheKing
General Request Thread Feedback
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3
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194
Birble
Birble
Arkwright
Thread Feedback! can someone tell me if my plan, and my characters, are believable?
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0
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139
Arkwright
Arkwright
SassySub
Seeking help with evolving some of my ideas
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1
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273
Arkwright
Arkwright
Bene
Thread help
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9
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172
Bene
Bene
Cutie Pi
What do you think of the 'stories' I put?
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5
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211
DigitalSiren
DigitalSiren
JennaThorne
Tell me what you think of my threads!
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10
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256
JennaThorne
JennaThorne
MissShelby
Need help summarizing an idea for my thread
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2
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209
MissShelby
MissShelby
Shiver
One quick tip to improve your thread's response rate
2
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25
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942
wolfeamongweeds
wolfeamongweeds
Andy French
Evaluate my thread
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11
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205
JennaThorne
JennaThorne
knockknock
What am I doing wrong?
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10
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224
Staine
Staine
The8thVirtue
Turning Smut Heavy Into Story
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2
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172
Gambuiness
Gambuiness
Hrairoo
Need RT Help? Come on in. [CLOSED]
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5
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307
Hrairoo
Hrairoo
Exfuel
Need fresh minds to flush out a Dnd campaign
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11
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270
ShinseiDrayga
ShinseiDrayga
MythyDragonwolf
Working on a (mech-based) game-inspired setting for a story I want to make, comments appreciated! (ConCrit Edition)
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4
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165
Pazzo
Pazzo
Ser Issac of Clarke
Slaughterhouse Rulez!
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5
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287
Ser Issac of Clarke
Ser Issac of Clarke
PC-98
A "Choose Your Own Adventure" Story?
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3
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158
PC-98
PC-98
AngryLambchops
Looking for critique on my request thread
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3
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166
AngryLambchops
AngryLambchops
AroDelta
In need of a fresh pair of eyes...
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4
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204
AroDelta
AroDelta
DominusSilvarum
Critique my request thread
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6
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263
DominusSilvarum
DominusSilvarum
ptarmigan
Erotic D&D Adventure input?
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12
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348
Shiver
Shiver
Tia Ruby
Luck based RP
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9
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291
Dirty Fingers
Dirty Fingers
ImaginationGoneWild
Skyrim fanfic idea - need opinions
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3
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233
Gina in Orange
Gina in Orange
JuneBuggy
Plot Samples?
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4
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309
JuneBuggy
JuneBuggy
Kaldor
help?
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22
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595
Kaldor
Kaldor
Chalarm
Ideas Workshop
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4
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314
Dirty Fingers
Dirty Fingers
AkityMH
Book 1 Terra Rough Draft 1
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7
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723
AkityMH
AkityMH
Caligula
Critique My F-List
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10
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431
Caligula
Caligula
taffy_felice
ConCrit on my Request thread
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3
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286
Dirty Fingers
Dirty Fingers
47Haven
Need Some Help "Balancing" My Character
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5
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519
Jaredthefox92
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LordLicentious
Story Prompt Feedback
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5
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289
LordLicentious
LordLicentious
MissShelby
Seeking suggestions on improving RT appeal
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16
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644
Perversion
Perversion
BlackWingAngel
Communication!
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3
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511
skyfetcher
skyfetcher
ImaginationGoneWild
Wix website, and world-building.
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4
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831
skyfetcher
skyfetcher
JenivueGrimm
Need Some Outside Input
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0
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263
JenivueGrimm
JenivueGrimm
Arclight1988
Anime Fourm Character sheet... Help me create something!
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1
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265
Arclight1988
Arclight1988
Enjoytowrite
Critique on my Request thread
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2
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265
Shiver
Shiver
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