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Want a second opinion or some constructive criticism on your writing style, Character and/or world? Here is the section where you can get just that! Flaming will NOT be tolerated.
xanaphia
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Writing Resources (Do Not Comment)
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6,387
xanaphia
darkangel76
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ConCrit & Idea Development Ettiquette
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0
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1,808
darkangel76
Zenobia
My Characters
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1
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41
Zenobia
The Goodman
Your First Message
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10
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419
Victorian_Virtue
Achillea-mura
Expectations?
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7
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364
MaximusDecimus
Janaidian
Character board development
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0
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51
Janaidian
Eir
Random Prompts and Critiques with TaniMancer
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4
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207
Eir
Darklaz
The Return or The Homecoming (a work in progress)
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0
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100
Darklaz
Complementarity
Lovecraftian worldbuilding intro: what do you think?
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2
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102
Saber Arturia
ImaginationGoneWild
Worldbuilder's Corner
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0
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136
ImaginationGoneWild
D
Would anyone review a sex scene that I wrote? (virgin IRL)
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10
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639
stillsee420
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Need some help with character building
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2
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189
tribulus_terrestris
Elleinar
What is my Request missing?
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4
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226
Silverknight
deeperinmypower
Feedback on my request thread, please?
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3
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233
deeperinmypower
littlelilacs
Suggestions?
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2
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151
BloodRedRomeo
mypgems
Is my request any good?
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0
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134
mypgems
Kiki
Exposition/plot dumps... best ways to try to front load information and lore early...
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0
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98
Kiki
susan_haynes19
Can Anyone Suggest To Me A Real Good Taboo RP That Is On Here To Read?
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0
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173
susan_haynes19
xanaphia
Abandoned Openers
2
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29
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3,713
Deadsexy
coldharlot
Request Criticism
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3
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194
coldharlot
Hawk887
Calling for an editor for Hawks old Nest
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2
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247
Dogged
xanaphia
Writing Tips (Comments and Questions Welcome!)
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7
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552
HeyThereLittleBear
ImaginationGoneWild
Wix website, and world-building.
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3
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571
TorstenGa
MessedupRp
Troubles With World building
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9
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960
VerboseVillain
Hisako-K
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In search of critics and editors
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4
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267
RedRose
Squishypink
Cold Calls
2 3 4 5
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101
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13,003
Mela
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If Resident Evil 2-3 was a porn
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0
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417
Kinginwaiting
Cypherxk2
Feedback on my thread
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4
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2,003
Cypherxk2
Squishypink
Why so much god mode?
2
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32
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6,218
Emily Whierd
WarERPer
Idea of ERP-specific software.
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13
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1,227
cobaltglass
ImaginationGoneWild
Which is more inviting? [closed]
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4
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1,040
mystictiger
Encryptment
Help give feedback to my threads
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4
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1,828
darkangel76
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Looking for Feedback
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0
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633
RapeWorld
Icelandic
So, let me ask. Is there anything I could do to improve these two threads?
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2
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579
SithLordOfSnark
MessedupRp
Writing Request Threads?
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3
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782
megyn
batman4560
Help me get better.
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24
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3,923
RedRose
NSWAVR
Search Thread Review
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0
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331
NSWAVR
N7 Minibit
Can't seem to keep a rp?
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3
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578
xanaphia
how_is_you
OC Development Assistance
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9
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791
how_is_you
C
Hi Ghost Recon Wildlands idea development (help needed)
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0
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323
christian7_41king
littl3
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Writing Perspective
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3
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1,046
Squishypink
Rudolph Quin
Questions About Cars
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4
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942
bad girl
how_is_you
Request Thread Review
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2
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601
how_is_you
LR-Studios
I need some help to improve
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2
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667
LR-Studios
Exfuel
Jumanji inspired game. All welcome to help create.
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0
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788
Exfuel
Princess Pittooey
I need help with comma usage
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14
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1,694
Sleepingskill
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Developing characters for the DC Universe. If this is the wrong place; tell me
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0
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490
MoonWarlock
TameTheBlackNeko
Help improve my writing?
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1
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449
TameTheBlackNeko
Asphodel Terrarium
How to Further Dating Plot After Coitus
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7
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1,102
November
Subkitty
Blackmail ideas (F/F)
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2
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697
Subkitty
riahxoxo
let me bust your creative balls [brutal feedback thread]
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8
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1,708
riahxoxo
muscularguy4F
Need some advice - it's called THE PUSSY PASS
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4
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1,088
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