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xanaphia
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Writing Resources (Do Not Comment)
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6,024
xanaphia
darkangel76
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ConCrit & Idea Development Ettiquette
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0
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1,621
darkangel76
Achillea-mura
Expectations?
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6
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91
t-mase
ImaginationGoneWild
Worldbuilder's Corner
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0
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58
ImaginationGoneWild
D
Would anyone review a sex scene that I wrote? (virgin IRL)
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10
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547
stillsee420
Dragon42
Workshopping request
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0
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128
Dragon42
G
Need some help with character building
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2
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112
tribulus_terrestris
Elleinar
What is my Request missing?
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4
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149
Silverknight
deeperinmypower
Feedback on my request thread, please?
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3
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171
deeperinmypower
littlelilacs
Suggestions?
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2
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96
BloodRedRomeo
The Goodman
Your First Message
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4
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156
NadiatheTinkerer
mypgems
Is my request any good?
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0
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111
mypgems
Kiki
Exposition/plot dumps... best ways to try to front load information and lore early...
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0
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78
Kiki
susan_haynes19
Can Anyone Suggest To Me A Real Good Taboo RP That Is On Here To Read?
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0
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158
susan_haynes19
xanaphia
Abandoned Openers
2
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29
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3,650
Deadsexy
coldharlot
Request Criticism
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3
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176
coldharlot
Hawk887
Calling for an editor for Hawks old Nest
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2
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231
Dogged
xanaphia
Writing Tips (Comments and Questions Welcome!)
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7
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529
HeyThereLittleBear
ImaginationGoneWild
Wix website, and world-building.
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3
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558
TorstenGa
MessedupRp
Troubles With World building
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9
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938
VerboseVillain
Hisako-K
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In search of critics and editors
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4
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245
RedRose
Squishypink
Cold Calls
2 3 4 5
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101
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12,890
Mela
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If Resident Evil 2-3 was a porn
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0
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400
Kinginwaiting
Cypherxk2
Feedback on my thread
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4
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1,984
Cypherxk2
Squishypink
Why so much god mode?
2
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32
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6,160
Emily Whierd
WarERPer
Idea of ERP-specific software.
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13
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1,212
cobaltglass
ImaginationGoneWild
Which is more inviting? [closed]
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4
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1,025
mystictiger
Encryptment
Help give feedback to my threads
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4
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1,812
darkangel76
R
Looking for Feedback
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0
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616
RapeWorld
Icelandic
So, let me ask. Is there anything I could do to improve these two threads?
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2
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568
SithLordOfSnark
MessedupRp
Writing Request Threads?
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3
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760
megyn
batman4560
Help me get better.
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24
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3,910
RedRose
NSWAVR
Search Thread Review
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0
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318
NSWAVR
N7 Minibit
Can't seem to keep a rp?
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3
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565
xanaphia
how_is_you
OC Development Assistance
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9
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774
how_is_you
C
Hi Ghost Recon Wildlands idea development (help needed)
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0
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314
christian7_41king
littl3
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Writing Perspective
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3
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1,038
Squishypink
Rudolph Quin
Questions About Cars
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4
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929
bad girl
how_is_you
Request Thread Review
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2
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591
how_is_you
LR-Studios
I need some help to improve
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2
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655
LR-Studios
Exfuel
Jumanji inspired game. All welcome to help create.
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0
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766
Exfuel
Princess Pittooey
I need help with comma usage
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14
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1,678
Sleepingskill
M
Developing characters for the DC Universe. If this is the wrong place; tell me
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0
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479
MoonWarlock
TameTheBlackNeko
Help improve my writing?
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1
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437
TameTheBlackNeko
Asphodel Terrarium
How to Further Dating Plot After Coitus
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7
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1,084
November
Subkitty
Blackmail ideas (F/F)
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2
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671
Subkitty
riahxoxo
let me bust your creative balls [brutal feedback thread]
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8
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1,688
riahxoxo
muscularguy4F
Need some advice - it's called THE PUSSY PASS
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4
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1,066
ice_clover
L
Pokemon geneological idea development, or why human are
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7
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2,572
Absinthresher
S
Time To Buy The Farm? (Help Topic)
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9
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1,608
Sheep_4
Sio
Rehab for Roleplayers
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2
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774
Hyatt
D
Aesthetic Models
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0
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533
Drielle
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