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Want a second opinion or some constructive criticism on your writing style, Character and/or world? Here is the section where you can get just that! Flaming will NOT be tolerated.
Xanaphia
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Writing Resources (Do Not Comment)
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15,376
Xanaphia
Xanaphia
darkangel76
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ConCrit & Idea Development Ettiquette
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0
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7,843
darkangel76
darkangel76
Caligula
Need a third opinion here
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7
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188
Cosmic Witch
Cosmic Witch
Victoria Black
Request Thread Critique (Please and Thank You)
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10
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197
Victoria Black
Victoria Black
Archmagos Issac
The Mortician's Assistant
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0
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196
Archmagos Issac
Archmagos Issac
Sato
Please help with my character design!
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3
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460
Kiki
Kiki
SassySub
Storywriting help requested :)
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3
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249
Doctor Manhattan
Doctor Manhattan
The Abusive Dominator
In your opinion, what do you think is a good, go-to format for request threads?
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7
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352
Saiya
Saiya
Vidar
Help with my request thread
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9
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227
Vidar
Vidar
Valndrisa
What do you guys think? Is this good?
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6
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294
Valndrisa
Valndrisa
Sato
Help with my Request Thread (Constructive Criticism)
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5
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205
Doctor Manhattan
Doctor Manhattan
Annaamarth
Starting an [NSFW] off-site writing transcription journal
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3
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132
Doctor Manhattan
Doctor Manhattan
MegumiTheFertile
Help on finding inspiration
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5
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284
Doctor Manhattan
Doctor Manhattan
Archmagos Issac
Request Thread Critique
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7
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145
Archmagos Issac
Archmagos Issac
Triss Merigold
Compulsive character creation help needed!
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5
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347
Triss Merigold
Triss Merigold
GarrusVakarian2869
Assistance with thread
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2
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244
Retrojapan
Retrojapan
Breezi
Feedback on this Specific Plot
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2
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349
Fairess
Fairess
JustaPan
Request Thread Help? (Please and Thank You!)
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6
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393
JustaPan
JustaPan
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Need help with DC character creation and refinement. (This was posted back in 2016, under my old name)
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2
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315
DancingKing2
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AMurderOfCrows
Request thread feedback
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2
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368
bobmarleys32299
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Yusuke
Character Naming?
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23
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963
Triss Merigold
Triss Merigold
comicwolf
How to improve
2
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25
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1,419
Siph
Siph
Rhys Cronquist
Idea's For Rune-Magic
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0
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131
Rhys Cronquist
Rhys Cronquist
Max the Neat
Good and realistic(-ish) incest ideas?
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73
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9,914
Kelious
Kelious
Adronitis
Constructive criticism (Request thread)
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4
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416
Arkane
Arkane
CatScrezatio
Need Help Getting My Ideas Under Control
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4
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524
Bottle
Bottle
Canonfan
Fandom request thread help.
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3
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488
CherryGlazerr
CherryGlazerr
knockknock
What's a Guy Got to do? ( Request Thread Help)
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4
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343
CherryGlazerr
CherryGlazerr
Silver Screen Fiend
Superhero Thread Feedback
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3
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432
Ahlanna
Ahlanna
Sekah
Help with Request Threads.
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5
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451
Sekah
Sekah
count together
newbie request thread feedback
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6
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388
Island Gwen
Island Gwen
Yusuke
How To Write Good Filler?
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11
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503
Saiya
Saiya
johngold
Hot in the Streets?
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0
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184
johngold
johngold
Breezi
Feedback on my Thread
2
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39
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2,841
Breezi
Breezi
komasan95
Looking to improve.
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5
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226
LordFlashheart
LordFlashheart
WanderingBlackDragon
The use of extras in 1x1 roleplays
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3
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352
LordFlashheart
LordFlashheart
Missulena
Opener Crit
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7
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382
Missulena
Missulena
Amoria
RP Sample Critiques
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5
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342
Amoria
Amoria
Canonfan
Hey, are my threads alright?
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5
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667
Black Magic
Black Magic
Adronitis
Critique my post
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2
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332
Adronitis
Adronitis
Zprimal
Requesting feedback!
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2
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312
ƒeral
ƒeral
Jessu1222
Any hot and unique, ideas for an Interracial ntr comic
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1
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365
Light-Fox
Light-Fox
Aqua_Star
Feedback on The Finest Adventure
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0
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331
Aqua_Star
Aqua_Star
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Feedback on My Kobold
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4
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322
Sync
Sync
Sync
Feedback thread: The Adventure of a Paladin
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10
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1,004
Sync
Sync
FallenHero
Would I have better success if I were to split my RT in two?
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3
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414
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pixel.
Carefree_Snake
Review My Thread Too? (Warning. Niche Content)
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10
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417
Carefree_Snake
Carefree_Snake
MrNyarlathotep
Request thread feedback
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1
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325
Xanax
Xanax
Nautical
A space pirate, by all means- [ Looking for inspiration and input! Ask me questions! ]
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1
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314
Nautical
Nautical
HasturTheKing
Request Thread feedback
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1
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246
Agnes
Agnes
TheDecker
Looking for some constructive ideas on how I can build my world.
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4
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468
TheDecker
TheDecker
BunDance
Feedback on my thread too please!
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3
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426
TheDecker
TheDecker
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