Menu
Forums
New posts
Log in
Register
What's new
New posts
Menu
Log in
Register
Your support makes Blue Moon possible (Patreon)
Forums
Out Of Character
JavaScript is disabled. For a better experience, please enable JavaScript in your browser before proceeding.
ConCrit & Idea Development
Want a second opinion or some constructive criticism on your writing style, Character and/or world? Here is the section where you can get just that! Flaming will NOT be tolerated.
1
2
3
4
5
Next
1 of 5
Go to page
Go
Next
Last
Filters
Show only:
Loading…
Sticky
Writing Resources (Do Not Comment)
xanaphia
Jul 6, 2016
Replies
3
Views
9,329
Jun 25, 2017
xanaphia
Locked
Sticky
ConCrit & Idea Development Ettiquette
darkangel76
Jan 5, 2011
Replies
0
Views
4,225
Jan 5, 2011
darkangel76
Faster Combat
Motoharu
Jan 3, 2021
Replies
2
Views
66
Monday at 6:19 AM
Silverbird
Feedback on my Thread
BreezinBy
Sep 4, 2020
Replies
18
Views
399
Jan 4, 2021
Laa
L
Need help sharpening my Edgelords
WanderingBlackDragon
Dec 18, 2020
Replies
7
Views
79
Jan 3, 2021
WanderingBlackDragon
My poetry (i would love feed back)
Malice_Nightshade
Dec 11, 2020
Replies
7
Views
88
Dec 29, 2020
hallucinate
Gods at Play
ImaginationGoneWild
Dec 18, 2020
Replies
0
Views
32
Dec 18, 2020
ImaginationGoneWild
Detailed Male into Smut, Story and Mature Women - looking for feedback on my thread!
Mr. Ross
Nov 19, 2020
Replies
5
Views
170
Dec 11, 2020
Mr. Ross
General Request Thread Feedback
HasturTheKing
Oct 26, 2020
Replies
3
Views
162
Oct 29, 2020
Birble
Thread Feedback! can someone tell me if my plan, and my characters, are believable?
Arkwright
Oct 24, 2020
Replies
0
Views
100
Oct 24, 2020
Arkwright
Seeking help with evolving some of my ideas
SassySub
Jun 8, 2020
Replies
1
Views
237
Oct 23, 2020
Arkwright
Thread help
Bene
Oct 14, 2020
Replies
9
Views
129
Oct 15, 2020
Bene
C
What do you think of the 'stories' I put?
Cutie Pi
Oct 3, 2020
Replies
5
Views
170
Oct 6, 2020
DigitalSiren
Tell me what you think of my threads!
JennaThorne
Sep 26, 2020
Replies
10
Views
214
Sep 28, 2020
JennaThorne
Need help summarizing an idea for my thread
MissShelby
Sep 9, 2020
Replies
2
Views
179
Sep 9, 2020
MissShelby
One quick tip to improve your thread's response rate
Shiver
Jun 22, 2020
2
Replies
25
Views
824
Sep 2, 2020
wolfeamongweeds
Evaluate my thread
Andy French
Aug 29, 2020
Replies
11
Views
147
Aug 31, 2020
JennaThorne
What am I doing wrong?
knockknock
Aug 18, 2020
Replies
10
Views
188
Aug 21, 2020
Staine
Turning Smut Heavy Into Story
The8thVirtue
Jul 29, 2020
Replies
2
Views
146
Jul 30, 2020
Gambuiness
Need RT Help? Come on in. [CLOSED]
The Goodman
May 27, 2020
Replies
5
Views
260
Jun 20, 2020
The Goodman
Need fresh minds to flush out a Dnd campaign
Exfuel
May 10, 2020
Replies
11
Views
245
Jun 18, 2020
ShinseiDrayga
Working on a (mech-based) game-inspired setting for a story I want to make, comments appreciated! (ConCrit Edition)
MythyDragonwolf
Jun 4, 2020
Replies
4
Views
137
Jun 8, 2020
Pazzo
Slaughterhouse Rulez!
Ser Issac of Clarke
May 11, 2020
Replies
5
Views
249
May 16, 2020
Ser Issac of Clarke
Good and realistic(-ish) incest ideas?
MaximusDecimus
Nov 11, 2019
2
Replies
37
Views
1,443
May 14, 2020
DukeJohn
D
A "Choose Your Own Adventure" Story?
PC-98
May 8, 2020
Replies
3
Views
135
May 9, 2020
PC-98
Looking for critique on my request thread
AngryLambchops
May 8, 2020
Replies
3
Views
140
May 8, 2020
AngryLambchops
In need of a fresh pair of eyes...
AroDelta
May 3, 2020
Replies
4
Views
164
May 3, 2020
AroDelta
Critique my request thread
DominusSilvarum
Apr 22, 2020
Replies
6
Views
233
Apr 23, 2020
DominusSilvarum
Erotic D&D Adventure input?
ptarmigan
Apr 7, 2020
Replies
12
Views
312
Apr 18, 2020
Shiver
Luck based RP
Tia Ruby
Mar 10, 2020
Replies
9
Views
250
Apr 7, 2020
Dirty Fingers
Skyrim fanfic idea - need opinions
ImaginationGoneWild
Mar 6, 2020
Replies
3
Views
213
Apr 4, 2020
Gina in Orange
Plot Samples?
JuneBuggy
Mar 21, 2020
Replies
4
Views
272
Mar 21, 2020
JuneBuggy
help?
Kaldor
Jan 28, 2020
Replies
22
Views
534
Jan 28, 2020
Kaldor
Ideas Workshop
Chalarm
Jan 22, 2020
Replies
4
Views
280
Jan 28, 2020
Dirty Fingers
Book 1 Terra Rough Draft 1
AkityMH
Aug 26, 2019
Replies
7
Views
699
Nov 21, 2019
AkityMH
Critique My F-List
Caligula
Nov 19, 2019
Replies
10
Views
380
Nov 20, 2019
Caligula
ConCrit on my Request thread
taffy_felice
Nov 8, 2019
Replies
3
Views
255
Nov 8, 2019
Dirty Fingers
Request Thread Critique?
Fandomizer
Nov 7, 2019
Replies
6
Views
205
Nov 8, 2019
Dirty Fingers
Need Some Help "Balancing" My Character
47Haven
Oct 24, 2019
Replies
5
Views
475
Nov 1, 2019
Jaredthefox92
J
Story Prompt Feedback
LordLicentious
Oct 2, 2019
Replies
5
Views
260
Oct 24, 2019
LordLicentious
Seeking suggestions on improving RT appeal
MissShelby
Oct 1, 2019
Replies
16
Views
597
Oct 22, 2019
Perversion
Communication!
BlackWingAngel
Jul 27, 2019
Replies
3
Views
482
Sep 19, 2019
skyfetcher
Wix website, and world-building.
ImaginationGoneWild
Feb 5, 2018
Replies
4
Views
802
Sep 19, 2019
skyfetcher
Need Some Outside Input
JenivueGrimm
Sep 12, 2019
Replies
0
Views
240
Sep 12, 2019
JenivueGrimm
Anime Fourm Character sheet... Help me create something!
Arclight1988
Sep 8, 2019
Replies
1
Views
238
Sep 8, 2019
Arclight1988
Critique on my Request thread
Enjoytowrite
Aug 22, 2019
Replies
2
Views
240
Aug 24, 2019
Shiver
Need Some Feedback On My Request Thread
susan_haynes19
Aug 11, 2019
Replies
6
Views
432
Aug 14, 2019
Dirty Fingers
Mentally Unstable Characters
NCC17071
Jun 24, 2019
Replies
9
Views
644
Aug 13, 2019
Amaranthine
naruto shippuden AU help!
babyloveuwu
Aug 4, 2019
Replies
0
Views
275
Aug 4, 2019
babyloveuwu
A
Expectations?
Achillea-mura
Apr 16, 2019
Replies
9
Views
852
Jun 30, 2019
fakevacation
Random Prompts and Critiques with TaniMancer
Eir
May 2, 2019
Replies
4
Views
468
May 13, 2019
Eir
The Return or The Homecoming (a work in progress)
Darklaz
Apr 26, 2019
Replies
0
Views
301
Apr 26, 2019
Darklaz
1
2
3
4
5
Next
1 of 5
Go to page
Go
Next
Last
You must log in or register to post here.
Forums
Out Of Character
Top
Bottom