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ConCrit & Idea Development

Want a second opinion or some constructive criticism on your writing style, Character and/or world? Here is the section where you can get just that! Flaming will NOT be tolerated.
xanaphia
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Writing Resources (Do Not Comment)
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7,237
xanaphia
xanaphia
darkangel76
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ConCrit & Idea Development Ettiquette
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0
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2,515
darkangel76
darkangel76
MaximusDecimus
Good and realistic(-ish) incest ideas?
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21
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191
Eros Arrows
Eros Arrows
AkityMH
Book 1 Terra Rough Draft 1
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8
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426
AkityMH
AkityMH
Caligula
Critique My F-List
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10
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75
Caligula
Caligula
taffy_felice
ConCrit on my Request thread
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3
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98
Dirty Fingers
Dirty Fingers
Fandomizer
Request Thread Critique?
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6
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63
Dirty Fingers
Dirty Fingers
NerdyValk
RT peer Review
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1
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45
east
east
47Haven
Need Some Help "Balancing" My Character
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5
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253
Jaredthefox92
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LordLicentious
Story Prompt Feedback
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5
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129
LordLicentious
LordLicentious
MissShelby
Seeking suggestions on improving RT appeal
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16
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395
Perversion
Perversion
BlackWingAngel
Communication!
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3
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270
skyfetcher
skyfetcher
ImaginationGoneWild
Wix website, and world-building.
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4
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647
skyfetcher
skyfetcher
JenivueGrimm
Need Some Outside Input
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0
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119
JenivueGrimm
JenivueGrimm
Arclight1988
Anime Fourm Character sheet... Help me create something!
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1
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115
Arclight1988
Arclight1988
Enjoytowrite
Critique on my Request thread
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2
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123
Shiver
Shiver
susan_haynes19
Need Some Feedback On My Request Thread
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6
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255
Dirty Fingers
Dirty Fingers
NCC17071
Mentally Unstable Characters
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9
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455
Amaranthine
Amaranthine
babyloveuwu
naruto shippuden AU help!
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0
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142
babyloveuwu
babyloveuwu
A
Expectations?
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9
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613
fakevacation
fakevacation
Eir
Random Prompts and Critiques with TaniMancer
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4
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338
Eir
Eir
Darklaz
The Return or The Homecoming (a work in progress)
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0
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182
Darklaz
Darklaz
Complementarity
Lovecraftian worldbuilding intro: what do you think?
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2
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201
Saber Arturia
Saber Arturia
ImaginationGoneWild
Worldbuilder's Corner
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0
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226
ImaginationGoneWild
ImaginationGoneWild
D
Would anyone review a sex scene that I wrote? (virgin IRL)
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10
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787
stillsee420
stillsee420
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Need some help with character building
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2
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286
tribulus_terrestris
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Elleinar
What is my Request missing?
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4
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299
Silverknight
Silverknight
deeperinmypower
Feedback on my request thread, please?
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3
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295
deeperinmypower
deeperinmypower
littlelilacs
Suggestions?
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2
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226
BloodRedRomeo
BloodRedRomeo
mypgems
Is my request any good?
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0
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180
mypgems
mypgems
Kiki
Exposition/plot dumps... best ways to try to front load information and lore early...
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0
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168
Kiki
Kiki
susan_haynes19
Can Anyone Suggest To Me A Real Good Taboo RP That Is On Here To Read?
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0
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216
susan_haynes19
susan_haynes19
xanaphia
Abandoned Openers
2
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29
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3,885
Deadsexy
Deadsexy
coldharlot
Request Criticism
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3
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257
coldharlot
coldharlot
Hawk887
Calling for an editor for Hawks old Nest
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2
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295
Dogged
Dogged
xanaphia
Writing Tips (Comments and Questions Welcome!)
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7
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621
HeyThereLittleBear
HeyThereLittleBear
MessedupRp
Troubles With World building
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9
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1,035
VerboseVillain
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Hisako-K
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In search of critics and editors
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4
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336
RedRose
RedRose
Squishypink
Cold Calls
2 3 4 5
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101
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13,389
Mela
Mela
Cypherxk2
Feedback on my thread
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4
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2,065
Cypherxk2
Cypherxk2
Squishypink
Why so much god mode?
2
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32
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6,392
Emily Whierd
Emily Whierd
WarERPer
Idea of ERP-specific software.
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13
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1,298
cobaltglass
cobaltglass
ImaginationGoneWild
Which is more inviting? [closed]
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4
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1,092
mystictiger
mystictiger
Encryptment
Help give feedback to my threads
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4
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1,886
darkangel76
darkangel76
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Looking for Feedback
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0
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668
RapeWorld
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Icelandic
So, let me ask. Is there anything I could do to improve these two threads?
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2
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610
SithLordOfSnark
SithLordOfSnark
MessedupRp
Writing Request Threads?
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3
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832
megyn
megyn
batman4560
Help me get better.
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24
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4,009
RedRose
RedRose
NSWAVR
Search Thread Review
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0
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364
NSWAVR
NSWAVR
N7 Minibit
Can't seem to keep a rp?
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3
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618
xanaphia
xanaphia
how_is_you
OC Development Assistance
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9
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853
how_is_you
how_is_you
C
Hi Ghost Recon Wildlands idea development (help needed)
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0
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354
christian7_41king
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