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Want a second opinion or some constructive criticism on your writing style, Character and/or world? Here is the section where you can get just that! Flaming will NOT be tolerated.
xanaphia
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Writing Resources (Do Not Comment)
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6,678
xanaphia
xanaphia
darkangel76
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ConCrit & Idea Development Ettiquette
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0
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2,034
darkangel76
darkangel76
susan_haynes19
Need Some Feedback On My Request Thread
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6
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81
Dirty Fingers
Dirty Fingers
NCC17071
Mentally Unstable Characters
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9
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336
Amaranthine
Amaranthine
Janaidian
Character board development
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1
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146
Gargmentus
Gargmentus
babyloveuwu
naruto shippuden AU help!
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0
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70
babyloveuwu
babyloveuwu
BlackWingAngel
Communication!
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2
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108
Dirty Fingers
Dirty Fingers
Achillea-mura
Expectations?
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9
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517
fakevacation
fakevacation
Eir
Random Prompts and Critiques with TaniMancer
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4
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278
Eir
Eir
Darklaz
The Return or The Homecoming (a work in progress)
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0
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157
Darklaz
Darklaz
Complementarity
Lovecraftian worldbuilding intro: what do you think?
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2
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161
Saber Arturia
Saber Arturia
ImaginationGoneWild
Worldbuilder's Corner
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0
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183
ImaginationGoneWild
ImaginationGoneWild
D
Would anyone review a sex scene that I wrote? (virgin IRL)
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10
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711
stillsee420
stillsee420
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Need some help with character building
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2
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232
tribulus_terrestris
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Elleinar
What is my Request missing?
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4
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252
Silverknight
Silverknight
deeperinmypower
Feedback on my request thread, please?
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3
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249
deeperinmypower
deeperinmypower
littlelilacs
Suggestions?
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2
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181
BloodRedRomeo
BloodRedRomeo
mypgems
Is my request any good?
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0
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152
mypgems
mypgems
Kiki
Exposition/plot dumps... best ways to try to front load information and lore early...
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0
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128
Kiki
Kiki
susan_haynes19
Can Anyone Suggest To Me A Real Good Taboo RP That Is On Here To Read?
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0
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188
susan_haynes19
susan_haynes19
xanaphia
Abandoned Openers
2
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29
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3,762
Deadsexy
Deadsexy
coldharlot
Request Criticism
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3
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213
coldharlot
coldharlot
Hawk887
Calling for an editor for Hawks old Nest
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2
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266
Dogged
Dogged
xanaphia
Writing Tips (Comments and Questions Welcome!)
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7
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570
HeyThereLittleBear
HeyThereLittleBear
ImaginationGoneWild
Wix website, and world-building.
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3
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584
TorstenGa
TorstenGa
MessedupRp
Troubles With World building
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9
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984
VerboseVillain
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Hisako-K
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In search of critics and editors
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4
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294
RedRose
RedRose
Squishypink
Cold Calls
2 3 4 5
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101
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13,111
Mela
Mela
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If Resident Evil 2-3 was a porn
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0
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438
Kinginwaiting
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Cypherxk2
Feedback on my thread
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4
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2,024
Cypherxk2
Cypherxk2
Squishypink
Why so much god mode?
2
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32
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6,266
Emily Whierd
Emily Whierd
WarERPer
Idea of ERP-specific software.
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13
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1,249
cobaltglass
cobaltglass
ImaginationGoneWild
Which is more inviting? [closed]
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4
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1,057
mystictiger
mystictiger
Encryptment
Help give feedback to my threads
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4
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1,853
darkangel76
darkangel76
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Looking for Feedback
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0
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644
RapeWorld
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Icelandic
So, let me ask. Is there anything I could do to improve these two threads?
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2
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589
SithLordOfSnark
SithLordOfSnark
MessedupRp
Writing Request Threads?
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3
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802
megyn
megyn
batman4560
Help me get better.
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24
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3,949
RedRose
RedRose
NSWAVR
Search Thread Review
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0
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340
NSWAVR
NSWAVR
N7 Minibit
Can't seem to keep a rp?
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3
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596
xanaphia
xanaphia
how_is_you
OC Development Assistance
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9
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814
how_is_you
how_is_you
C
Hi Ghost Recon Wildlands idea development (help needed)
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0
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334
christian7_41king
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littl3
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Writing Perspective
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3
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1,060
Squishypink
Squishypink
Rudolph Quin
Questions About Cars
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4
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958
bad girl
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how_is_you
Request Thread Review
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2
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614
how_is_you
how_is_you
LR-Studios
I need some help to improve
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2
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680
LR-Studios
LR-Studios
Exfuel
Jumanji inspired game. All welcome to help create.
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0
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804
Exfuel
Exfuel
Princess Pittooey
I need help with comma usage
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14
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1,717
Sleepingskill
Sleepingskill
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Developing characters for the DC Universe. If this is the wrong place; tell me
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0
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507
MoonWarlock
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TameTheBlackNeko
Help improve my writing?
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1
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463
TameTheBlackNeko
TameTheBlackNeko
Asphodel Terrarium
How to Further Dating Plot After Coitus
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7
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1,124
November
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Subkitty
Blackmail ideas (F/F)
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2
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729
Subkitty
Subkitty
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