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Welcome to the Feedback thread for my second solo story, The Shield of the North - which can be found on the BMR forums here.
Hopefully I'll be presenting a rich, detailed story of one woman's quest to find the truth of the world she lives in...and what she decides to do with that truth when she finds it.
I don't know how the story is going to go, other than a few dot points I have for a rough story idea...the is Fianna's story, I'm just writing it down.
If you're reading the story, then thank you very much - and know that any thoughts you may have, any suggestions about the story and/or my writing style, and general comments about the story, are welcome here in this thread. I'll read everything that goes here, I may respond, I may take it on board for future posts.
I've added a NSFW tag to the story thread because I'm not closed to the possibility...but I haven't as yet decided how raunchy the story will or will not get. If I do add NSFW sections into the story, it will be because it fits the story.
All I ask is that if you do choose to leave a comment, that you do so civilly and constructively.
Hopefully I'll be presenting a rich, detailed story of one woman's quest to find the truth of the world she lives in...and what she decides to do with that truth when she finds it.
I don't know how the story is going to go, other than a few dot points I have for a rough story idea...the is Fianna's story, I'm just writing it down.
If you're reading the story, then thank you very much - and know that any thoughts you may have, any suggestions about the story and/or my writing style, and general comments about the story, are welcome here in this thread. I'll read everything that goes here, I may respond, I may take it on board for future posts.
I've added a NSFW tag to the story thread because I'm not closed to the possibility...but I haven't as yet decided how raunchy the story will or will not get. If I do add NSFW sections into the story, it will be because it fits the story.
All I ask is that if you do choose to leave a comment, that you do so civilly and constructively.