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[HasturTheKing]

These Violent Delights Have Such Violent Ends (NSFW)

Who I Am And What I Want: * I'm a twenty-something pansexual male whose been roleplaying since his mid-teens. I've been on a bit of a Slice Of Life kick recently though I do enjoy the occasional Fantasy or Historical setting from time to time. * I prefer a story that's about sixty-percent...

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I'd love to get some feedback on my first request thread. I know I don't have any prompts written up yet but I wanted to put out a general feel for my writing style before I committed to something more exhaustive.

 

[WaveVelour]

I don’t see anything particularly wrong with it. Simple and easy to read, really. I can see it attracting people’s interest who enjoy bdsm themes like me, while filtering out players who are not that fond of it.

Maybe you could add a simple greeting at the start of your thread to make it a little more friendly =) Also, having some plot ideas is always nice. And next to your kinks, you can elaborate on your limits as well.

 

[Fruit]

I like it a lot. I do think you should list your posting frequency in there, the posting frequency/length/lit. level/you seek from a partner, and whether or not you have any limits about the rp medium (pms, threads, offsite, etc..). ​

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The next step would be to include a plot or two you'd like to rp. You could add those on your second post there to keep everything tidy. ​

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Good luck! ​

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[Birble]

Just wanted to point out that there's a bit of a typo. It says "weiting sample" for the spoiler and I'm guessing it should say "writing sample" I know that typos like that can make a bit of a bad first impression for some people and it's a pretty easy fix.