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Banished from Paradise (DudeGuy & lipslikemorphine )

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Underneath the world that we know is another world. One populated by things one would read about in a fantasy novel. Angels, demons, monsters, and everything in between. All of these groups entered in a covenant with the Almighty, surrendering the world to man. Man had dominion over Earth, but they weren't the only ones who lived on it. When that covenant was broken by anyone from any of the groups, the world of man was left to handle things as best they could.

But why did it have to be this way?

Such a question was considered blasphemous and alone would have been enough for an angel to be thrown out of heaven. But Raizel's circumstances were different. Instead of waiting to be ordered to move by the Almighty, he decided to move himself. He went to the human world and began to take action himself. Such a thing, as you could image, did not go over easy with his superiors. When Raizel decided that he was ready to go back to Heaven, he found the Gates wouldn't open for him. The keeper explained that he would have to remain on Earth until he gained permission to re-enter Heaven.

He wasn't stupid though. He knew that that would probably never happen.

Raizel wasn't exactly making a living here in the mortal world. He was living in the woods in the middle of a park now. With every passing day, his once golden blond hair was becoming darker, his once golden eyes fading to a shade of amber. His skin was a pale tint at tone point in time, but it was becoming more and more tan with every passing day. He had nowhere to go to escape from the rays of the sun. His only form of shade, or housing for that matter, was the canopy of trees above him. Well, there were plenty of places that he could have gone, he just didn't know of any. He was wearing a robe that was plain white in color, trimmed with gold near the seams, the collar, and the cuffs. The pants he wore were a plain white in color, while his shoes shared a color scheme closer to that of the robes. The once spotless clothing was steadily becoming dirtier as the days went on, becoming smudged with dirt and grass much like his skin.

His other big problem? Hunger. It was a pain that he never had to deal with before in his long life, and one he never felt like he would be able to get used to. The only thing that had been keeping him going were the wild berries that he had been able to find growing on some of the bushes. Some of the made him feel ill - another feeling that he had never felt before - while others were actually quite good. Raizel usually slept out in the open, exposed to the elements. It was warm out at nights, but would soon be getting cold from what he over heard people saying more and more frequently. He didn't know what he would do when that happened, but he would figure something out.

There was one thing that often bothered him nowadays, and that was his mortality. Could he die? What would happen to him if he die? Such a think wasn't something that he was interested in testing out. For now, he still had his ability to sense other beings. He knew how to find the ones who were disturbing the balance and he still had the power to take care of them. How much longer that would last he did not know.

As of late, because of all of the different pains he had been enduring, his movements were steadily becoming slow and more sluggish. He was often spotted during or after fights, and usually when he returned to the forest. By now, there were rumors spreading like wildfire throughout the city of an angel that lived among them. Most people didn't believe it, and those who did were usually religious nuts who tried to make him out to be some kind of false God, a being of darkness masquerading as a being of light. They judged him without knowing anything about him or the truth about their world.

These were the people that he had thrown everything away to save, a people who didn't believe in him.

Raizel was sitting on the ground in the woods. The spot where he was sitting was on a hill overlooking the playground. Seeing the people who came here with their children was a reminder of why he was fighting so hard. It was for the future, and for those who had something to protect that just couldn't. It was night time now, so there was no one there. The temperature was as warm as it had been since he had been there, but there was now a slight chill in the air. It was starting to get cold.
 
A strange world that humans, angels, and demons all possessed at the same time. A power struggle would be an understatement, even war would be. A peaceful place to the blind and ignorant, for those who could not see the daily mess that was left behind by this never ending struggle, Earth was a wonderful and serine place. However, for those who could see it, who watched as people mysteriously dissapeared and fires magically started in lands we never thought possible. Scenarious in which we all knew were impossible but somehow they happend, it was a strange concept to try and understand.

The idea of living in a land full of such chaos and insanity, rightousness and sacrifice, love and hate, it was all too much of a contradiction. For many who knew it was there, they chose to take a blind eye, they didn't want to be involved. They knew they'd lose their lives or possibly their places in heaven if they fought for the wrong side. No one knew which side to choose, if you stuck to your own race then maybe you were just playing it safe, but if you chose to fight with the angels, maybe you were being cliche, or a goody good; fight with the demons and you were possibly damned for sure.

Kelsey had watched for years as this power struggle continued right before her very eyes, she could see it, but no one believed her. She had heard the rumors of an angel in the local park, fighting demons, but still being seen. Why would he allow himself to be seen? or she for that matter. Kelsey had no idea which it would be. Why would this angel be stuck on earth? What had he done wrong? or maybe he was on a mission? She wanted to find out.

Late one night, Kelsey snuck out of her house and headed towards the park. She didn't want to look like she was searching for the angel so she decided she'd wait on the playground and hope he'd expose himself. Kelsey was 19 years old, and had long red hair that hung just past her shoulders. Her eyes were a deep green, almost a jade green. She was a very athletic sort of girl, constantly playing sports. She wore her baggy cargo shorts and a black tanktop with a blue hoodie wrapped around her waist in case she got cold. She sat on top of the monkey bars and looked up at the stars waiting for the angel to reveal himself.
 
To be frank, Raizel saw the young woman sitting on top of the monkey bars. He figured that she was just another person who had come to the park to see if they could spot him. Many different kinds of people wanted to see this "angel", the fanatics who despised him, the ones who believed him, the curious, and everyone in between. To just reveal himself to anyone who wished to see him was against everything that he stood for, everything that he believed in. He was not a side show freak at a circus, he wasn't here to be seen and to make a spectacle of himself, he was here to keep the balance.

She sat, waiting, watching, listening not unlike a hunter stalking a deer through the scope of his rifle. If even a twig snapped, it was likely that she would notice it and immediately lock onto him, her prey. In that case, Raizel would have to disappear. But where would he flee to? This area was his home, had been since he discovered that the gates would not open for him. Finding an area suitable enough to be his new home would be difficult. He didn't understand the people, their culture, or much of anything else about this place other than the fact that disturbances were starting to become more and more frequent.

He watched Kelsey in silence, somewhat amazed at how patiently and attentively she was watching her surroundings. As he watched her, he noticed that. . .something was happening around her. The air was changing, warping, distorting. In the pit of his stomach, Raizel could feel that something was about to go terribly wrong. Something was coming for her, and it had every intention of killing her.

Though he didn't want to, though every fiber of his being told him that staying away from the girl would only lead to trouble in the future, he couldn't just let something happen to her. Doing so would make him just as much of a monster as the thing attacking her. Slowly, Raizel rose to his feet. He watched the air around her, searching for the spot where the creature would emerge. It swirled, around and around, slowly rising up to the same level as her head. It would attack her. . .from behind. A flash of white light could be seen from the spot where he was standing, sure to catch her eye.

Following that flash would be another, one much closer to her than the first. It was close enough, in fact, that she would feel the heat that came from it. Just as soon as the creature began to materialize, Raizel balled up his fist and struck out at it. The heavy blow sent what would appear to be a cloud of smoke down to the ground. Emerging from it was a black cat like creature with glowing red eyes and long, jagged fangs.

"Leave this place," Raizel said, his eyes remaining fixed on the creature.
 
Kelsey had patients unlike any other creature that walked this earth. She would stay sitting on the monkey bars for forever if she had to. She just wanted a glimpse, she wanted the proof that he existed. For herself, and not in some fanatic way, she just wanted to know. She knew the battle on earth was real. She had the necklace to prove it. Her father had given it to her when she was younger, just before he was killed by a demon. Perhaps that's why she wanted to see this angel, to show him that she was on his side.

She could sense that something was near her, but it was too dark to be an angel, or maybe the rumors were wrong and indeed it was a demon in the park. She shuddered feeling some sort of cold air brush past her and then a sudden bright light appeared. "What the?" She looked around trying to see it, but it was not there anymore. Then she felt a heat near her head and turned to see the angel smack down some sort of smoke like creature to the ground. She squealed and scrambled off of the monkey bars, backing away quickly. She watched the cat creature form from the smoke. She let out a small squeal in fear as she began to move away from the two creatures.
 
Kelsey was in luck. Raizel's appearance captured the attention of the four legged shadow creature. It knew that it would not be able to enjoy devouring her so long as the angel was present. Raizel jumped up off of the monkey bars and landed with an axe kick on the ground, the creature rolling to the left to dodge the attack. as soon as it was back on it's feet, it leaped at it's attacker bearing it's fangs and it's claws. The intent to kill was undeniable.

Raizel held his hand up pointing at the oncoming creature with his index and middle fingers. His lips began to move, and what came out was a language that would be unfamiliar to any who heard it. It sounded much like Latin, but the flow of the words was different. His fingers began to shine, and out from them shot a small streak of light. The sound that came from it was comparable to thunder, a low, deep grumble. The light hit the creature, sending it tumbling backward a few feet. That hit was not enough to kill it.

"Persistent. . ." Raizel mumbled as he stood upright. The creature charged at him one again. It jumped up into the air a distance away from the angel, landing on all fours behind him. Next came a high speed charge from behind. It slammed into Raizel with the full weight of it's body, sending the two of them tumbling a short distance away from where they previously were. Raizel ended up laying on his back while facing up at the creature, which was steadily snapping at his face.

Without so much as a second though, Raizel blocked his face with his left arm. The creature's jaw snapped shut on it. Though it seemed like Raizel had his back up against the wall, he actually had the advantage. He placed his fingers directly between the eyes of the creature and began to mumble the same, strange sounding words once again. This time, when the streak of light shot out, it tore into the body of the creature and tore it apart.

The remains quickly turned into a cloud of dust and ash that blew away on the wind.

Raizel climbed to his feet and wrapped his right hand around his left arm. This pain thing was going to take some getting used to. Thankfully, the human girl hadn't been harmed. Unfortunately, she saw him both up close and in action. She saw what he could do and she would know that he was not normal.
 
'Knight in shining armor' would be an understatement, and after tonight that cliche would never even phase her again. She watched in horror and awe as the angelic creature fought against the dark four legged creature that had tried to attack her. A part of Kelsey wanted to help the angel and another part of her wanted to run. Instead she was frozen in place with fear.
As the demon flung the angel to the ground and bit into his arm she screamed assuming that she was doomed. She thought it'd all be over, but instead the angel used those same strange words and his fingers lit up once again to blast the creature to bits. She collapsed to her knees on the ground, tears streaming down her face in both fear and praise. "T..Thank you." She stammared to the creature. It was hurt, and she wanted to help it but didn't know how. "Y..Your hurt! It's my fault, I'm so sorry.

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[ It's not a problem. ]

"There is no need for thanks. And please, don't worry about me. This is nothing but a scratch, the wound will heal by morning. If you don't have any reason to be out here now you should go home, you're just an easy target for things like that and worse sitting out here on your own," Raizel said. He was being short and straight to the point for a reason, it was dangerous for her to stay out here and stick around him. His actions as of late alerted many of the various types of creatures that there was something here to get rid of them. They wouldn't stick around and wait for him to come to them, they would come to him and attack to kill him first.

Her safety, much like the safety of all of the other humans who lived here in this city and on Earth, mattered to him. It was for her own safety that he was trying to get rid of her. And partially for his own as well. If he had to fight defending someone else, it would put him at a great disadvantage. Raizel was heading back to his little niche in the woods when he glanced back over his shoulder at his red-headed visitor and added, "If you don't have any other reason for being out here other than seeing me that is."

Kelsey would be better off at home, or in an area populated by more people. Demons and other beasts preyed on humans who were by themselves. They were cowards who wouldn't attack a large group unless there were some kind of extreme circumstances surrounding the attack. Walking around the streets of the bad part of the city in the dead of the night alone was safer than sitting out here in the park all alone was, and that was really saying something.
 
She got up off of her knees and brushed herself off. She wanted to stay there, he had proved his existance to her, and had saved her. She wanted to give him something back but didn't know what. Her heart was racing and tears were streaming down her face. "W..why'd you save me? Why are you were?" Her questions rambled from her lips faster than she had expected. Her hands were shaking, and her body was quivering. She planted her feet on the ground. "I'm not going to leave. You saved me, and I want to be able to repay you." She had more fight in her than most, maybe that came from nobody believeing her on anything.
 
Raizel stopped mid step and glanced back at Kelsey over his shoulder. She was upset, so much so that she was shaking. He didn't understand why though. Was it because she had been attacked? Or because he had gotten hurt saving her? Whatever the reasons she had were, it wouldn't change anything that he said or did/

"Do I need to have a reason to save the life of someone in trouble," Raizel asked. He understood that humans could be selfish creatures. The fought for petty reasons, they killed, murdered, stole, terrorized, raped, trampled, and destroyed, but they were still the Almighty's creatures. This was their home, the way that He commanded it should be. To anyone and anything that dared to disrupt the order that had be created for His creatures would come a swift and heavy hand of judgment. If not from him, it would come from other angels, or demons, or creatures who were here on Earth with the same purpose - to maintain the balance and not to upset Him.

"If you would like to repay me, then please, go home. You will be safer there than you are out here. It would also give me one less thing to worry about."
 
"n..No one was ever willing to save me before. They always wanted something in return, how can you be so selfless?" She tried to stop her shaking, she was more or less taken a back by his willingness to save her, and the shock of her attacker being so close. Her heart beat a thousand times a minute. She looked up at the Angel, he was no longer some glowing creature of glory when he first came to earth. He had been exposed to the elements, she knew it, she could sense it. Otherwise that wound on his arm would not exist, that creature would never have had a chance. "D..Do you need a place to stay?" She whispered as she began to turn towards her home.
 
Raizel thought the answer to her first question would have been obvious - he was an angel. He existed for one purpose and one purpose alone: to serve the Almighty and to uphold the laws that He set in place. He decreed this world belonged to humans, and that was the way that things should be. The creatures here on Earth attacking humans were a threat to the balance that was created from the deal made during the Genesis. Those who dared to defy the rules were given the ultimate punishment. He saved her because it was his duty, the reason for his very existence.

But then, she asked him a question that truly made him stop and think. A place to stay? He needed one more than anything right now. It would have been for the best if he said no and returned to the woods, but he knew that it was only a matter of time before he could no longer stay out in the brutal elements of the human world. Never more than now did he respect the angels who were assigned to the Earth more than he did now. To be able to survive in a world such as this one took strength, knowledge, and other things that his kind never needed to have. Things that he didn't yet possess himself.

"What could you possibly gain from helping me," he asked, skeptical as to her motives. Saving her life was one thing, but trusting her was a whole other matter.
 
She had started to walk away, assuming that he wouldn't answer her, that he'd blow her off like so many others do. But he had answered her, asking her what she'd gain from helping him. She didn't think she'd gain much of anything, she was returning the favor, sacrificing for him, in a sense, the same way he did for her, just not on the same degree. She didn't know how to do that yet. She stopped dead in her tracks and turned around to face him. "Who says I need motive? I'm trying to help you, like you helped me. I don't see me gaining much more than a friendship from you. Isn't that fair enough?"
 
In that instant, Raizel made a decision that surprised even him. He decided that he would place some trust in this human girl and accept her generosity. With at least a roof over his head, he wouldn't have to worry about someone sneaking up on him. He wouldn't have to deal with the protesters, supporters, and nuts that showed up during the day time when he was trying to rest either. "Fair. . .very well then. I thank you for your assistance."

As he turned to follow her, another thought crossed his mind. If they were going to head into the city, it would have been best if he didn't follow her on foot. Though his physical appearance was becoming more and more like a humans, he still appeared to be a bit too. . .different from them. Not to mention his clothing. It would stand out in the crowd and definitely draw much unwanted attention to them both. For him to be seen walking around in plain sight would only lead to a riot of some sort. People screaming that he was real, others screaming that he was fake. He was a living controversy. And to be seen with this girl? She would definitely find herself wrapped up in all of this mess as well. Just thinking about it was enough to give the ethereal being a headache.

"Lead the way, and I shall follow from above. I fear following on foot would be too much trouble. For the both of us."
 
She nodded, it was better that he follow from above. Even she had originally come here with intentions of seeing him, to prove to herself his existance, not for much other than that. Now he was coming to her home, could this be real? She shook her head slightly, not enough for the angel to notice, just to rock that thought out of her mind. She turned away from the angel and ventured out of the park. She was only a few blocks away, it would not take long. She kept her head down, her hood up to hide the smile that was spreading like wild fire across her face. She was excited to have this angel coming to her home, but afraid of how he'd react to her humble home. It was nothing special, even living in city like New York, this was still nothing to be impressed with. Her apartment was small, but it was still somewhere better than the park. She passed crowds of people with signs begging for the angels and demons to reveal themselves, hobo's predicting the world would end and beggers asking her for a penny. She quickly walked past them all, trying her best to make it to her apartment before anyone truly took notice of her. When she finally made it to her apartment it had been maybe a half hour. She took out her key and quickly walked inside, leaving the door slightly ajar for the angel to enter when he felt ready.
 
Raizel was able to follow Kelsey through the streets with his eyes as he flew up above. At the height he was flying, the people on the street wouldn't even be able to make out the glow of the pure white feathers of his wings. The planes that flew above wouldn't be able to see him either. The only thing that could have potentially been a problem was a news helicopter. Thankfully, none of those were out now. At least, not in this area.

He could hear the cry of the city down below, voices, car horns, alarms, even a car accident or two. Or three. The cacophony of sounds rose into the air and filled his ears. It was all starting to give him a massive headache. Hopefully, the girl's home would provide a barrier from the sounds so that he could rest. Finally, she turned and headed into an apartment building. There were plenty of people in the building there, more than enough to make it a safe environment to reside in for the night.

The question now was, how would he get into the building? Going in through the front door was absolutely not an option. Too many people, too many witnesses. Raizel flew around toward the back of the building. The alleyway behind it was, for the most part, clear. There were a few homeless people down there, but they were sleeping. Or drunk. Or in a state somewhere in between the two.

Raizel flew straight up into the air, then dove down toward the alley. As he descended, he spotted the redheaded human girl through a window. It was seeing this that gave him an idea. To enter through the window would be much safer and much less of a hassle than trying to sneak into the building. He ascended so that he was at the same level as the window, then balled up his fist and knocked on it to get her attention.
 
Kelsey went about her business as she normally would have if an angel wasn't about to stay with her. Except this time she was cleaning up more than usual, putting away her lingire, and making sure that things were spotless. She didn't know if cleanliness or lack there of, was a sin or not. She didn't think so, but rather safe than sorry right? When she walked back into the kitchen to make some food for them she heard a light rap on her window. She walked over and saw the angel outside. She quickly opened it and backed away. "that's a strange entrence." She giggled quietly to herself as she walked over and finished shutting her door all the way.
 
"I only had two other alternatives, walking in through the front door or breaking in through the back. Neither of which seemed to be good ideas," Raizel said as she stepped down into Kelsey's apartment. As he did so, his wings faded from sight. Such a spell had been used by Angels for years for the sole purpose of blending in here in the human world. Raizel brushed off his sleeves and straightened his robe up, setting it comfortably back into place after flying.

Clean or dirty, organized or messy, more than anything, Raizel was glad that there were four walls around him with a floor below and a roof above. He was out of the elements and in a contained space where he could, for the first time since he came to the human world, relax. Raizel ran his fingers back through his hair, taking a deep breath as he did so. It was a sigh of relief. For some reason, Raizel couldn't help but to think that saving her life wasn't comparable to what this human girl was doing for him.

"May I ask your name," Raizel asked. He couldn't keep thinking of her as just a human girl, and calling her just you or girl or even human. All of which seemed too rude.
 
She blushed a deep red at her own stupidity for not thinking that the front door was obvious for an angel. "How stupid can I be? Here come sit!" She gestured towards the couch as she walked towards it and sat down. "Oh goodness, I never did tell you my name!" She laughed a small shrill. "I'm Kelsey." She hadn't learned his name yet, but he'd probably tell her his in return for learning her name.
 
Accepting the hospitality of the young woman by the name of Kelsey, Raizel followed her over to the couch and took a seat beside her. She seemed to be a good enough person, and had been nothing but honest to him since the moment they met. At first, he thought that she was just another one of those people who wanted to come to the park and catch a glimpse of the fabled Angel of the park. She wasn't just some person though, she had the decency to show him some kindness and open up her home to him. To her, he was not just some mythological being. He didn't know what she saw him as, but when she looked at him, there was definitely something in her eyes that was different than there was in the eyes of others.

Out of all of the people that he had seen since he had come here, she was by far the most interesting of them all. Perhaps that was because she was the only person that he actually met. "I am Raizel," he said, introducing himself. "I thank you for your kindness. Truth be told, I do not know how much longer I would have lasted out in the woods."
 
She turned towards Raziel her hands on her lap and her legs tucked under her. Kelsey respected this angel and everything he did, she wasn't sure what made him different, but he was. He wasn't some story now, some rumor that she had wanted to see. At first her intentions had been only to see him and probably had he not saved her life it would still have been that way, she'd probably be out in that park dead right now had it not been for him. She looked down in her lap at the thought and her face went a pale white. She swallowed and bit her lower lip. "T..Thank you for saving me. I know you do it just because it's the way you see things, but..." She stopped, she wasn't sure how to word it. "I..I greatly appreciate it."
 
Only the way he saw things. That was true. He was made to protect the lives of humans, carry out the will of the great All Creator. He cared about her, he cared about all life. Human, monster, even demon. All existed, all deserved to live. They had their necessary places in the universe. He destroyed only those that threatened to cause disruption in the great balance that governed all life. Saving her life was only done because he had to preserve the balance. It was truly just the way that he saw things. He never thought about it that way before. . .

"I don't feel I've done anything to deserve your thanks. I merely did my job," Raizel said. Being thanked for doing what he was made to do seemed wrong in some way. He deserved no praise.
 
He seemed so emotionless about what he did, she didn't understand. She was sitting over here fighting not to cry, her hands shaking in her lap as she clenched them tighter together, trying to hide it. The tighter she squeezed her hands the more her shaking became obvious and her muscles flexed, her muscles obviously showing. She tried to calm down, closing her eyes and counting to ten. "W..Without you saving me, I'd I'd be dead." A few tears finally sliding down her cheeks, she didn't like thinking that she could have lost everything only a few minutes ago.
 
Was this what it was like when a person realized their mortality? That their life could have come to an end? For them, death must have seemed to be such a scary thing. They knew not what lie beyond life for sure. What lie after life was the final Judgment. It sounded like such a scary thing, but it was absolutely necessary. Those who were seen as worthy were accepted into heaven, while those who weren't were condemned to eternal damnation. Death was not the end of life, but the beginning of a new life. Life and death we re part of the same cycle that everyone went through, even he himself.

Did he feel this way before he lost his life? Was he afraid? Was he upset? Did he cry as he lay dying? Was it a quick death? A slow one? He couldn't remember. He couldn't even remember a thing from when he was alive.

The question now was what he should do in this situation? How did you comfort someone who had just gone through what was obviously a traumatizing experience. "You need not cry, you still live. Think not of what could have been, but what is," he said softly. Raizel didn't know what else could say to her.
 
She tried to wipe away her tears with his small attempt of reassurance but she couldn't shake it. More tears slid down her cheeks and instead she curled up into a ball, her head on her knees with her arms wrapped around her legs. "I shouldn't be here, but...but you saved me! You let me live!" She wailed and suddenly uncurled herself, wrapping her arms around the angels neck and curling up against him, her tears getting his cloak a little wet on the shoulder. "Oh I'm a blubbering fool!" She tried to wipe some tears away and dry off his cloak. "I'm so sorry. Why am I being this way? I've never done this before. Then again I've never almost died." She was still curled on the Raziel's lap, but one of her hands was trying to dry off the cloak.
 
"If you have never done this before, that is all the more reason to do so now. I can see pain in your eyes, fear. You have the ability to do this in order to release those feelings. Continue, please. I am no good at providing comfort but. . .the least I can do is be your outlet."

Though he may have seemed to be emotionless, the words he just said to Kelsey would prove otherwise. He possessed compassion. It was obvious to him that she had a lot bottled up within, perhaps something more than what she was letting onto. Or perhaps he was wrong. He would help this girl get through her pain, her fear, the unease of knowing that her life could have come to a startling and abrupt end tonight. She was safe and alive, and would be okay.

"And please, do yourself a favor and never think of showing emotion like this as foolishness. You are made to be able to show this kind of emotion for a reason," he continued. Raizel grabbed Kelsey's hand so that she stopped trying to dry his clothing. Just having a little wet spot on his clothing was nothing that he couldn't deal with.
 
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