It's not my intention to come off as rude to other players. Why in the hell would I want to piss off the people who could potentially become fantastic RP partners? Fright and Jaeger had problems with their posts and I didn't want them to show up as crazy, convoluted messes to everyone else. They had characters they respected enough to write entire blocks of text for, and I love that! I just want it to be spread out and managed neatly like a fine, first-class meal so we can all dig in and digest it properly before giving a good reply.
SSG420, you're right, we're here to have fun and RP. That's the purpose of this site, more or less. But I'm not belittling anyone or trying to shame anyone for their writing. I'm not saying "you type for shit m8" or any of that, I'm trying to get you to take a moment and think through your posts and manage their structure. Most of the posts that you've given might be goddamned fantastic and blow my socks off, but they're so screwed up and haphazardly written that it seems like they're building materials that have been strewn about in a hurricane. I want to decipher all this because I genuinely want to have a retired soldier of sorts in this RP, just like I want Cerebrate in here, but right now the only one who has the plans to your buildings, your posts, is you, and you aren't making any efforts to piece things together.
I didn't want to hear excuses because you're an adult and you should know better. But I'm not sending for the lynch mob for these mistakes! I could argue with you about 'human nature' and whatever, but that's not the point.