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- Joined
- Aug 16, 2017
- Location
- California
I initially wasn't thinking much about my quality of writing in this thread, but as it went on and on, I got more and more interested in ensuring it was engaging and well-written. I'm sure the early chapters offer little more than really surface-level carnal titillation. After all, that was my only concern starting out. It's still got a lot of smut in the later stuff too, but hopefully a little more substance to support it.
I don't feel comfortable asking my normal feedback community about this story because of its risque nature. So I'm looking for any other sort of feedback. And just a warning, it does incorporate a lot of rape and monsters. This is a really serious topic and I don't treat it with anywhere near the level of respect appropriate. Part of that is the world building, part of that is shallow writing.
Oh, and I am aware of my unacceptably liberal use of adverbs.
I don't feel comfortable asking my normal feedback community about this story because of its risque nature. So I'm looking for any other sort of feedback. And just a warning, it does incorporate a lot of rape and monsters. This is a really serious topic and I don't treat it with anywhere near the level of respect appropriate. Part of that is the world building, part of that is shallow writing.
Oh, and I am aware of my unacceptably liberal use of adverbs.