Playing pool - First person POV (feedback welcome)

[HeyThereLittleBear]

Removed.

 

[lowblow emma]

I like this story. I hope there will be more to come. It was nicely paced with a subtly suggestive tone that aroused without being too blatant. One or two of your sentences jarred a little, but that's only because of the polish of the rest.

 

[CougarGirl]

Nice story, looking forward to next installment.