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Poem Help on Energy (Closed)

Thread starter Asphodel Terrarium
Start date Jul 31, 2015

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It's nice...
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So-so
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Needs improvement
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You don't deserve to be a writer. **** Off
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Asphodel Terrarium

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Jul 31, 2015

#1

I need some help with wordsmiting for a poem.

Here is the first stanza. What do you think?

<settled>

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