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So, I have this idea and I want to write a novel about it. Whether it ends up being published or snatched away and done by someone else, I do not care. It's more of a "this thing is inside me and it's time for me to deliver" personal project thing.
It involves a race of men, genetic mutations of humans(or a kind of ancient aliens spin on it where they're our predecessors). Physically, they look like us with minor modifications - such as canine teeth, black and yellow eyes, and dark markings on arms and legs like a red fox has those black "socks". They're faster, stronger and more vicious than us, with the ability to breed amongst each other - as the race is entirely male, with male genitalia and male facial features and body structure, this would make them... sometimes hermaphrodites. They are not your normal androgynous hermies though, or futa; they are all male, beautiful and handsome in that pure rugged maleness and dark aggressiveness that men have. Dark eyes, smirking grins, chiseled jawlines and heavy browridges.
I've called them the Gamatoms and they can spread this Gamatomness to humans - human men - through sexual contact or ingestion of their semen/blood. When a human man becomes one of them, he is a half-breed, with all the perks of strength and whatnot but without the ability to pass on his own disease. The qualities that define this race aside from their animalistic tribal mindset, is their insatiable desire to pass on the virus - they need to have sex constantly. Trying to solve sexual urges by solo masturbation causes a bit of pain and eventually becomes ineffective - the virus knows when the body is being stimulated by another - until eventually the host is consumed with a sort of madness until the urge is sated.
Also, the Gamatoms have a genetic hatred of women. There are no Gamatom women and if a woman did ingest some Gamatom semen, it would result in a horrible death as her infected flesh tries to eat the non-infected parts. Because that's what they do: they eat women. That's all they eat. Not only that but the less dominant Gamatoms cannot be within sight of human women without going into a bloodthirsty rage.
So, that's the Gamatoms. Basically indestructible, never aging, never dying, cannibalistic, sexual demons/mutants. The story is a modern one and - you guess it - apocalyptic in nature. Most of my internal stories focus on 3 different angles.
1. The very formulaic "inception" plot. This focuses on a human man - between the ages of 18-30 - who is trying to live his life and all of a sudden gets captured by a gang of these monstrous men. This is the story of his rape, his changing, and his rebirth as a human-Gamatom hybrid and how he copes with the disease and memories of his old life. Sometimes, he is very special and rises in the ranks to become a leader among the Gamatoms.
2. The taboo lovers plot. This is the story of a Gamatom who falls in love with a woman. He finds himself attracted to her and hides her away, spending time with her to try to figure out what is wrong with him - since it is only her who he feels this way about. During their courtship, he has to keep their love a secret while also struggling with his desire to eat her and eventually ends up being unable to eat or kill women altogether. Drama ensues when the tribe finds out and brings the girl forth to slaughter her and regain the heart of their brother but... they end up falling for her too.
3. The from birth plot. Focuses on a Gamatom born to two fully Gamatom parents. This details their culture and how he grows up with other younglings in a post-apocalyptic world. Eventually, he befriends a human boy and has to struggle with the implications of an enslaved humanity, the world his fathers made and the myth of the "Woe-Man" who will come to eat his soul in the night unless he is a good boy. By this point, women would have been rounded up and kept in farms much like cattle.
The problem I'm having is... world building and culture building. I mean, writing porn is sexy and all and gives me great joy but... then what? I have to write something to connect all of these sex scenes. I have no idea what their culture would be like but I imagine once subjugating humanity, they'd just basically borrow everything and go all Big Brother to keep mankind in line. They need men as a race to remain to keep supplying them with food and a virile genetic bloodline. I know that sex is basically open and free in their culture, something they do on the street, on the bus, and right in the middle of two of their other friends talking and it's not rude. But... what else do they do? Would they produce anything? Are there artists? Is there religion? I feel like I made a half-race where I spent so much time ensuring their dominance that they have very little else to live for.
It involves a race of men, genetic mutations of humans(or a kind of ancient aliens spin on it where they're our predecessors). Physically, they look like us with minor modifications - such as canine teeth, black and yellow eyes, and dark markings on arms and legs like a red fox has those black "socks". They're faster, stronger and more vicious than us, with the ability to breed amongst each other - as the race is entirely male, with male genitalia and male facial features and body structure, this would make them... sometimes hermaphrodites. They are not your normal androgynous hermies though, or futa; they are all male, beautiful and handsome in that pure rugged maleness and dark aggressiveness that men have. Dark eyes, smirking grins, chiseled jawlines and heavy browridges.
I've called them the Gamatoms and they can spread this Gamatomness to humans - human men - through sexual contact or ingestion of their semen/blood. When a human man becomes one of them, he is a half-breed, with all the perks of strength and whatnot but without the ability to pass on his own disease. The qualities that define this race aside from their animalistic tribal mindset, is their insatiable desire to pass on the virus - they need to have sex constantly. Trying to solve sexual urges by solo masturbation causes a bit of pain and eventually becomes ineffective - the virus knows when the body is being stimulated by another - until eventually the host is consumed with a sort of madness until the urge is sated.
Also, the Gamatoms have a genetic hatred of women. There are no Gamatom women and if a woman did ingest some Gamatom semen, it would result in a horrible death as her infected flesh tries to eat the non-infected parts. Because that's what they do: they eat women. That's all they eat. Not only that but the less dominant Gamatoms cannot be within sight of human women without going into a bloodthirsty rage.
So, that's the Gamatoms. Basically indestructible, never aging, never dying, cannibalistic, sexual demons/mutants. The story is a modern one and - you guess it - apocalyptic in nature. Most of my internal stories focus on 3 different angles.
1. The very formulaic "inception" plot. This focuses on a human man - between the ages of 18-30 - who is trying to live his life and all of a sudden gets captured by a gang of these monstrous men. This is the story of his rape, his changing, and his rebirth as a human-Gamatom hybrid and how he copes with the disease and memories of his old life. Sometimes, he is very special and rises in the ranks to become a leader among the Gamatoms.
2. The taboo lovers plot. This is the story of a Gamatom who falls in love with a woman. He finds himself attracted to her and hides her away, spending time with her to try to figure out what is wrong with him - since it is only her who he feels this way about. During their courtship, he has to keep their love a secret while also struggling with his desire to eat her and eventually ends up being unable to eat or kill women altogether. Drama ensues when the tribe finds out and brings the girl forth to slaughter her and regain the heart of their brother but... they end up falling for her too.
3. The from birth plot. Focuses on a Gamatom born to two fully Gamatom parents. This details their culture and how he grows up with other younglings in a post-apocalyptic world. Eventually, he befriends a human boy and has to struggle with the implications of an enslaved humanity, the world his fathers made and the myth of the "Woe-Man" who will come to eat his soul in the night unless he is a good boy. By this point, women would have been rounded up and kept in farms much like cattle.
The problem I'm having is... world building and culture building. I mean, writing porn is sexy and all and gives me great joy but... then what? I have to write something to connect all of these sex scenes. I have no idea what their culture would be like but I imagine once subjugating humanity, they'd just basically borrow everything and go all Big Brother to keep mankind in line. They need men as a race to remain to keep supplying them with food and a virile genetic bloodline. I know that sex is basically open and free in their culture, something they do on the street, on the bus, and right in the middle of two of their other friends talking and it's not rude. But... what else do they do? Would they produce anything? Are there artists? Is there religion? I feel like I made a half-race where I spent so much time ensuring their dominance that they have very little else to live for.