RE: Could This Be Made Easier To Read?
It's an old post. But I found you very clear in your request thread about what you seek. To me, short isn't always the way to go when it doesn't convey what you're looking for. A potential partner can't read what you have written and be confused about what the kind of role play that appeals to you. That's a good thing!
If I was going to write anything, it would just be the opening paragraphs, tightening it up a bit. E.g.,
The rules in this thread are the only ones I follow. Please contact me if you could enjoy playing by these rules without modifications. I seek FxF, F//, Yuri roleplay via thread. No men, only female characters. We will roleplay one-shot smut-only scenes (snuggling and other aspects allowed if they lead into smut).
But that's really not necessary. Good luck!