Adam Edwardson
Super-Earth
- Joined
- Sep 22, 2011
- Location
- Sweden
At least her throat, that had gone dry and sour from the perpetual chanting, became lubricated once the yellow lake overflowed her face and gushed down her open mouth. But despite this the chanting became much harder with her words broken off by forced gulps and queasiness. The steady stream of urine that kept flowing from the broken pipe, raising the water level and making her swallow even more of it, served to make her chant become true in the most literal way. Her mouth, her body, was a hole and it was in fact being filled up with the most disgusting of body fluids without her being able to do anything about it. Was the second part true as well? Was her mind a hole, an empty space to be filled? Just as the stream of oozing piss kept flowing down her throat and filling up her body, was the stream of words finding some kind of entrance to her mind and seeping into it, filling her thought, her soul, her very identity, up with piss?
Danielle had told her to find a place to hide so that they could not find her and change her. Joanne's body was caught in an inescapable predicament, but neither the noose nor the padlocks could restrain her mind. But could the chant? If one repeated a series of words hundreds, thousands, tens of thousands of times would that not make it true somehow? There was no corn field and there was no ocean. That was just imagination, a childish dream created to avoid reality. But could something that was not even real protect her from the very real words she uttered? Could a figment of her imagination shield her from the physical reality of liters and liters of human piss, of sharp sound waves bouncing against the steel sides of her containers and echoing against the concrete walls of her new cell? Perhaps once, or rather if, she got out of this contraption she would know the answer to those questions. If there was a "she" left to know anything, that is.
Eventually the breakfast seamed to have ended in the hall above her, and the uninterrupted flow was replaced with occasional showers of piss. But a new pressure was building up, inside of her this time. She had already drank liters of liquid, more than she would normally drink in days. Some of it had gone to restore the hydration of her dried body, but there was a limit to how much fluid it needed even after the hours of torment in the hot sun outside. The quantities she forced herself to swallow here were excessive and sooner or later her body would need to get rid of them the way it got rid of excess fluid. She desperately needed to pee, and the trickling sound from the waterfall of piss just made it even harder to keep it inside of her.
The logic of what would happened when she eventually was forced to piss was quite simple. Her own piss, that was just a mix of hundreds of unknown men's urine, would cause the water level to rise and she would have to drink an amount of urine equal to the one she pissed out. That would just make her body even more desperate to release more urine, forcing her to drink even more and so on into eternity. There was no way around this physical inevitability. Her body could hold a limited amount of fluid, but the broken pipe just kept pouring more and more of it over her. At some point in time, may it be in hours or in days, she would not be able to drink any more. And if she did not drink she would not breath. And if she did not breath...
Danielle had told her to find a place to hide so that they could not find her and change her. Joanne's body was caught in an inescapable predicament, but neither the noose nor the padlocks could restrain her mind. But could the chant? If one repeated a series of words hundreds, thousands, tens of thousands of times would that not make it true somehow? There was no corn field and there was no ocean. That was just imagination, a childish dream created to avoid reality. But could something that was not even real protect her from the very real words she uttered? Could a figment of her imagination shield her from the physical reality of liters and liters of human piss, of sharp sound waves bouncing against the steel sides of her containers and echoing against the concrete walls of her new cell? Perhaps once, or rather if, she got out of this contraption she would know the answer to those questions. If there was a "she" left to know anything, that is.
Eventually the breakfast seamed to have ended in the hall above her, and the uninterrupted flow was replaced with occasional showers of piss. But a new pressure was building up, inside of her this time. She had already drank liters of liquid, more than she would normally drink in days. Some of it had gone to restore the hydration of her dried body, but there was a limit to how much fluid it needed even after the hours of torment in the hot sun outside. The quantities she forced herself to swallow here were excessive and sooner or later her body would need to get rid of them the way it got rid of excess fluid. She desperately needed to pee, and the trickling sound from the waterfall of piss just made it even harder to keep it inside of her.
The logic of what would happened when she eventually was forced to piss was quite simple. Her own piss, that was just a mix of hundreds of unknown men's urine, would cause the water level to rise and she would have to drink an amount of urine equal to the one she pissed out. That would just make her body even more desperate to release more urine, forcing her to drink even more and so on into eternity. There was no way around this physical inevitability. Her body could hold a limited amount of fluid, but the broken pipe just kept pouring more and more of it over her. At some point in time, may it be in hours or in days, she would not be able to drink any more. And if she did not drink she would not breath. And if she did not breath...