What do you overdo in your RP writing?

[A.Storey]

Thought it might be interesting to read what others are self-aware of in their own story writing.

• Do you use way too many commas? Not enough?
• Too many question marks? Not enough?
• Is YC's dialogue with the other OCs often a list of endless questions - leaving your partner the weird task of answering them like a survey instead of like a conversation?
• Do you overuse certain analogies, phrases or idioms?
• What colorful adjectives do you keep using over and over?

Share some examples if you're willing and able to!

 

[echo]

It's possible that's way others like ya. I enjoy the forced worldbuilding and "what's next" questions that are posed.