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[Danmachi_fanboi]

Hello, how is everyone? I usually do not care about how my request thread looks. It's to my liking and everything, but it isn't like other request threads with visuals. I know that takes time, which usually I don't have. I don't have many people message me wanting to role play. I understand what I want to role-play isn't hugely popular. I just want to know what yall think about it. Should I change the title of my request thread? Any recommendations?

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[e v i e]

Hi! There is nothing wrong with your Request Thread in my general opinion, but since I'm frequently viewing Requests Threads myself, I will admit that it's a little bit like being met with a wall of text. A little bit overwhelming. A lot of the things that you say can be simplified, so people who visit your thread see what you're offering and what you seek right away, instead of having to read through two paragraphs. Most people don't bother to read and just click out if it feels like too much.

I would also try to rewrite some of the plots, so it's consistent with MC and YC or characters A and B.

I would also suggest creating a new Request Thread - you can easily just use your text from this one - so it doesn't feel so "old" (I can see it's from 2019). It also doesn't hurt with some visuals (that also makes it more appealing to the eyes and the text doesn't feel as intimidating).

If you'd like, I can put together a Request Thread for you really quick, using the information/text already in your thread? If you're not familiar with coding, you can always reach out to me and I can alter the codes to whatever you like.

I hope this was slightly helpful! Feel free to message me or just comment here if you'd like some help!

EDIT ; there are also not that many people who have the opportunity to reply once a day, so maybe you could also try to lower your requirements to maybe 3-5 times a week? If that's okay with you, of course.

 

[Danmachi_fanboi]

Thank you Khira, I appreciate your feedback!! I would love to see what you might wip up. You can either post it here or just pm me what you were thinking.

 

[Danmachi_fanboi]

Makes sense. If I decide I want a second eye on what I decide what to change it to I'll pm you. Thank you!!

 

[e v i e]

This is just something I put together really quickly! I did have to shorten a couple of plots to make them fit the layout, but I didn't take away anything important in those plots. Like Bellini suggested, a few of them could be rewritten to make more sense and maybe sound more appealing, but that's up to you. I wouldn't mind rephrasing them for you either, but that's up to you!

Also, I just picked blue as a color, but I can easily change that if you'd like something else. The same goes for the pictures, I just tried to find square ones (even though I could have cropped any photo in photoshop), and visuals that fitted the plot or the relation somehow.

Let me know what you think! You don't have to use it, I just think it's fun to create Request threads!


 
 

S T A T U S : open​

 

ABOUT ME
- I've been roleplaying for about 5 years.
- I can write at least one paragraph, but I usually match my partner's length.
- I usually play males in their 20s or 30s but can be persuaded to play a younger or older character.
- I prefer to roleplay via PMs or threads, but can roleplay on Discord if that is preferred.
- I prefer romantic settings, such as blind dates, office romance, next-door neighbors, etc.
- I am open to roleplaying fantasy and sci-fi plots too, although I have never done it before.

MY POTENTIAL PARTNER
- A female writer who has good grammar.
- Replies at least once a day.
- Someone who loves romantic plots.

Feel free to suggest other plots than the ones listed below!​

 

THE DREAM OF A LIFETIME
This roleplay will be about MC and YC dating. They have been friends for a long time, maybe since middle school, but MC was too afraid to admit that he had feelings for YC. But YC has secretly been crushing on MC as well. During college, MC finally builds up the courage to ask YC out, and she says yes. MC is beyond excited and takes her on the best date she's ever had. After a few dates, they will eventually become a couple, and they will both realize they were meant for each other.

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THE FAITHFUL VACATION
MC goes on vacation to an island like the Caribbean or Hawaii. He is traveling with a girlfriend or a wife, but during the vacation, he meets YC. They hit it off quickly and he doesn't tell her he's in a relationship. They have sex a couple of times, but eventually, MC's vacation is over and they go their separate ways. Eventually, he breaks it off with his girlfriend/wife, and a couple of years later, he goes back to visit the same place where he met YC, hoping she'll still be there. It turns out she's still there and MC ends up marrying her after realizing she is the love of his life.

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SECRETARIES DUTIES
MC is a boss and has just lost his secretary. The night before he has scheduled interviews for the position, MC and his friends go to a bar. Due to his failing relationship with his girlfriend, he's looking for potential candidates who can satisfy his needs. MC spots YC and they end up having a one-night stand. The next day YC shows up for the interviews and is shocked to see MC. Despite this, MC ends up hiring her. Eventually, MC breaks up with his current girlfriend, because he starts having feelings for YC. They start dating.

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FAMILY FUN
This idea involves incest. MC and YC are siblings in their twenties. They live two separate lives. During a family vacation, their schedules don't line up with what their parents have planned, and end up arriving two days late. Because of this, they end up in the same hotel room and have to stay for a few days longer. They will get bored and start annoying each other, and eventually, YC will tease MC, which will lead to a competition on who will surrender first.

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THE FAMILY DOCTOR (roles can be reversed)
This roleplay would start out with MC waking up from having surgery. The first thing MC sees is YC, their caregiver. What MC doesn't realize is that YC will be taking care of him until he has fully healed. MC's parents are rich, which is why they can afford a personal doctor at their house. They take MC back to home and YC gets her own room in the house and spends her hours taking care of MC. MC quickly forms feelings for YC because he finds her attractive, funny, and very kind, and she is only the only one around for a long time.

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GYM RAT
MC is working out at the gym. One day he spots YC, a girl he finds very attractive. He realizes she needs a spotter, so naturally, he offers to spot her. After this, they start working out together. They form a friendship and start hanging out outside the gym as well. Eventually, they go on a date. We can include smutty parts from the very start, or leave it till after they've started dating.

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UNDERCOVER STAR
MC catches YC in filming a video for a porn website. They could be roommates. MC could even have seen her videos on this website, but not connected the dots. MC comes home from work earlier than planned and hears YC's loud moans, and goes to check it out. He sees her masturbating in front of the camera. One scenario could be where he joins in to help her. Another scenario could be him using this information to blackmail her.

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I don't mind hearing changes you would like to implement for either plot, but I reserve the right to deny them.
If you are interested, please PM me!
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[e v i e]

Wow, @Khira, that looks beautiful!! I adore the way you set up the plots with the images!

Thank youuu, it was just a quick-quick coding session, heh

@Danmachi_fanboi I am going to bed now, but just write here for changes or send me a PM, and I'll send you the updated version in the morning!

ps. I didn't include the image bank, but that can easily be added btw!

 

[Danmachi_fanboi]

It looks lovely Khira!! I'll pm for coding. Thanks again!!

 

[Siph]

there are also not that many people who have the opportunity to reply once a day, so maybe you could also try to lower your requirements to maybe 3-5 times a week? If that's okay with you, of course.

To add to this, your requirement for your partner to be a woman IRL (if I interpret the first sentence of your RT correctly) may exclude a large portion of the people who read your post; all non-women, obviously, but also female writers who aren't comfortable with such a requirement. Personally, I avoid those threads because of past bad experiences with people who had such IRL demands. I don't mean to criticise your preferences, though, so don't change it if you don't want to; just be aware that it's another factor that could affect the number of responses you receive.

Aside from that, and the fantastic feedback you already received, I'd definitely recommend a more descriptive title. I'd avoid using titles like "Siph's RP ideas" or "Unique cravings", because they don't say anything about the content of the thread, or about what you're looking for. You obviously like romance-themed stuff, so that's something you could put in your title, like Khira already did at the top of her rework. You could also feature some of your prompts, e.g. "Gym Rats, Undercover Porn Stars, and More" . . . And don't hesitate to change it around every so often to see what sticks.

I hope that helps!