Could Use Some Feedback on this Thread

[Breezi]

Same as usual, I'm not quite getting what I want here. I understand not many people might not want to play these kind of plots but it's really annoying when everyone is being like "can we just do this one-on-one?" So, would there be a way to make it more clear?

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Hiya, the name's Breezi and I've been RPing for 10 years now. I got my start much like everyone else and probably did a ton of chat-based RPs. I like writing and reading, so know that's where I come from when I RP. I generally like stories more than anything else. Writing Style: Okay, so I...

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[Doctor Manhattan]

I think it looks good. I might put a warning at the front of the thread, stating that you want the specific plots you are seeking, and perhaps use some method of sorting them, but that's about it.

For example:

Hiya, the name's Breezi and I've been RPing for 10 years now. I got my start much like everyone else and probably did a ton of chat-based RPs. I like writing and reading, so know that's where I come from when I RP. I generally like stories more than anything else.

Writing Style~ What Do I Bring to the Table~ Where and How Do I RP?~ Other~ How often do I reply?~ Kinks

• Writing Style: Okay, so I like my partners to at least be able to do a paragraph with good grammar. I will not fault you for making a mistake here or there but I'd like a decent baseline of quality here. Detail or at least creatively writing around your lack of detail is something I appreciate. I also enjoy people who can be creative and not afraid to throw a little joke in here and there. I write mainly in the third person, I don't hold it too hard but if you don't, I might get thrown off a slight bit. Don't be worried about arbitrary word counts as much as the fact that you're saying something of substance. Are you moving the plot forward or not? That is the most crucial part of playing with me, giving me something to bounce off ofI also think you ought to tell me if I'm not living up to any of my standards.
• What Do I Bring to the Table?: Generally, I play switch characters, and although I am a switch I can't really just play any role. I just mean that it's very context-specific what I play and I don't like assigning roles to characters. I also think that I like to have some set-up before the smut unless there is a strong pitch for starting smutty.
• Where and How Do I RP?: 9/10 you are gonna find me RPing here, whether that be in the forums itself or in PMs. I might go to Discord for planning or organization but generally, I like RPing here as it gets me into the right mindset.
• Other: One thing I like is good OOC talk, I can probably forgive a barebones pitch if you show me that you're truly interested in RPing with me. I want someone that's receptive to talking outside of character, pitching me ideas, joking around. I want to talk about these RPs a lot before we jump into them.
• How often do I reply?: That can vary, I might be able to churn out multiple posts a day or I might not be able to get one out for a week, really the best way to see what's going on with me is to ask. Just don't keep pestering me though, at least wait two days before doing so.
• KINKS: F-list - Warning

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Hiya, the name's Breezi and I've been RPing for 10 years now. I got my start much like everyone else and probably did a ton of chat-based RPs. I like writing and reading, so know that's where I come from when I RP. I generally like stories more than anything else.
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[slide=Writing Style~]Writing Style: Okay, so I like my partners to at least be able to do a paragraph with good grammar. I will not fault you for making a mistake here or there but I'd like a decent baseline of quality here. Detail or at least creatively writing around your lack of detail is something I appreciate. I also enjoy people who can be creative and not afraid to throw a little joke in here and there. I write mainly in the third person, I don't hold it too hard but if you don't, I might get thrown off a slight bit. Don't be worried about arbitrary word counts as much as the fact that you're saying something of substance. Are you moving the plot forward or not? That is the most crucial part of playing with me, giving me something to bounce off ofI also think you ought to tell me if I'm not living up to any of my standards.[/slide]

[slide=What Do I Bring to the Table~]What Do I Bring to the Table?: Generally, I play switch characters, and although I am a switch I can't really just play any role. I just mean that it's very context-specific what I play and I don't like assigning roles to characters. I also think that I like to have some set-up before the smut unless there is a strong pitch for starting smutty.[/slide]

[slide=Where and How Do I RP?~]Where and How Do I RP?: 9/10 you are gonna find me RPing here, whether that be in the forums itself or in PMs. I might go to Discord for planning or organization but generally, I like RPing here as it gets me into the right mindset.[/slide]

[slide=Other~]Other: One thing I like is good OOC talk, I can probably forgive a barebones pitch if you show me that you're truly interested in RPing with me. I want someone that's receptive to talking outside of character, pitching me ideas, joking around. I want to talk about these RPs a lot before we jump into them.[/slide]

[slide=How often do I reply?~]How often do I reply?: That can vary, I might be able to churn out multiple posts a day or I might not be able to get one out for a week, really the best way to see what's going on with me is to ask. Just don't keep pestering me though, at least wait two days before doing so.[/slide]

[slide=Kinks]KINKS: F-list - Warning[/slide][/tabs]

Hope that helps you out.