Critique my post

[Alacrity]

Hi! I was looking for a few constructive criticisms for my Request Thread. Any suggestions would be appreciated.

Mx Female - A plethora of NSFW ideas

(Note: My favorite plots have been marked with an asterisk (*)) Hello there! Thank you for showing an interest in my request thread, Potential Partner. If you stick around, I hope you would read everything properly (especially the part concerning literacy requirements. But I'm getting ahead to...

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Thank you in advance.

 

[ƒeral]

Hey - props, I thought it was very well done. Clean. Neat. To the point. There's personality that come across in your introduction as well, which I liked.

You can delete the parenthesis at the top. Posting in someone else's RT is against site rules.

My only two comments are:
1. I personally really dislike the word 'requirements'. It just feels...harsh. But maybe that's subjective. I prefer RTs where the writer use phrases like 'A little about me' and 'What I would like from you.' That kind of thing.

2. Do you have a preferred genre? That part was unclear.

Happy writing!

 

[Alacrity]

Thank you very much, I'll look into it! And I write in quite a few genres, so I don't really have a "favourite" haha.