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Zprimal

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Hi! I'm looking for critique on my thread. Does it seem too confusing or hard to read? Is there anything that sticks out that you would suggest improving?
 
Hello Zprimal! It looks fine to me. I'm not really looking at content but as far as the organization and the appearance go - very legible and easy to digest.
 

Overall, like the format. Very clean & to the point, so kudos on that.

The only thing I would suggest potentially reconsidering/revising is your usage of colors & ordering in subsections.

You seem to want to use a different color per core section. I do agree that tend to help keep it organized and kind of lessen the monotony of just one color throughout, but why are three sections light blue? Are those three correlated?

And then as far as subsections go, is there a particular order to your plots? Why not list your highest craving (as indicated by asterisks) first, then descend from there? What's the meaning of the red asterisks vs. the white ones? If it's sorted by genre, maybe use subsections to break apart the genre?

Hope that helps.
 
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