Patreon LogoYour support makes Blue Moon possible (Patreon)

Navré's Journal: Threads, samples, writing references and stuff. (do not comment)

navré

switchblade
Joined
Feb 14, 2020
Location
the gory in glory
Navré's Writing Journal
aesthetic edgeplay

9b52ad7138dee5ce7f30aeedae7a9f72.gif


Journal Contents

> RP Thread List
> Request Threads
> Writing Samples
> References and Resources

> Faceclaim Journal <


 
Last edited:
Last edited:




........Request threads........

female and male threads, linked
(that's what FML stands for, for all the boomers who didn't know)


F
M

L










 
Last edited:
Writing Samples
These are samples of my writing from roleplay only; none of them are personal works.
All are SFW unless stated otherwise. Read whatever interests you, if you'd like a sample. Otherwise you can skip this bit.

Contents
1. Recent replies
2. Starters/ replies of varying length
3. Worldbuilding
4. Character descriptions




Recent
These are my latest replies.

500+ words, yes, I indulge your dumb nerd fantasies if you're cool
Nejaa had leapt into her head like a recluse the moment they packed her onto the ship to be, well, shipped right into the hands of the enemy. She missed the time jump, missed the weather lashing at the transport ship as it entered Dromund Kaas, and only opened her eyes at the jerking landing, where the hatch hissed open to scare off a pack of barking... things.

Naturally, she's heard of this place; but that was how it was supposed to be, according to the Knight she was shadowing, Iki. You only wanted to hear about it. Nothing more. Maybe pray you don't end up there.

Nejaa never thought of herself as much of a magnet for trouble, caught giving figures of authority snark and tongue from time to time, but mostly followed what she was supposed to do. Peace, knowledge, serenity, harmony, Force. While she was walked by troopers through the derelict storm city, the code ran through her head, giving her some manner of comfort.

They'd taken her lightsaber the moment they grabbed her, and the leather she hung it from shifted and dangled loosely from her hips without the weight to hold it down. She grew nervous as they neared the center, to a large building that seemed dizzyingly tall. They entered an elevator that dropped down to a hallway filled with cells, and their footsteps stirred some groaning behind a few closed doors, making the hairs on her back stand on end.
Inside, they put a collar on her, with a chain.

"Isn't that a little excessive?" She narrowed her eyes at the trooper, her voice low and rich. "You already took my lig-- Gah!"

She gasped when it was forced around her neck, the trooper completely ignoring her. Nejaa's scarred hands went to tug at it by instinct, but there was no latch that she could feel. The door slammed shut right when she sucks in a breath, holding it, then exhaling.

Just needed to calm down. You'll be fine, she thought she was saying that to herself, but when she closed her eyes with a breath, she was looking at Iki's kind face. You'll be fine.

She went back into meditation, this time without the peripheral sounds of a spaceship, only a few hushed groans. Usually, Jedi liked meditating in forests or quaint houses at most -- but Nejaa would always, strangely, gravitate to the scene of a desert.

An expanse of red dunes with nothing for miles on end. That gave her peace -- the thought that there would be no life around her to break her thought. Iki said it was unusual, in that she prioritised focus over peace. Nejaa didn't know what anything else felt like. Weren't you supposed to focus before you found peace? The violet sky, between the day and the night, rolled with clouds.

She was so lost in contemplation that the sound of the door opening roughly was only another crackle in the storm. But when a bolt of lightning shot down from the sky and hit her in the neck, her eyes and mouth snapped open with a gasp, immediately met with a pair of black boots, clothing, a cape, a cruel smile; but her sensitivity that had been praised by her masters was still there, and she saw misery in his eyes.

Hegemony - 3,000 + words

Starters/ replies
I do a variety of lengths.

200+ words:
Jasper, a black man in the 1980s

Jasper dodged some police in a dodgy manner.

He'd just been tapped on the shoulder while fidgeting with the lock over his bicycle - damned key won't work, oh hell, those were his drawer keys, why did they make them look so exactly the same?

The officer asked him if he needed help, not hiding the undertone that asked him if he was trying to steal the bicycle. Jasper nearly rolled his eyes at the question - first, he wouldn't steal anything in the open, if he had to steal anything at all, and second - whatever. He didn't bother pursuing that thought.

He might almost laugh at the comicality of it all. Absurd. Especially since the high-profile murder with their high-profile suspects, the entire police force was out with snipers to get everyone, as if it meant a pay raise.

Turning down into an artsy street, he came across the familiar record store - Vida's - and thought he might check it out, test some tapes and see if there was anything he liked. It had been quite a while since he bought something, but that meant he had money to spare. He'd probably get something with piano in it, to play in the dingy radio while he read. That would be relaxing.
500+ words:
Loki’s Greeting as a Wolf
Time flies when you want to die
the crow's proud cry, a glint in dead eyes
Light a fire and I'll be here
Loki, c'est where mischief lies.


Metal clacks on the forest ground; scratching and screeching. Loki wears her claws, proud, as if unafraid to be found. Beasts of the dark glower behind bushes, awake and stalk, some giving chase. Any trouble at all, she'd put them six hundred sixty-six feet in the ground. Her blackbirds were in a flurry, pecking out and stealing the shiny, many eyes of the beasts with frantic, furious joy. Flashes of bone showed through their incorporeal black plumage.

Some of the beasts had heads that turned three-sixty; some had six horns down their spine impaled with tattered flesh from perished food. The musk of death was stiff at her nose.
They grew larger and stranger as Loki neared Nihili's deadlands, territory whispering; voice of nothing; nihil nihil nihil - it would drive anyone mad.

T'was a shame -- she was already mad.
Death of the light at sundown
Noble vincit, oh how it turns around
The mad clown's frown.


She could see them all. On the physical surface, there were wolves from a noir world; in the spirit world, Loki saw, with eyes of the witche: spirits of battlers whose prowess were far beyond any mortal's.

Her mask of death was stiff over her head. The devil's horns, she wears like a crown.

Corpses were strewn about -- the scene was a child borne of massacre. A single black wolf, sat among the debris, still as a gothic ornament. Loki howled.

"Cadaveria."

It was a liquid voice, dense as gold, underlying an offhand charm of madness. It felt strange in her own throat; rebirthed, she had taken to a different gender. A sharpened approach, perhaps. Silver tongue turned to gold.

"On this black evening, I greet you." She bowed.
"I am Loki, of Asgard. Reincarnated, firstborn, with a silver tongue."
"My previous incarnation had once fought alongside one of yours: The Mortician. No messes, when he was around; we kept all of Asgard spic and span."
"After my passing I am more than acquainted with death. For 44 years I roamed Helheim. Phasing among the living and the dead... on occassion."

In a coqettish dance, almost. If death was a serpent, they were infatuated.

She twists her head to the sky; the mask angled upwards like a hopeful dead man. A glop of crimson coagulates, mist forms like a cloud. Loki's swarm of ravens, at first warbling with Nihili's carrion crows, burst to the sky to bathe in blood.

"I wield Aesir magic."

Physics deemed it too heavy -- the blood falls like rain, glowing bright red with magic as they hit the ground.

"The job will be fast with me. I will cleanse your land with red rain."
"As a jester, we'll have fun while we're at it too."
"Death is an art. Death is life's gambling game."
700+ words:
Japanese vampire attends a party

A party was definitely a change in the atmosphere. Not being on the war front meant no one would be getting shot tonight, or any night here. Or so he hoped. Kozue had got back to London in a guarded train, but the regular (cramped) kind for travelers, not an ambassador's kind. Guarded because you never knew if some psycho planted landmines down the entire length of the railway through an inconspicuous St. whatever French babytown.

To end the period of his work with a party was very thoughtful, and he received an invite from a contact who'd bothered to send it out of London. He had been in a conservative ville in France with a group of Masquerade veterans, to, plainly speaking, put a few rookies into rookie camp. War made relations fraught and people frightened. They'd been losing contacts here and there, and the organization was brittle, resources and membership pulled thin like army rations.

The street was quiet, save the tap of strangers' feet. There was a larger man near the door, though he stopped to look at the house. What's there to look? A house falling apart, like everyone was these days.

His walk trickled into a canter. Before cutting in front of the man, he couldn't help but notice how tall he was. Not regular tall, like people around Kozue generally were (darn it), but 180 tall. The ratty hat on his head was astronomy to Kozue. He side-stepped and cut past him like a slip of paper, with a muttered "excuse me", trotting up the stairs, eyes pinned to the veneered door opening in an expensive yawn.

He left his coat at the door. Underneath, he wore a crisp black shirt, and tapered trousers that'd taken no sweat from his travels. His shoes were dress shoes that looked dull from being highly sooty. He had to wash his face earlier at the train station to distinguish himself from the shoes. His hair shone resiliently but looked a bit blown about.

Everything inside was black - tasteful. The food smelled great - tasty! The art he didn't recognize; he hadn't dabbled in Western like some officers he knew did, shipping in steel crates of painting after painting stacked on one another, guarded by gold and gilded wooden frames. Germany was generous in the cultural exchange. Not too much of German culture, though, because, surely, Russia was far more interesting.

Kozue scouted the servings and found himself at a table with, ah, red velvet cakes. He picked one off the platter daintily. Eating red velvet cakes made him feel pretty, if he took rabbit bites.

Plus, a punch bowl. The tall man from earlier was already chowing on a pie further down the table. Another man entered, dressed all dapper - he drifted to this corner. Kozue could see him salivating with his eyes, his manner reminding him of the very nice rookies he had the utmost pleasure to meet just this afternoon. He deliberately scooped up a glop of it, nice and thick. He filled a small glass, heavy and dark in stark opposition to pale, fragile fingers, weightless in a wrong way. He leaned loosely against a wall, eyes clipped on the man, then turned his head to scan the rest of the room, blinking like heavy water.

A woman skulked in. He saw the blood on her hands before he smelled it; she was touching a dagger like she couldn't be bothered. The police must be dead to not have stopped her on the way. She hung in the corner watching the room - unfair , because he'd wanted to be the one watching the room. He ransacked his brain for another activity, skirting around 'talking'.

There was a sharp whistle, from some other dandy who'd just arrived. Kozue wondered why he didn't come in a suit; if one could wonder with sarcasm. He simply looked stupid in them, like a kid wearing his dad's work clothes. He drained the glass and put it away with a quiet thud, and chomped a cupcake. Definitely not a small bite.

He chewed. The cake is too refreshing to be regular ol' red velvet.

Worldbuilding
Dungeon smoke, a world of shadow business.



Steam from burning coal, seeping into the sky from pallid, slanting buildings; distant clopping of hooves in the dead of the night.
The watchmen weary; rings under their eyes make watching hard; and keeping the thieves off the street invariably harder.
The men who think they own the world know nothing of the people that tore out from under their thumb.

They are
The gamblers with finite decks dealt and infinite stakes set.
A languid panther on his lush throne built off things that hadn't been his; his command the heaviest in the hood.
Voluntary belligerents who would be paid in protection and who would spend in secrets. Knives in pockets no one could find, the cruellest blades up their sleeves they would even use on themselves to attest for loyalty.
Witches and the curses they spit at the pyre; the devil's art, appreciated and inflicted with fire.
Thieves, illusive; illusionists, thieving.

Card tricks and sleight of hand;
the set of eyes on your back trailing you home.

Character descriptions
I don't always need or do character sheets, and I'm perfectly fine with jumping straight in, but when I do, I write like this.
Long:
Character based off a song
Song

Blackbird - The Beatles

Name
Jasper "Jaz" Fair

Gender
Male

Age
23

Job/Position
Barista, bouncer, bodyguard waiter, delivery guy, a lot of other odd jobs to scrape by with.

Likes
Bars
, ambient music, jazz ; likely why he gravitates to odd jobs around the food and beverage field. Jasper also enjoys cooking , but more scrappy, visibly improvised food rather than gourmet, and he's not exactly stellar at it. More of a kitchen wrecking type, but there's a bit of fun in that too.
Books . Something he hides as it isn't exactly his image, and he doesn't have an especially strong grasp on the intricacies of language, but there's something calming to words on paper, even if he doesn't know enough to understand the subject matter.
Parks are wonderful. Jasper likes running , skipping pebbles, or straying to a less crowded spot and climbing trees until he's yelled at to come down.

Dislikes
Eye contact
? Always makes him nervous, like someone was ready to yell at him.
Large crowds : he finds it stifling.
Jewellery . He'd rather stab himself in the foot than let anyone put an earring or necklace on him.

Personality
The most prominent characteristic is his unwillingness to be prominent. He's a quieter type, and surprisingly polite, defying the thuggish outlook.
With friends he's slightly more open. Quite likes stealing friends' food and bullying, but doesn't really mean harm in either (perhaps).
Painfully introverted but enjoys talking. That part's hard to juggle.
To wind down, Jasper is a hang-by-the-road type, be it smoking, kicking bottles and cans onto the road, chatting, playing music, watching people (and commenting/ making occasionally mean remarks on them).
A smaller part of him is vindictive, and he remembers deeds like a hoarding landlord; remembers acts done like a theatre critic. He's not violent but can be quick to spark a fight, and in the neighbourhood he grew up in, streets are always fit for a one.

Reputation
Has a bit of a street brawler reputation, due to his sketchy neighbourhood: and that he's been known to get involved in shadow business or hit jobs for certain amounts of money. Although he's recently turned and put that behind him, it's not exactly a mark that can wash away in a day.

Looks
Matted, curly hair shaved close to the scalp, though it's grown out a bit. Not especially tall around 173cm, but Jasper is solid, though lacking the bulldog stockiness (probably because he can't afford to eat as much as he'd like). He looks good only like a piece of rock looks good.
Outfits are street style, generic greys or whites or blues with a pop of colour around the collar, socks, shoes. He owns a (single) leather jacket he wears all the time, shredded jeans and sneakers. On a warmer day he loses the jacket and goes for a shirt and knee shorts. Never anything special or particularly eye-catching.
His jaw, he carved it in with a razor. Jasper's skin is close to ebony; his eyes a pitch-brown and are narrow and a smidge slanted, giving him a bit of a fox face, despite a softer nose and round, wide mouth. He has rough hands and wide feet.
When standing, he has a shy slouch, and likes to stuff his hands in jacket pockets, hoodie pockets, cargo pockets. Any pocket. He likes pockets. Has been stopped by policemen while exiting stores and asked to turn out his pockets before (he doesn't take offence though. He knows what he looks like. The city's just like that).

Mannerisms
Jasper often has a half-suppressed throaty laugh, something like a rapid cough. When more relaxed, his laugh is breezy though always slightly embarrassed.
He walks with a strong stride but lowered posture, more evident when he's in a crowd of people, as if he could want nothing more but to get away quickly. In more comfortable places he quite likes walking or running; he walks with a subtle bob, every step a pulse of energy. Running feels like the world rolls under the push of his feet.
Jasper taps, shakes, shifts, crosses his legs and feet a lot. Keeps his eyes on the ground when he's nervous.

Backstory
If he's poor as shit now, he grew up even poorer. A church mouse is richer (they get all those donations, for Christ's sake). He didn't exactly leave school, but did stop schooling at twelve, as his mother had been going through a wave of depression and his father was off wherever he was and no one bothered enrolling him into a high school. Jasper didn't much care for it himself. The rest of the time he had been bounced around different correctional facilities after being plucked from a fight in the street, and a day before he turned eighteen, threatened to be put in a real prison by a police officer, he got a job as a bouncer in with a bar run by morally ambiguous shareholders (but ey, beggars can't be choosers). It's not an event-filled life; sure, there was some close calls with infamously violent people no one wanted to get involved with; red and blue and sirens flashing on walls behind and beside him as he wove through home streets; picking the lock on his own door because his father locked anyone out after 12 or washing up in a friend's bathroom because he didn't want to go home bloodied.

Family
Jasper is of West African ethnicity, but names and culture had long been scraped away by the city that hadn't exactly taken them in warm arms.His father was a war veteran turned to a criminal syndicate, his mother, an expatriate nurse. Jasper's father was a self indulgent adulterer; only god knows how many half-siblings Jasper had by now. He took his mother's name at eleven, all respect for his father evaporated when he nearly tore down the house in a gunfight with a colleague; Jasper, two sisters and their mother shivering themselves stupid in the basement.
Three brief ones:
"Iki, of the east"
The General, crossed from a nomadic tribe into the Pharoah's order

Despite the heat, Iki has thick black curls down to his shoulders, curling at his neck and behind his ears like tendrils if he doesn't have it in a half updo. He has narrow hazel eyes, sharp as a cat's but possessing a spark of a dog's mischief; a slightly crooked nose broken and mended; full lips that women wear makeup to achieve. All on a wide face that isn't so much as wide and friendly looking, but wide like a tiger's was wide; not long like a horse's. His skin is a (very) roasted honey brown, considerably darker than most Egyptians, perhaps due to the amount of time spent in the sun (which he prefers, until he's scorched enough to be forced indoors). He has cheekbones that cast shadows under them, over a square jaw. Built like a sleek tank; has rough, quick hands that pack a punch.

Rambunctious and boisterous like he'll never grow up. When people say 'he will / he'll' in referring to Iki, he puts the 'hell' in it. Friendly with most, and terrible at lying because he's got his partner in crime Zaaset to do the lying parts for him - that guy's words are the things that can pack a punch, when Iki's literal punching might be inappropriate. However, he is not a loud person, preferring to drink by himself in a corner so he wouldn't be too loud, as he might be tempted to be if sitting with a group of friends.


Djedi, Prince of Egypt
Kings' Acquaintance

In an ancient Egyptian tale, Khufu and the Magicians, mention is made of a magician called Djedi or Dedi, and it is possible that this mythical person was inspired by the real prince Djedi.


Charred ivory skin, a tall, straight nose and deep-set eyes, with thinner lashes than average. His face is symmetrical, but strangely too much so; making him look like a carved mask of a person rather than an actual person. Lips like a tense bow; eyebrows flat and sharp. Djedi is not tall - he mostly stopped growing at 16, stunted at a height of 5"3, and being largely distanced from hard labour, he hasn't built much muscle either.

Being a born of foreign ruler, Djedi's bloodline had only started to keep to itself for a single generation -- but its effects were enough. One generation inbred, Djedi's unmixed blood saddled him with frequent illness, some which riddled the physicians. The Pharoah had taken in a magical healer as his permanent caretaker; highly trusted, he had later, upon rising to the throne, been asked by Djedi to serve as his advisor.

Djedi is a bitter man. He obsesses over every misfortune, even more reactive to them than he is to good fortune. He is an overthinker - good with settling complex things on a national scale, but bad everywhere else. Analytical and careful, he is reserved and cautious, whip smart and both respectful and respected (for the latter, to some extent by some people, at least). He's a type whose whims come from both the head and heart, neither being prioritised over the other; this seemingly contradicts his calculative, analytical approach to things, which generally results in an unpredictable course of action that constantly requires heavy tuning through his advisors. A part of this is stifling for him, but he tolerates it.


Qar, advisor and physician
The body is as fragile as the heart

Tall and thin, with a full face beard. Salt and pepper hair. A dark olive skin tone. Slanted eyes with wispy lashes, heavy dark circles with having read mounds of papers; wise, hooked nose. Always dressed in white robes with long sleeves, that stop at his knobbly ankles, and wears sandals under his narrow feet. Moves like a ghost, speaks like a spirit.

Qar is a calm, undulating figure, as physicians generally are, but has a daring side that allows for him to suggest trying new things or using experimental medical techniques. He is a heavy reader and skilled practitioner of what he does, trusted and liked by people both within and outside of the court. While he heads the advisory body, he treates his associates as equals, and gains due respect from it, having tight relations with people who would, out of liking and loyalty, want to protect and keep him in his position, even if it's a personal reason to just to ensure that their voice had equal say as his while conferring. He is wise and level-headed, eloquent, and radiates a commanding presence that can be intimidating even to the Prince.
 
Last edited:
Back
Top Bottom