It's not too bad in my opinion, it doesn't waffle on. You could add how many paragraphs you like to post and receive in return perhaps and what kind of posting frequency your partner can expect from you and what you expect in return.
Good rundown of kinks and pairings, but not super clear where you want to RP (forum? Discord?), whether you're looking for long term plots or quick scenes, posting length, posting frequency, etc.... the logistics stuff!