Shaw's Sketchbook **NSFW** I would love some advice! : )

[Lorelei_Shaw]

Thank you so much for clicking to read my thread!!! That is so nice of you! I haven't really drawn and years, and since I joined BMR, I thought I would give it a go. These are just rough sketches, mostly they are pictures that I have found online and made them my own. These are definitely NSFW. I am always looking for new pictures to study from, and I REALLY need help with facial expressions ( especially malies). Any feed back is welcome but just please, be nice. I am trying to get better.

Waiting

Yaoi

Needs a Title

Needs a Title II

Ready and Willing

Max & Lacey (Needs work, I don't like how this came out)

 

[FunBrooke]

Amazing work, think you captured the female orgasm beautifully..

 

[CindyHarrison]

'Ready and willing' is beautiful.....did you have to sit on the floor in front of a mirror?....cause that's about the only way we can see our own vag

 

[Lorelei_Shaw]

Haha, no! That would have been an idea. A partner sent me the image and I loved the body positioning. I sketched it from looking at the picture.

 

[Lorelei_Shaw]

Amazing work, think you captured the female orgasm beautifully..

Thank you so much!! I was really trying to but I need to work more on fluids. They are really hard.

 

[elbastardson]

Wow, those are really good. Incredible work!

 

[Lorelei_Shaw]

Wow, those are really good. Incredible work!

Thank you so much!!!

 

[Lorelei_Shaw]

What reference are you using?

Reference?

 

[ineedaname]

These are really good!

 

[Lorelei_Shaw]

These are really good!

Ahh!!! Thank you so much !

 

[Sketchyequine]

Hey there!

I dont draw people much, but I think that if I had advice for your art it would be as follows:

I feel like you're lingering in a land between realism (the genitals and tummies look very realistic) and cartoonish (breasts and faces seem more anime than realistic), and I think you should try to sway further in one direction or the other. Natural breasts are less round, while animated ones are often drawn very round and large. Play to your strengths! You have a good start here.

 

[Lorelei_Shaw]

Hey there!

I dont draw people much, but I think that if I had advice for your art it would be as follows:

I feel like you're lingering in a land between realism (the genitals and tummies look very realistic) and cartoonish (breasts and faces seem more anime than realistic), and I think you should try to sway further in one direction or the other. Natural breasts are less round, while animated ones are often drawn very round and large. Play to your strengths! You have a good start here.

THANK YOU SO MUCH!! That is actually very helpful! Thank you!

 

[Lorelei_Shaw]

My First Attempt At Digital

Any advice would be welcome!

 

[Lorelei_Shaw]

 

[Fruit]

I absolutely love that last one! The shading is perfect! Can't wait to see more, keep it up!

 

[Lorelei_Shaw]

I absolutely love that last one! The shading is perfect! Can't wait to see more, keep it up!

Thank you so much!!! That's so. Kind of you.

 

[Cuttlephobia]

Wow, looks like thou really improved over the last couple years.

 

[Lorelei_Shaw]

Wow, looks like thou really improved over the last couple years.

Thank you. I am trying. I've gotten some great advice.

 

[Praxis]

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Wow! Holy cow. Oh my gosh.

This is incredible and so are you!

 

[Lorelei_Shaw]

Wow! Holy cow. Oh my gosh.

This is incredible and so are you!

Awww!!! Thanks Praxis! That is so sweet of you!

 

[Johnn]

Love that last one also. Looks like a great way to wake up

 

[MacCloud]

wow, you have improved, dimensions and shading are excellent. You can feel the warmth of their embrace.

 

[MistressFrancesca]

there's just something about just straight up pencil art . . .