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Erotic Apocalypse Race Building

Rudolph Quin

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So, I have this idea and I want to write a novel about it. Whether it ends up being published or snatched away and done by someone else, I do not care. It's more of a "this thing is inside me and it's time for me to deliver" personal project thing.

It involves a race of men, genetic mutations of humans(or a kind of ancient aliens spin on it where they're our predecessors). Physically, they look like us with minor modifications - such as canine teeth, black and yellow eyes, and dark markings on arms and legs like a red fox has those black "socks". They're faster, stronger and more vicious than us, with the ability to breed amongst each other - as the race is entirely male, with male genitalia and male facial features and body structure, this would make them... sometimes hermaphrodites. They are not your normal androgynous hermies though, or futa; they are all male, beautiful and handsome in that pure rugged maleness and dark aggressiveness that men have. Dark eyes, smirking grins, chiseled jawlines and heavy browridges.

I've called them the Gamatoms and they can spread this Gamatomness to humans - human men - through sexual contact or ingestion of their semen/blood. When a human man becomes one of them, he is a half-breed, with all the perks of strength and whatnot but without the ability to pass on his own disease. The qualities that define this race aside from their animalistic tribal mindset, is their insatiable desire to pass on the virus - they need to have sex constantly. Trying to solve sexual urges by solo masturbation causes a bit of pain and eventually becomes ineffective - the virus knows when the body is being stimulated by another - until eventually the host is consumed with a sort of madness until the urge is sated.

Also, the Gamatoms have a genetic hatred of women. There are no Gamatom women and if a woman did ingest some Gamatom semen, it would result in a horrible death as her infected flesh tries to eat the non-infected parts. Because that's what they do: they eat women. That's all they eat. Not only that but the less dominant Gamatoms cannot be within sight of human women without going into a bloodthirsty rage.

So, that's the Gamatoms. Basically indestructible, never aging, never dying, cannibalistic, sexual demons/mutants. The story is a modern one and - you guess it - apocalyptic in nature. Most of my internal stories focus on 3 different angles.

1. The very formulaic "inception" plot. This focuses on a human man - between the ages of 18-30 - who is trying to live his life and all of a sudden gets captured by a gang of these monstrous men. This is the story of his rape, his changing, and his rebirth as a human-Gamatom hybrid and how he copes with the disease and memories of his old life. Sometimes, he is very special and rises in the ranks to become a leader among the Gamatoms.

2. The taboo lovers plot. This is the story of a Gamatom who falls in love with a woman. He finds himself attracted to her and hides her away, spending time with her to try to figure out what is wrong with him - since it is only her who he feels this way about. During their courtship, he has to keep their love a secret while also struggling with his desire to eat her and eventually ends up being unable to eat or kill women altogether. Drama ensues when the tribe finds out and brings the girl forth to slaughter her and regain the heart of their brother but... they end up falling for her too.

3. The from birth plot. Focuses on a Gamatom born to two fully Gamatom parents. This details their culture and how he grows up with other younglings in a post-apocalyptic world. Eventually, he befriends a human boy and has to struggle with the implications of an enslaved humanity, the world his fathers made and the myth of the "Woe-Man" who will come to eat his soul in the night unless he is a good boy. By this point, women would have been rounded up and kept in farms much like cattle.

The problem I'm having is... world building and culture building. I mean, writing porn is sexy and all and gives me great joy but... then what? I have to write something to connect all of these sex scenes. I have no idea what their culture would be like but I imagine once subjugating humanity, they'd just basically borrow everything and go all Big Brother to keep mankind in line. They need men as a race to remain to keep supplying them with food and a virile genetic bloodline. I know that sex is basically open and free in their culture, something they do on the street, on the bus, and right in the middle of two of their other friends talking and it's not rude. But... what else do they do? Would they produce anything? Are there artists? Is there religion? I feel like I made a half-race where I spent so much time ensuring their dominance that they have very little else to live for.
 
Any ideas or anybody who would like to help brain-storm with me, I'd appreciate it.

A couple things I did think of:

I know that if they did make art it would be very sexualized and genitalia themed. Like, I see the statue of David except with a very large and proud erect penis. Paintings made with paints mixed with semen or using semen itself as a medium. Haunting, surreal paintings of large, monstrous, hairy vaginas/vagina-like monsters with teeth lining the slit. Paintings with horrific and enticing narratives where women play the role of the Id - all that is feared and yet tempting and enticing all the same. Paintings that glorify the joys of the hunt, still-lifes exemplifying a spread that includes a meal of women flesh. Art that glorifies male love, male sex organs and their role as hero but also villifies women and their sex organs, turning them into repulsive monsters and beasts that wish to be consumed lest they try to consume the viewer first with their ravenous "maws".

If they had any extracurricular activities, they'd probably play a lot of sports and war games with each other. Like, hard core and dirty sports that require a lot of endurance and have freedom of aggressive movements - like soccer, hockey, boxing, ect. But maybe something of their own with their own point system and whatnot. And war games either in small miniatures like chess/battleship or something akin to live-role-playing.

I do not know about religion... I do know that the children of Gamatoms are told stories of a boogieman known as the Woe-Man. A headless man figure with eyes on it's chest and a mouth between it's legs that comes to terrorize little Gamatom boys who wander too far from the tribe or don't go to bed when they are told to. I do not know what morals Gamatoms would have in their society, though. They take joy in the suffering of others and respect dominance which is decided by displays of strength, virility and by pheromone emissions.
 
I've heard of these before... Hope you are doing well!

World building wise, the first question that comes to mind is whether or not this is a global infestation or localized. If it's globalized then it could also be the cause of the apocalypse by ripping society apart and generally draining the world population along with setting back technology, business, etc. If it's localized then there is a lot more to think about, but let's go with global for now.

Due to their nature of aggressiveness, hate of women, and overall more animal nature there would definitely have to be a vast population decrease which could benefit the story. Leaving pockets of normal humans in hard to reach places all over the world that are trying to rebuild and reconquer, thus establishing at least some sort of natural predator for Gamatoms due to the fact that human technology and intelligence would be preserved in these small pockets of 'resistance.' It'd be worth thinking about whether the disease has any natural barriers to overcome, such as cold or heat, that could set up the location of the most resistance and a place where Gamatoms are trying to take over.

You seem to be saying they are still intelligent, but simply get overwhelmed by their urges to use too much of that intelligence. So I imagine it would be kind of like the scenario in other movies/books when the brawn wins over brains. Soldiers use the things they have, and try to do basic maintenance, without being really able to improve or create anything new. That would/could be the crutch of the conflict between Gamatoms and remaining humans. Gamatoms have more physical prowess, and coupled with basic technology win most of any conflicts, but an incredibly intelligent and perhaps better researched set of humans might be able to cause some issues.

Hope that helps in any small way. Cheers.
 
Hey, PG! Long time no see! We're still friends on FB and I check up on ya every once in a while. ^^

I posted this on Literotica and some guy suggested that I have made the Gamatom's hatred of women too extreme for them to really develop into anything rational or culturally profound. Also, he suggested secluding the Gamatoms to a specific geographical location.

In my original stories it was an apocalyptic infection scenario with the Gamatoms coming from underground after a long "slumber" since prehistoric times. But there are a lot of things that don't make sense either as an infection/virus OR a society with culture and government. If they depend on human women for food and human men get infected through sexual contact then limiting and reducing their food supply is not in their best interests. They can't have the "brazen and irresponsible take over" that I originally imagined; they would eat and kill all the women and wouldn't have enough restraint to stop themselves from wiping them out and infecting all of the human men. And having characters who have the devil-may-care attitude of an anti-hero/rebel/rogue is a romantic idea but not realistic. So, they sit around and fuck and eat and... do what? If they hate women that much and sex is that necessary then they really can't do much else.

Digging out an old idea for a different story I was planning to make, I think I'll make them island dwellers. The Isles of Black Sand. Covered in black sand, with twisted black trees, strange fauna and overcast skies. My plotline will start with them on this island living peacefully for centuries with their own farms of humans. It's gotten to the point though where the gene pool is degrading and the quality of their food is going down. So, they decide to make an excursion to the outer world. It's in the mid-90's and they hijack a ship of some kind - maybe a cruise ship? and bring home the humans that survive the attack. Among the women is a detective who was forced to take a vacation by her boss and she has a daughter at home and a stupid ex husband who doesn't care. Thus begins her determination not to be made food. She tries to rally the other humans to help her escape but the ones who were already there not only speak a different dialect but no longer have the will or desire to fight their overlords. Fuck that. So she takes the women and men who were on the cruise ship to begin with and they escape the facility and have to try to survive the terrors of the island while trying to find a way to escape off of it.

Meanwhile, at the same time this story is happening, the son of the leader of the Gamatoms has grown fond of one of the human men they captured on the ship and has taken him in as a personal pet. So, while I have the story of these women's escape I'll also have a story of a human man's transformation and becoming the mate of this Gamatom prince and forgetting the world he left behind.

That's all I have so far. They're still kinda empty as far as culture. Thank you for your suggestions too! It gets the wheels and screws turning!
 
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