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Seducing her Cousin
Below is the intro that I’ve written over the last day or so, with further details at the bottom. I generally like to write these longer stories over email or google docs, but I’m happy to compromise if you have other preferences. I also enjoy discussing the story out of character - whether that be through google hangouts, Reddit pm or email - as I find this helps us write a more joined up story Most of the details are not set in stone, so please let me know if you have any ideas relating to the story as I would love your input.
I try to write about 3 times per week depending on my availabilities, with each post being 2-5 paragraphs long
The two figures standing in the kitchen could not have been more contrasting. At a little over 6 foot tall, with the broad shouldered build of a weightlifter, Jay was almost half a foot taller than his, slender yet similarly athletic cousin. Where he took after their mothers’ side of the family with blonde hair and sharp, blue eyes; Francesca’s features were almost entirely from her father’s side. Brown, wavy hair currently tied up in a messy bun on the top of her head, with green eyes and skin that tanned easily
“Please?” Francesca clasped her hands together as she looked up at her cousin. “Pleeeaaaase?” She begged again, her green eyes growing more and more puppy dog with each second.
Jay rolled his own eyes, tired of the constant badgering. “Dude! I said no” he finally replied, frustrated.
Francesca opened her mouth wide and took a deep, exaggerated breath. “Please-please-please-please-please-please-please-please-please-please-please-pleeeeeeaaasss..”
The verbal barrage finally came to an end as she ran out of breath, he voice trailing off to a high pitched wine and her face going red.
Her cousin watched on arms folded and eyebrow raised, unimpressed with the display.
“Are you done?” He asked, turning back to stir the simmering pot.
“You know I’m not!” She retorted, reaching up to her hair and pulling it out of the bun. “I can keep this up for weeks” She smiled a confident and cheeky smile. “Or have you forgotten what birthdays were like at home?”
Jay had not forgotten what birthdays were like. His cousin was certainly not spoilt - it was difficult to be spoilt coming from a single parent family living on the breadline - but she was stubborn and determined. If she wanted something, it was a fairly safe bet that she would get it. He knew what was coming. He pursed his lips, exhaling loudly. “Why? Why do you want it so badly?” He asked, turning around with his arms outstretched, exasperated.
“Because I want what we used to have when we were younger! Before you moved away and left me!” She tried guilt tripping him, pushing the emphasis back into him.
“You mean went to university?” The eyebrow of suspicion raised again
“Potato-potahto” she shrugged, changing tact without batting an eyelid. “We had fun and we were really close! It will be fun again”
“We still do have fun! You’re here every other day anyway” Jay responded, no longer riled. He was accustomed to batting away his younger cousin’s points. She could carry on like this until most people had given her what she wanted and begged her to stop.
“Yes but how much better would it be if I was living here? How ..”
“Frank” He said curtly, cutting her short. “It’s me. So cut the bullshit. Why does it mean so much to you?”
“I do want to live with you.” She started holding her hands out, palms facing Jay as if trying to reduce the impact of her statement. “But most of all I want to live away from Mum. She’s starting seeing someone so it’s kinda awkward. Plus I’m 19 and I want my own space”. Her voice was calmer now and her face was different too. As if she had removed her mask or dropped an act. “And you know what mum’s like. She’s overprotective of me. But with you..” she paused, smiling at her cousin. “With you, she would definitely let me move out.”
Jay watched her carefully, softening as he felt her finally telling the truth. It all added up now. Her mum was always protective of her, fearing that she would make the same mistakes she did and wanting to stop her from being hurt. Especially so in the last year, since Francesca’s break up. He had mistreated her and the way it hurt Francesca only exacerbated her mum’s natural instincts. But she trusted her nephew, who had spent most of his teenage years looking after his younger cousin while her mum worked double shifts or nights. So much so that she would likely feel happier with her daughter living with him than at home.
He sighed, realising how much his cousin had been through and how unjust her mother’s treatment of her was at times. She was a smart and strong young lady, more than capable of taking care of herself. He ran his hands through his hair and let them rest on the top of his head, his face half grimacing.
“You pay full rent. Every month, never late. Any parties have to be cleared with me in advance. As for guys..” he stopped, struggling to find the right words and deal with the thought of his own cousin having boys over. He needn’t have bothered trying. Such was her excitement and relief at Jay finally relenting that Francesca threw herself at him, interrupting him.
Brown wavy hair blurred Jay’s vision as she bundled into him with enough force to force him back a pace. Her arms wrapped around him as she buried her face into the muscles of his chest. His strong arms finally closed around her and she had to stifle a moan. Feeling safer and happier than anywhere else, she clung on for as long as she could without seeming weird.
“Next time you want something Frank, just come out and be honest with me ok?”
“I do want to live with you!” She repeated, her green eyes glinting as she smiled up at him. A lot..she thought to herself. more than I should want it
“But I’m sorry. I promise from now on I’ll be more open with you about what I want..”
“Like maybe a housewarming party? Well not party, gathering! Just the girls?”
I hope you liked the intro! Here’s a little info that either wasn’t included, or wasn’t in much detail:
Jay and Francesca are cousins (their mothers are sisters) who grew up in the same neighbourhood. Both their dads are no longer around and since their mums worked shifts or two jobs, they hung out at each other’s houses a lot. Jay being around 4 years older meant that from around the of 15 he was often looking after his cousin alone, 2-3 evenings per week. From this they developed a close, almost sibling-like relationship with Francesca often looking up to and idolising her cousin. They have plenty of jokes and good natured ribbing.
Francesca is smart, quick witted and caring. She excelled at school in particular in any debates, where her quick thinking would often tie others in knots. She wasn’t part of the cliche popular crowd that is evident in most schools, but had a good close circle of friends, with whom she’s still close. She was a good sport at school, part of the track and field team as well as playing some volleyball She got decent grades and decided against university because of the cost. Instead she works as an intern (not decided that detail yet!) With regards to her love life, she’s had one boyfriend who turned out to be cheating on her with at least two others. This crushed her and she hasn’t dated in any way since. After this her feelings for Jay intensified. She knows that Jay will likely not have the same feelings for her initially. But having seen some of his subconscious glances towards her, she’s confident that she can wear him down. She’s very pretty, with brown hair, green eyes and is slightly tanned. This could be because of mixed heritage (white and black or Hispanic perhaps) or because her father had darker features. Around 5’6 with a slender, athletic figure. She has toned thighs, a slim waist, wears a c cup and possesses a surprisingly firm and peachy ass.
Jay is intelligent, sporty and incredibly mature for his age. Growing up as part surrogate big brother, part man of the house he soon learned to work diligently at everything he did. It also gave him a steady head when it came to dealing with Francesca.
He excelled at sports, but because of his good grades and responsibilities at home, rarely was seen as a true jock. He left town for three years on a sports scholarship and attained a good degree. However regularly returned to see his family and kept up correspondence with his cousin over Skype and FaceTime. She refers to this as him leaving them, but they both know it’s only a joke He’s the only one who is allowed to call her Frank rather than Francesca or Frankie. He has short blonde hair, piercing blue eyes and a short beard. Years of sport and weightlifting have added muscle to an athletic and large frame. He’s by no means a model, but his overall looks make him quite good looking.
An Alternative means of paying the rent
Jessie aimlessly ran her finger over the graffiti etched into the wooden table top. Apparently a CH had some seriously deep feelings for a JY. The table was covered in scratches, intentional or otherwise, that were likely a result of the coffee shop happily taking any old table they could lay their hands on and placing it - with little care for it’s suitability for the space or whether it was stable or not - into whichever floor area it was deemed most necessary. She hadn’t realised before, but the attempt to make it look like anything but an identikit coffee shop instead made the place seem like a bit of a dumping ground for old furniture. She wondered for a second whether the bosses would let her and her friends stay there, but figured that they might lack somewhat for washing facilities.
She looked around at her two friends, one sat diagonally to each side of her, their faces buried desperately in their own laptops. Each girl looked tired, their hair out of place where they had played with it or run their hands through it over and over in frustration. While their make up showed the effects of rather aggressive eye rubbing.
It was hardly surprising, the past two hours had been tough. Finding a new place to rent is never easy, but doing so on a now a short timespan was even harder. Their landlord had let them down with just two weeks before the new term started. Now with two days left they still had nowhere they could afford to rent, no family or friends in the area to call on and tuition for their dream course to pay for.
“Right,” Lisa started, finally breaking the silence. “I got jack shit. What about you ladies?” she looked around, first at Mia and then Jessie. Mia shook her head, her brown hair giving in to the temptations of its natural curls.
“Same” she said quietly, hardly able to look up from her monitor.
Jessie didn’t answer. She couldn’t admit to herself what she was thinking, let alone bring herself to actually say it out loud.
“Well then, looks like we are all leaving the course. It was a pleasure knowing you beautiful ladies, but I’m going to have to call Mother and hope that she has changed her views on my ‘life choices’ and decides to let me back in the house”
“I don’t want to leave the course” Mia exhaled. “This is all I’ve wanted for the last 5 years. Well, that and Ryan Reynolds..” she added, trying to perk herself up with some humour, but still she deflated back into her seat.
“There may be an option…” Jessie began. “I was doing some serious googling.. “
“Jess! No!” Lucy hissed, cutting her friend off. “You can’t!”
“What? What do you mean she can’t?” Mia asked, looking from one to the other in confusion. “If there’s something then surely we should try. And why haven’t you told me yet?”
“Because Jess here said she wouldn’t do anything. We agreed that it wasn’t right and wouldn’t be fair. Didn’t we Jess?” Lucy gave her friend a stare that was capable of killing, or at least causing grievous bodily harm.
“Yes, but she deserves to know. She deserves to be given the option.”
“What do I deserve to know? What option?” Mia was becoming almost frantic now. She had hardly been in the best of moods because of the living situation, but now, feeling like her friends had lied to her about something so important she was becoming uncharacteristically angry.
“I did some serious googling. It turns out my safe search was definitely switched off and well, i came up with an advert from a slight fetish website. There’s a guy who is offering a two bed flat fully furnished and entirely rent free.”
She paused, taking a deep breath and readying herself for what she was about to say.
“In exchange for a girl to fulfil his desires.”
Mia frowned and stared back at Jess. “What do you mean fulfil his desires?”
“Well, he didn’t go into specifics, which is why I messaged him - purely out of curiosity! Not mentioning you or promising anything.” she quickly added, seeing Mia’s reaction. “And yes, it’s sexual. But he’s not into anything weird, just the normal stuff..”
“Just the normal stuff of sex with a stranger in payment for an apartment?” Mia butted in.
“Well, yeah.. I know.”
“And of course it’s down to me because.. well because neither of you obviously will, will you?” She slumped in her chair, feeling beaten and a little betrayed. It was their only option, and it put the emphasis on her - do some deeds she doesn't want to but get housing for herself and her friends, or don’t and thereby let them down. :Lisa leant over to her friend, her hand on Mia’s arm rubbing it comfortingly.
“Honey, you don’t have to do it. But if you do choose to do it then we will be there with you the whole way to help and support you.”
“With me the whole way to help me? Really? Doesn’t sound like you’re going to be fulfilling his desires..” she huffed. “Can I at least meet this weirdo?”
I have an idea, or at least a basic pretence of group of friends with nowhere to live until their desperation leads them to find an apartment available to them, in return for the landlord receiving alternative payment.
The above writing is just me getting my ideas on to paper, which means that the details - what the landlord is like, what the girls are like is completely up for discussion.
I have written this so that 2 of the characters are implied as having reasons that they cannot be the one who 'pays the rent'. In particular, it is implied that one will be no sex before marriage and the other is a lesbian. This is not fixed, it is just how I was writing it!
Below is the intro that I’ve written over the last day or so, with further details at the bottom. I generally like to write these longer stories over email or google docs, but I’m happy to compromise if you have other preferences. I also enjoy discussing the story out of character - whether that be through google hangouts, Reddit pm or email - as I find this helps us write a more joined up story Most of the details are not set in stone, so please let me know if you have any ideas relating to the story as I would love your input.
I try to write about 3 times per week depending on my availabilities, with each post being 2-5 paragraphs long
The two figures standing in the kitchen could not have been more contrasting. At a little over 6 foot tall, with the broad shouldered build of a weightlifter, Jay was almost half a foot taller than his, slender yet similarly athletic cousin. Where he took after their mothers’ side of the family with blonde hair and sharp, blue eyes; Francesca’s features were almost entirely from her father’s side. Brown, wavy hair currently tied up in a messy bun on the top of her head, with green eyes and skin that tanned easily
“Please?” Francesca clasped her hands together as she looked up at her cousin. “Pleeeaaaase?” She begged again, her green eyes growing more and more puppy dog with each second.
Jay rolled his own eyes, tired of the constant badgering. “Dude! I said no” he finally replied, frustrated.
Francesca opened her mouth wide and took a deep, exaggerated breath. “Please-please-please-please-please-please-please-please-please-please-please-pleeeeeeaaasss..”
The verbal barrage finally came to an end as she ran out of breath, he voice trailing off to a high pitched wine and her face going red.
Her cousin watched on arms folded and eyebrow raised, unimpressed with the display.
“Are you done?” He asked, turning back to stir the simmering pot.
“You know I’m not!” She retorted, reaching up to her hair and pulling it out of the bun. “I can keep this up for weeks” She smiled a confident and cheeky smile. “Or have you forgotten what birthdays were like at home?”
Jay had not forgotten what birthdays were like. His cousin was certainly not spoilt - it was difficult to be spoilt coming from a single parent family living on the breadline - but she was stubborn and determined. If she wanted something, it was a fairly safe bet that she would get it. He knew what was coming. He pursed his lips, exhaling loudly. “Why? Why do you want it so badly?” He asked, turning around with his arms outstretched, exasperated.
“Because I want what we used to have when we were younger! Before you moved away and left me!” She tried guilt tripping him, pushing the emphasis back into him.
“You mean went to university?” The eyebrow of suspicion raised again
“Potato-potahto” she shrugged, changing tact without batting an eyelid. “We had fun and we were really close! It will be fun again”
“We still do have fun! You’re here every other day anyway” Jay responded, no longer riled. He was accustomed to batting away his younger cousin’s points. She could carry on like this until most people had given her what she wanted and begged her to stop.
“Yes but how much better would it be if I was living here? How ..”
“Frank” He said curtly, cutting her short. “It’s me. So cut the bullshit. Why does it mean so much to you?”
“I do want to live with you.” She started holding her hands out, palms facing Jay as if trying to reduce the impact of her statement. “But most of all I want to live away from Mum. She’s starting seeing someone so it’s kinda awkward. Plus I’m 19 and I want my own space”. Her voice was calmer now and her face was different too. As if she had removed her mask or dropped an act. “And you know what mum’s like. She’s overprotective of me. But with you..” she paused, smiling at her cousin. “With you, she would definitely let me move out.”
Jay watched her carefully, softening as he felt her finally telling the truth. It all added up now. Her mum was always protective of her, fearing that she would make the same mistakes she did and wanting to stop her from being hurt. Especially so in the last year, since Francesca’s break up. He had mistreated her and the way it hurt Francesca only exacerbated her mum’s natural instincts. But she trusted her nephew, who had spent most of his teenage years looking after his younger cousin while her mum worked double shifts or nights. So much so that she would likely feel happier with her daughter living with him than at home.
He sighed, realising how much his cousin had been through and how unjust her mother’s treatment of her was at times. She was a smart and strong young lady, more than capable of taking care of herself. He ran his hands through his hair and let them rest on the top of his head, his face half grimacing.
“You pay full rent. Every month, never late. Any parties have to be cleared with me in advance. As for guys..” he stopped, struggling to find the right words and deal with the thought of his own cousin having boys over. He needn’t have bothered trying. Such was her excitement and relief at Jay finally relenting that Francesca threw herself at him, interrupting him.
Brown wavy hair blurred Jay’s vision as she bundled into him with enough force to force him back a pace. Her arms wrapped around him as she buried her face into the muscles of his chest. His strong arms finally closed around her and she had to stifle a moan. Feeling safer and happier than anywhere else, she clung on for as long as she could without seeming weird.
“Next time you want something Frank, just come out and be honest with me ok?”
“I do want to live with you!” She repeated, her green eyes glinting as she smiled up at him. A lot..she thought to herself. more than I should want it
“But I’m sorry. I promise from now on I’ll be more open with you about what I want..”
“Like maybe a housewarming party? Well not party, gathering! Just the girls?”
I hope you liked the intro! Here’s a little info that either wasn’t included, or wasn’t in much detail:
Jay and Francesca are cousins (their mothers are sisters) who grew up in the same neighbourhood. Both their dads are no longer around and since their mums worked shifts or two jobs, they hung out at each other’s houses a lot. Jay being around 4 years older meant that from around the of 15 he was often looking after his cousin alone, 2-3 evenings per week. From this they developed a close, almost sibling-like relationship with Francesca often looking up to and idolising her cousin. They have plenty of jokes and good natured ribbing.
Francesca is smart, quick witted and caring. She excelled at school in particular in any debates, where her quick thinking would often tie others in knots. She wasn’t part of the cliche popular crowd that is evident in most schools, but had a good close circle of friends, with whom she’s still close. She was a good sport at school, part of the track and field team as well as playing some volleyball She got decent grades and decided against university because of the cost. Instead she works as an intern (not decided that detail yet!) With regards to her love life, she’s had one boyfriend who turned out to be cheating on her with at least two others. This crushed her and she hasn’t dated in any way since. After this her feelings for Jay intensified. She knows that Jay will likely not have the same feelings for her initially. But having seen some of his subconscious glances towards her, she’s confident that she can wear him down. She’s very pretty, with brown hair, green eyes and is slightly tanned. This could be because of mixed heritage (white and black or Hispanic perhaps) or because her father had darker features. Around 5’6 with a slender, athletic figure. She has toned thighs, a slim waist, wears a c cup and possesses a surprisingly firm and peachy ass.
Jay is intelligent, sporty and incredibly mature for his age. Growing up as part surrogate big brother, part man of the house he soon learned to work diligently at everything he did. It also gave him a steady head when it came to dealing with Francesca.
He excelled at sports, but because of his good grades and responsibilities at home, rarely was seen as a true jock. He left town for three years on a sports scholarship and attained a good degree. However regularly returned to see his family and kept up correspondence with his cousin over Skype and FaceTime. She refers to this as him leaving them, but they both know it’s only a joke He’s the only one who is allowed to call her Frank rather than Francesca or Frankie. He has short blonde hair, piercing blue eyes and a short beard. Years of sport and weightlifting have added muscle to an athletic and large frame. He’s by no means a model, but his overall looks make him quite good looking.
An Alternative means of paying the rent
Jessie aimlessly ran her finger over the graffiti etched into the wooden table top. Apparently a CH had some seriously deep feelings for a JY. The table was covered in scratches, intentional or otherwise, that were likely a result of the coffee shop happily taking any old table they could lay their hands on and placing it - with little care for it’s suitability for the space or whether it was stable or not - into whichever floor area it was deemed most necessary. She hadn’t realised before, but the attempt to make it look like anything but an identikit coffee shop instead made the place seem like a bit of a dumping ground for old furniture. She wondered for a second whether the bosses would let her and her friends stay there, but figured that they might lack somewhat for washing facilities.
She looked around at her two friends, one sat diagonally to each side of her, their faces buried desperately in their own laptops. Each girl looked tired, their hair out of place where they had played with it or run their hands through it over and over in frustration. While their make up showed the effects of rather aggressive eye rubbing.
It was hardly surprising, the past two hours had been tough. Finding a new place to rent is never easy, but doing so on a now a short timespan was even harder. Their landlord had let them down with just two weeks before the new term started. Now with two days left they still had nowhere they could afford to rent, no family or friends in the area to call on and tuition for their dream course to pay for.
“Right,” Lisa started, finally breaking the silence. “I got jack shit. What about you ladies?” she looked around, first at Mia and then Jessie. Mia shook her head, her brown hair giving in to the temptations of its natural curls.
“Same” she said quietly, hardly able to look up from her monitor.
Jessie didn’t answer. She couldn’t admit to herself what she was thinking, let alone bring herself to actually say it out loud.
“Well then, looks like we are all leaving the course. It was a pleasure knowing you beautiful ladies, but I’m going to have to call Mother and hope that she has changed her views on my ‘life choices’ and decides to let me back in the house”
“I don’t want to leave the course” Mia exhaled. “This is all I’ve wanted for the last 5 years. Well, that and Ryan Reynolds..” she added, trying to perk herself up with some humour, but still she deflated back into her seat.
“There may be an option…” Jessie began. “I was doing some serious googling.. “
“Jess! No!” Lucy hissed, cutting her friend off. “You can’t!”
“What? What do you mean she can’t?” Mia asked, looking from one to the other in confusion. “If there’s something then surely we should try. And why haven’t you told me yet?”
“Because Jess here said she wouldn’t do anything. We agreed that it wasn’t right and wouldn’t be fair. Didn’t we Jess?” Lucy gave her friend a stare that was capable of killing, or at least causing grievous bodily harm.
“Yes, but she deserves to know. She deserves to be given the option.”
“What do I deserve to know? What option?” Mia was becoming almost frantic now. She had hardly been in the best of moods because of the living situation, but now, feeling like her friends had lied to her about something so important she was becoming uncharacteristically angry.
“I did some serious googling. It turns out my safe search was definitely switched off and well, i came up with an advert from a slight fetish website. There’s a guy who is offering a two bed flat fully furnished and entirely rent free.”
She paused, taking a deep breath and readying herself for what she was about to say.
“In exchange for a girl to fulfil his desires.”
Mia frowned and stared back at Jess. “What do you mean fulfil his desires?”
“Well, he didn’t go into specifics, which is why I messaged him - purely out of curiosity! Not mentioning you or promising anything.” she quickly added, seeing Mia’s reaction. “And yes, it’s sexual. But he’s not into anything weird, just the normal stuff..”
“Just the normal stuff of sex with a stranger in payment for an apartment?” Mia butted in.
“Well, yeah.. I know.”
“And of course it’s down to me because.. well because neither of you obviously will, will you?” She slumped in her chair, feeling beaten and a little betrayed. It was their only option, and it put the emphasis on her - do some deeds she doesn't want to but get housing for herself and her friends, or don’t and thereby let them down. :Lisa leant over to her friend, her hand on Mia’s arm rubbing it comfortingly.
“Honey, you don’t have to do it. But if you do choose to do it then we will be there with you the whole way to help and support you.”
“With me the whole way to help me? Really? Doesn’t sound like you’re going to be fulfilling his desires..” she huffed. “Can I at least meet this weirdo?”
I have an idea, or at least a basic pretence of group of friends with nowhere to live until their desperation leads them to find an apartment available to them, in return for the landlord receiving alternative payment.
The above writing is just me getting my ideas on to paper, which means that the details - what the landlord is like, what the girls are like is completely up for discussion.
I have written this so that 2 of the characters are implied as having reasons that they cannot be the one who 'pays the rent'. In particular, it is implied that one will be no sex before marriage and the other is a lesbian. This is not fixed, it is just how I was writing it!