First AMV

[Pocky_Flavored_Ramen]

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And yes its a Naruto one (the anime not the character)

 

[Junko]

it was a good amv, a few stuff you need to improve.
1- you need to patronizer the action scenes with the heavy part of the music for better effect.
2- near the end, the music repeats itself since it was over before the video.

Those two things and you should have a perfect score. but it was very well made 7/10

 

[Pocky_Flavored_Ramen]

it was a good amv, a few stuff you need to improve.
1- you need to patronizer the action scenes with the heavy part of the music for better effect.
2- near the end, the music repeats itself since it was over before the video.

Those two things and you should have a perfect score. but it was very well made 7/10

Thank you for the constructive criticism, sincerely. Its hard to come by these days. People usually just tool themselves with simple phrases like "it sucks" or "awesome". Anyways I completely agree with the first thing you said, and while I'm not disagreeing with the second thing you said, I will note that the extended scene of video and music was intended for a more dramatic ending. There actually was a lot more things I wanted to add in there, but because of time constraints on the song didn't/couldn't. I did have plans to go back and work on this one already though so I'll take what you said to heart.

Edit: Just wanted it to make it clearer how much I did appreciate the praise, a 7/10 was much more than I was expecting for my first amv.

 

[Junko]

no problem, I always speak the truth in everything, I think is best to tell the truth and hurt someone to tell a lie and make someone happy.