Zero_Kyrael
Super-Earth
- Joined
- Nov 8, 2013
This is the opening to a story I wrote for me and my Partner when she was away and wanted to share Criticism and feedback is welcome I swear I can handle it! Hoping to improve to excite up my writing.
For help with the lack of describing characters.
Fayt(the first person) looks like (Warning links are explicit along with the content of the story)
http://furry.booru.org/index.php?page=post&s=view&id=35233
While Eka the owner (who appears in the second part posting soon)
http://furry.booru.org/index.php?page=post&s=view&id=186140
Though no tribal marks but stripes and heavier piercing (Originals are currently experiencing the 404 error)
Eka’s Club
I hadn’t heard of Eka’s club till very recently. I had not gone outside much after the great seal broke over the earth. The moon had been shattered no one no why but it had erupted into a thousand shards. The strange thing is what came next no one expected. Instead of the orbits being thrown off or destruction rain from the sky rather instead many people had changed. For the most part they were minor changes nothing Earthshattering. Many came to possess greater physical health and ability. However, Some like me had transformed taking on more animalistic features and urges. We were not treated as well either as for those of us who changed this way had become immune to disease and gained more animalistic prowess more so than the rest and we were the minority. I hadn’t gone out much since then and even less dating worried about my more animal body and urges on top of being attracted to women seemed an impossible task. Intill one day I received a note.
Inside the note was just one sentence. Eka’s club password Wildside. And behind the note was a small laminated pass that said VIP. I hadn’t thought intill then the club really actually was real. It was supposed to be a club that tailored exclusive to us Fursona’s or Furries as the street slang was. Much nicer then the other things I’ve been called when out during the day. I had decided to go. I took a quick shower put on my favorite pair of black stockings with purple bows. My lucky white almost translucent thon with a purple mini skirt and a Dark black corset. I had come to like black a lot more as a color since my changed as my fur was pale white except at the tips of my ears and paws. I looked myself over in the mirror and then thought about not going. I could feel something tingling inside me. More the animal urge and made me worried if I wanted to go out. I took a deep breath shrugged it off and headed out quickly getting in my car to avoid anyone who would look down upon me.
When I arrived it wasn’t at all what I expected. The building from the outside looked abandoned barely inhabitable at all with just a small sign that barely flashed Eka’s club and no booming noise at all that I usually associate with the rave clubs I had known before the change had happened. I quickly moved to the door and lightly tapped on it a couple times before a small slide opened up. “Password?”
“umm… wildside” I said as the slide moves closed. It was then quite for a little bit as nothing happened. Had I gotten it wrong I thought as I lightly played with my tail. Right as I started to think I should leave I hear several clicks and then the door opens. A well muscled black panther looking fursona opened up. He was tall and looked rather fierce even more so after he smiled his toothy fangs and let me in. I walked in as he shut the door and then I slowly turned to him His leather jacket only making him seem more fierce especially now inside a building behind a locked door.
“Ummm this is my first time…. And I have… ummm” Fumbles with my VIP pass nervously almost dropping it. “I have this I not sure where to go or… anything”
“No worries.” He pressed a small button and called for some one I think was called Tiara. “I have a guide on the way just wait inside.”
I nod at him and slowly walk down the hall. As I push open the next door the music hits me loud and blaring as I look in to see nothing but fursona’s just dancing drinking talking just like a normal rave would be expected to have. I smile a bit and don’t walk to far in as I’m waiting for some one to come. I start to worry as I feel the beat of the music in my chest and feel that animal twitch inside telling me to run out and be wild. I shake my head ignoring the feeling again knowing I’m more then that and lean against the wall waiting.
I didn’t wait long before a busty tiger looking fursona women comes up to me wearing a very revealing Maid’s outfit with the hair bonnet and and black and white colors and everything. It was hard to look right at her without feeling the blood rush to my cheeks. Her orange and black striped fur shone in strong contrast to the maid style outfit she wore.
“Hi I’m Tiara and I will be showing you around on your way up to the VIP room.” I could hear her perfectly which was surprising over the pounding music and can only bring myself to nod as I start to follow her wondering how she isn’t falling over in those heels. I had given up on shoes even if I found any that I could wear it felt unnatural now to not have the pads of my paws on the ground. We walked for a bit around the club as I saw nothing that different from any normal club except most people where dancing normally. No grinding or anything that sexual just everyone feeling the beat and dancing in crazy ways no human could ever hope to achieve.
Tiara turns and smiles at me as she slides a card through a read on the near by door.
“This next area is a little more… … exotic by is very popular option we have here.” She opens the door and I step through with her. I walk and don’t see anything different in this room when we first enter but as we walk in closer I quickly move my eyes away from the dancers on the floor and try to focus straight ahead. The dancers where dancing in here as well but in a much more open manner. Much more open. Girls of many different fursona’s where dancing around but with there shirts pulled down or even all the way off breasts bouncing madly with the music. It didn’t stop there many where grinding on each other almost nekkid panties swinging around girls knee’s and even hard cocks grinding against them. Some even where laying on a table conducting oral activities all with hungry looks in their eyes as they let themselves go in a variety of different manners. I keep my eyes forward on Tiara just following here a little shocked and feeling a little blushy as I feel that animal twitch inside me calling out to give in to it all the music the people. Being immune to all diseases and having a more powerful physic I could run free out there, but I again shake it off knowing it was just the animal urge as we move into an elevator moving us to the next floor.
Tiara turns and see me eyes down and looks at me a little confused. “You are going to the VIP section right? You didn’t get anything mixed up did you? I mean I know it your first time and all but you seemed shocked?” I quickly pull out my card and show it to her. “Yea I know the card and the boss will see you.” She tilts her head and shrugs as we stop and move out.
The next room caused my jaw to drop. While there were not nearly that many people many fursona’s in this room were having full on sex. I skim the room blushing as many on the floor roll around sometimes in pairs and sometimes more as we walk by. We quickly move through another set of doors into another room.
“Wait here I’m gonna make sure everything is in order.” Tiara walks up some stairs and leaves me in this 2nd room as I can’t help but stare. The room had bondage tables stocks sex toys in all different shapes and sizes. They were not empty either. Right near by in a pair of stocks bent over a cat girl moans in pleasure as a dog fursona loudly pushes in and out of her. I am a bit shocked but can’t look away as that twitch inside me pulses louder and louder. I hear a splatter on the floor as the dog pulls away and see cum splatter all over her feet as she moan out before a cat fursona grips her hips and feels the space left by the previous fursona. I turn and eyes go even wider as I see the dog who was fucking her had nice perky breasts and slowly skimmed the room. A lot of the girls in the bondage where all girls but all the people around I realized where futanari fursona’s moving around the bound girls. I blush harder as I see signs written on the backs of each of them. Free anal, Free oral, Fuck me anyway you want, or a mix of different instructions with some clearly saying DO NOT do with a list under it. I start to pant as the pulsing in my chest gets louder. I can’t hear the music anymore just the moans of ecstasy the girls give out as they get taking by a futa, and then another. The pools of cum on the floor under them growing. My heart races pounding feeling an urge to just give in to the animalistic side and go get locked up. I breath a bit harder it wouldn’t be so bad… I could only do a couple things. I wouldn’t let them have my pussy but the rest maybe? I shook the thoughts out of my head and wiggle as I can feel my white panties must have a small blue stain in them by now. I wonder why Tiara has come back as I watch a particularly excited lion looking fursona grab a black and red fox who is tied spread eagle on a table and moving up to her and oiling her breasts before with a near roar pushes between them as she licks at his tip.
I try to look away and wait worried about where I’ll be going next as I see a black and red fox girl who tummy is swollen being taken by to horse fursona’s sucking one as the other is nearly breaking her ass. I try to take deep breathes as I feel my nips push hard against my bra as Tiara returns and takes me up the stairs.
We move up the stairs and Tiara lets me into the room and shuts it behind me .
I walk into a big empty room with you sitting in the middle. I walk slowly up not sure what to expect as I lightly play with my tail nervously. “I... i was randomly picked for the VIP room... did i take a wrong turn ? ? I say as I tug down my short skirt to half way down my thighs where my stockings began as i dressed for the dancing.
She looked up at me an smiled then waves her hand “You may leave, guard the door outside.” the security nods an leaves us alone as she looks back at me. “Whats your name.”
And that is how I first experienced Club Eka.
For help with the lack of describing characters.
Fayt(the first person) looks like (Warning links are explicit along with the content of the story)
http://furry.booru.org/index.php?page=post&s=view&id=35233
While Eka the owner (who appears in the second part posting soon)
http://furry.booru.org/index.php?page=post&s=view&id=186140
Though no tribal marks but stripes and heavier piercing (Originals are currently experiencing the 404 error)
Eka’s Club
I hadn’t heard of Eka’s club till very recently. I had not gone outside much after the great seal broke over the earth. The moon had been shattered no one no why but it had erupted into a thousand shards. The strange thing is what came next no one expected. Instead of the orbits being thrown off or destruction rain from the sky rather instead many people had changed. For the most part they were minor changes nothing Earthshattering. Many came to possess greater physical health and ability. However, Some like me had transformed taking on more animalistic features and urges. We were not treated as well either as for those of us who changed this way had become immune to disease and gained more animalistic prowess more so than the rest and we were the minority. I hadn’t gone out much since then and even less dating worried about my more animal body and urges on top of being attracted to women seemed an impossible task. Intill one day I received a note.
Inside the note was just one sentence. Eka’s club password Wildside. And behind the note was a small laminated pass that said VIP. I hadn’t thought intill then the club really actually was real. It was supposed to be a club that tailored exclusive to us Fursona’s or Furries as the street slang was. Much nicer then the other things I’ve been called when out during the day. I had decided to go. I took a quick shower put on my favorite pair of black stockings with purple bows. My lucky white almost translucent thon with a purple mini skirt and a Dark black corset. I had come to like black a lot more as a color since my changed as my fur was pale white except at the tips of my ears and paws. I looked myself over in the mirror and then thought about not going. I could feel something tingling inside me. More the animal urge and made me worried if I wanted to go out. I took a deep breath shrugged it off and headed out quickly getting in my car to avoid anyone who would look down upon me.
When I arrived it wasn’t at all what I expected. The building from the outside looked abandoned barely inhabitable at all with just a small sign that barely flashed Eka’s club and no booming noise at all that I usually associate with the rave clubs I had known before the change had happened. I quickly moved to the door and lightly tapped on it a couple times before a small slide opened up. “Password?”
“umm… wildside” I said as the slide moves closed. It was then quite for a little bit as nothing happened. Had I gotten it wrong I thought as I lightly played with my tail. Right as I started to think I should leave I hear several clicks and then the door opens. A well muscled black panther looking fursona opened up. He was tall and looked rather fierce even more so after he smiled his toothy fangs and let me in. I walked in as he shut the door and then I slowly turned to him His leather jacket only making him seem more fierce especially now inside a building behind a locked door.
“Ummm this is my first time…. And I have… ummm” Fumbles with my VIP pass nervously almost dropping it. “I have this I not sure where to go or… anything”
“No worries.” He pressed a small button and called for some one I think was called Tiara. “I have a guide on the way just wait inside.”
I nod at him and slowly walk down the hall. As I push open the next door the music hits me loud and blaring as I look in to see nothing but fursona’s just dancing drinking talking just like a normal rave would be expected to have. I smile a bit and don’t walk to far in as I’m waiting for some one to come. I start to worry as I feel the beat of the music in my chest and feel that animal twitch inside telling me to run out and be wild. I shake my head ignoring the feeling again knowing I’m more then that and lean against the wall waiting.
I didn’t wait long before a busty tiger looking fursona women comes up to me wearing a very revealing Maid’s outfit with the hair bonnet and and black and white colors and everything. It was hard to look right at her without feeling the blood rush to my cheeks. Her orange and black striped fur shone in strong contrast to the maid style outfit she wore.
“Hi I’m Tiara and I will be showing you around on your way up to the VIP room.” I could hear her perfectly which was surprising over the pounding music and can only bring myself to nod as I start to follow her wondering how she isn’t falling over in those heels. I had given up on shoes even if I found any that I could wear it felt unnatural now to not have the pads of my paws on the ground. We walked for a bit around the club as I saw nothing that different from any normal club except most people where dancing normally. No grinding or anything that sexual just everyone feeling the beat and dancing in crazy ways no human could ever hope to achieve.
Tiara turns and smiles at me as she slides a card through a read on the near by door.
“This next area is a little more… … exotic by is very popular option we have here.” She opens the door and I step through with her. I walk and don’t see anything different in this room when we first enter but as we walk in closer I quickly move my eyes away from the dancers on the floor and try to focus straight ahead. The dancers where dancing in here as well but in a much more open manner. Much more open. Girls of many different fursona’s where dancing around but with there shirts pulled down or even all the way off breasts bouncing madly with the music. It didn’t stop there many where grinding on each other almost nekkid panties swinging around girls knee’s and even hard cocks grinding against them. Some even where laying on a table conducting oral activities all with hungry looks in their eyes as they let themselves go in a variety of different manners. I keep my eyes forward on Tiara just following here a little shocked and feeling a little blushy as I feel that animal twitch inside me calling out to give in to it all the music the people. Being immune to all diseases and having a more powerful physic I could run free out there, but I again shake it off knowing it was just the animal urge as we move into an elevator moving us to the next floor.
Tiara turns and see me eyes down and looks at me a little confused. “You are going to the VIP section right? You didn’t get anything mixed up did you? I mean I know it your first time and all but you seemed shocked?” I quickly pull out my card and show it to her. “Yea I know the card and the boss will see you.” She tilts her head and shrugs as we stop and move out.
The next room caused my jaw to drop. While there were not nearly that many people many fursona’s in this room were having full on sex. I skim the room blushing as many on the floor roll around sometimes in pairs and sometimes more as we walk by. We quickly move through another set of doors into another room.
“Wait here I’m gonna make sure everything is in order.” Tiara walks up some stairs and leaves me in this 2nd room as I can’t help but stare. The room had bondage tables stocks sex toys in all different shapes and sizes. They were not empty either. Right near by in a pair of stocks bent over a cat girl moans in pleasure as a dog fursona loudly pushes in and out of her. I am a bit shocked but can’t look away as that twitch inside me pulses louder and louder. I hear a splatter on the floor as the dog pulls away and see cum splatter all over her feet as she moan out before a cat fursona grips her hips and feels the space left by the previous fursona. I turn and eyes go even wider as I see the dog who was fucking her had nice perky breasts and slowly skimmed the room. A lot of the girls in the bondage where all girls but all the people around I realized where futanari fursona’s moving around the bound girls. I blush harder as I see signs written on the backs of each of them. Free anal, Free oral, Fuck me anyway you want, or a mix of different instructions with some clearly saying DO NOT do with a list under it. I start to pant as the pulsing in my chest gets louder. I can’t hear the music anymore just the moans of ecstasy the girls give out as they get taking by a futa, and then another. The pools of cum on the floor under them growing. My heart races pounding feeling an urge to just give in to the animalistic side and go get locked up. I breath a bit harder it wouldn’t be so bad… I could only do a couple things. I wouldn’t let them have my pussy but the rest maybe? I shook the thoughts out of my head and wiggle as I can feel my white panties must have a small blue stain in them by now. I wonder why Tiara has come back as I watch a particularly excited lion looking fursona grab a black and red fox who is tied spread eagle on a table and moving up to her and oiling her breasts before with a near roar pushes between them as she licks at his tip.
I try to look away and wait worried about where I’ll be going next as I see a black and red fox girl who tummy is swollen being taken by to horse fursona’s sucking one as the other is nearly breaking her ass. I try to take deep breathes as I feel my nips push hard against my bra as Tiara returns and takes me up the stairs.
We move up the stairs and Tiara lets me into the room and shuts it behind me .
I walk into a big empty room with you sitting in the middle. I walk slowly up not sure what to expect as I lightly play with my tail nervously. “I... i was randomly picked for the VIP room... did i take a wrong turn ? ? I say as I tug down my short skirt to half way down my thighs where my stockings began as i dressed for the dancing.
She looked up at me an smiled then waves her hand “You may leave, guard the door outside.” the security nods an leaves us alone as she looks back at me. “Whats your name.”
And that is how I first experienced Club Eka.