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Planetoid
- Joined
- Jun 8, 2013
A detective is hired by one femme fatale to find her sister, yet another femme fatale. Along the way the detective (guy or gal) runs into more, you guessed it, femme fatales, one after another.
The writing would stick with a pulp fiction like theme that could slap Dashiell Hammett in the face for looking twice. It would be film noir meets playful pinups and tie-downs. The nights will always be dark and mysterious with looming clouds that dash away hope leaving only a deep desire for two people in love to make love and make a few bucks to get by.
Think The Big Sleep meets Maltese Falcon and Casablanca. Think long kisses, harsh slaps, strong firm tugs on the hair, and backstabbing when the kink isn’t kinky enough. Think similes that tie two unrelated topics together, so that the preposition writhes against the antecedent it’s bound to: her voice was so husky it could pull a dog sled. Or keep it more serious and sensual: she kissed the nameless detective and dropped the gun back into her purse.
The writing would stick with a pulp fiction like theme that could slap Dashiell Hammett in the face for looking twice. It would be film noir meets playful pinups and tie-downs. The nights will always be dark and mysterious with looming clouds that dash away hope leaving only a deep desire for two people in love to make love and make a few bucks to get by.
Think The Big Sleep meets Maltese Falcon and Casablanca. Think long kisses, harsh slaps, strong firm tugs on the hair, and backstabbing when the kink isn’t kinky enough. Think similes that tie two unrelated topics together, so that the preposition writhes against the antecedent it’s bound to: her voice was so husky it could pull a dog sled. Or keep it more serious and sensual: she kissed the nameless detective and dropped the gun back into her purse.