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the people's commander and his lady -- (LingeringDesire and The_Gladiator)

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The People's Commander, and his Lady
By The Gladiator and LingeringDesire

Night was slowly drawing closer. The night sounds slowly becoming more prominent as the day sounds faded with the setting sun. The sunset was a riotous bloom of fiery reds and oranges; however they were not visible through the thick tree cover that covered the slopes of the mountains. A man knelt among those trees. He was oblivious to the beauty of the sunset, for his keen green eyes were trained on the carpet of pine needles before him rather than upwards into the heavens.

Long fingers delved into the soft loam, moving some leaves aside to get a better look at the boot print in the mud. Although heir to the throne and leader of all military forces in the land, this man still felt at home in the woods on his own. This to him was familiar, not the clamor of a battle field command tent, but him and the wilderness.

He knew this feeling came from the 5 years he spent in the military as a scout and ranger. His father had been almost horrified to hear that his son, when told he would have his pick of assignments for his mandatory military service had chosen not to become a knight and live in the lap of luxury. No, this son of the lord Magnus had chosen to serve as a scout in the common army. “Serving our people as just sir Vallon is not what they need and not my calling. I will show them I am no better than they are.”

Near to 10 years later, the much reluctant “Sir Vallon” was now a knight, and military commander, however he still preferred these times, when his men consulted his expertise not as their leader, but as one of them. And indeed, contrary to his father’s beliefs and the people had never known a commander or a man like Vallon. Vallon had never stooped to bragging to his father that was not his way, his actions spoke louder than his words, and the people’s love for their prince, the people’s commander, as they called him was evident.

“Is it not as I said m’lord?” the voice of swiftbird, the scout who had drawn Vallon out of the city broke The quiet of the evening, shattering the peace of Vallon’s inner reverie, his contemplation of what he saw before him.

“Vallon grunted his assent as he considered the track for another moment and then finally he spoke. His voice came out in a rich baritone, smooth and melodic, “Aye, it is not a track from any of our people. It would have taken a skilled ranger or scout to spot the subtle differences in boot treads.” He said, swiftbird’s face brightening at the older man’s compliment. Vallon’s finger traced the boot print as he spoke, “As you can see here, based on the pattern I would say it is Rercarian.” He said referencing a neighboring country, one in which they had been at war with on and off for most of his lifetime. “But whether it is a scout for a prelude to war, or an emissary coming to parley we really cannot say.”

Placing his hands on his knees Vallon rose smoothly with a catlike grace. He stood to his full 6 foot height and wiped the dirt from his hands onto the green and brown trousers he wore, pants designed to help him blend into the forest surrounding him. “You have done good work, and keep me appraised if you see anything.” He ordered clapping the other man on the shoulder. Swiftbird nodded as he watched his commander walk off.

Emerging from the curtain of trees, Vallon found himself overlooking the town and across the way he could see the castle with its spires and turrets. Although he could not see it, he could imagine his best friend’s balcony halfway up the wall facing the town. She would be painting he was sure, an activity that was her favorite pastime, or so she wanted the world to think. On the contrary Vallon suspected her favorite times were when he took her hunting and fishing, got her off the palace grounds and out of her gilded prison. However, these trips were somewhat of a secret, so to the public eye her favorite pastime was painting as befit a proper lady. After all, proper ladies did not stick their thumb down the throat of a river trout to rip out its guts, or Practice knife throwing around a fire eating deer she had just cooked over the open flames. A slight smile twisted Vallon’s lips at those thoughts. Glancing up, Vallon saw how far the sun had sunk in the sky and swore to himself. He was late, and Vallon knew if he did not pick up his pace, even he would not be immune to a tongue lashing from Elia.

Picking up his pace, the young nobleman wondered not for the first time why he had agreed to this. The answer was simple enough, his childhood friend had smiled at him and unable to refuse her anything he had agreed. “I guess it wouldn’t hurt me to learn to dance, I will need to be married someday, and my wife to be will want me to not look a fool.” One might wonder why she had to beg her best friend to practice dancing with her, could she not just use another male, perhaps a potential suitor. The answer to that was of course, no. Most suitors had given up trying for her hand; most did not want to face her over protective father, lord magnus’s chief advisor, and Vallon. Vallon wanted the best for her, so maybe he had threatened a few of them, and maybe he had started a few rumors about a couple others, but really those men were not worthy of Elia. He knew eventually she would have to marry, but for now, he’d much rather threaten and drive them away before he had to kill one for hurting her. Be proactive,” was one of his mottoes.

He made it to the palace in almost record time and rushed to his chambers to wash and change before he sought out Elia. He dressed himself in clean pants, still a brown, unless their fathers ordered it, he still favored earth tones. He did put on a royal blue doublet that was emblazoned with the lion and falcon of his house. He started to put on the glove he wore when Skye, his own falcon was present, but then took it back off. Skye was away, it was mating season, and she was probably off tending to that. He knew that his faithful bird would return when she was ready. Vallon finished getting ready by tying his dark chocolate hair back from his face with a leather thong. When left to its own devices it came almost to his shoulders, but he often wore it tied back.

The last lingering rays of the sun were just disappearing behind the rolling mountains, coated in their blanket of trees when he made it to Elia’s chambers and stepped silently as the cat that was one of his household emblems. He could see Elia still trying to paint despite the late hour and the dwindling light. When Maria, the noble woman’s servant, rose to cover Elia with her cloak, Vallon was there to take it from her. “Allow me.” He said in his deep voice, seeming even deeper because of how quiet he spoke.

“It is a fine likeness little one,” he said regarding her painting with his eye which was well accustomed to noticing detail. It was something they shared, an attention to detail. “You can even see old farmer Gunther chasing his cows.” He said, a touch of admiration in his voice as his hands draped the cloak around her shoulders. His hands rubbing her shoulders for just a second, transferring some of his warmth to her bare skin. “You would not be so cold if you wore more clothing…. But, do not get me wrong you look more than lovely in that dress.” He said taking a step back hands raised palms out in a placating gesture, realizing that he might have spared himself from a tongue lashing by complimenting her painting, but he had undone all his good work with his following comment.
 
It was a perfect sunset... the day had been rather perfect to but this. She was giddy just gazing at the streaks of brass, orange and deep blue rake across the sky as the sun made it's final descent of the day. "Maria, ready my paints... please." She knew Vallon would take his sweet time, so why not enjoy her last moments of freedom this evening. A ball was being held in honor of something or another, she was required to attend and made HIM promise to be her escort.

It would be hell to have to trot along on the arm of some overweight, overbearing, pompous ass... might as well be on the arm of whom she loved. A blush crossed her cheeks as the thought flitted in and then soon out. Love. It was true and it hurt. She couldn't bring herself to say anything about the affection. She a noble's daughter, his father's advisor none the less and HE the Prince. It all made for a delightful fairytale. Except, it was truly her life.

The shimmering gown of silver she wore accented her pale skin and the way she wore her dark hair back allowed her face to be seen. However, the low cut of the ball gown proved what a woman she'd become. Her father meant to see her married, to the highest bidder or highest in the land... no doubt. It was for shame that each suitor had bailed out, claiming disinterest at the last possible moment. So ne'er a proposal hit her ears, for which she was thankful. Voicing her opinion on the matter only infuriated her father and he begged her to give up such silly notions as a prince. Although, as of late he was calmer and more willing to listen.

A prince, the prince of her heart. Did he love her too? She could only hope and guess. Each time he gazed at her she saw something spring across his face. But he kept it to himself. Surely if he showed interest and approached her father... would he be accepted? The thought of living a life without him hit her hard and the streaks of fading light were blurred by her tears. Taking no notice of the time she continued in her efforts of painting, only hindered by the tears of her thoughts. Her young heart was aching and sore.

Feeling his approach Elianna dried her eyes and continued on as though nothing was the matter. A wide smile flashed across her lips and her gray eyes shone up at him at his endearment. "Yes, he was running about madly scaring them to and fro... it made me laugh and well I had to add it... something to do whilst I waited for my escort." She laughed softly, teasing him about his tardiness.

A shiver of delight trailed her spine at his touch. She whipped around as he backed away, her eyes flitting over him curiously. "Must I be covered from head to toe to suit your liking, come now... even you must have realized that my parents are intent on showing off my various assets tonight. Perhaps their flagrant show will snag a Prince... one that will take note of my..." She gazed up at him, "Smile." Her lips parted as she took his arm.

"Away with you, we must away for certain they are going to send out the hounds to seek us out if we don't go now." She left the cloak where it fell and on his arm led the way to the ballroom. Music from a violinist reached her ears. The music was sad and beautiful at the same time. Her eyes shone as she peered up at him. "I am certain this is to be the finest night..." Her words were whispered as they stepped through the crowd.

Ooh's and Aah's abounded, she paused with him. The adoration for the male shone through in the way she gazed up at him. One would have to be blind not to notice, her father scowled deeming her to make a mockery of this entire thing. "Shall we eat first or would you like to try out a dance or two?" Her hand curled on his arm, squeezing lightly.
 
Vallon had learned of the ball on his pass through the palace. He had been away for days and somehow missed all the preparations. Vallon soon came to realize that the rouse of dance lessons that Elianna had used to secure his word that he would spend the evening with her had been that a rouse. He of course could not be angry with her for her deception, she knew him well, if she had not he most likely would have put in the barest amount of time required by his station. Although he would spend hours drinking and laughing with his men, or even commoners in a tavern, he had little patience for the many social gatherings common to most nobles of his rank.

He chuckled at her comment regarding old farmer Gunther and then her light jab at him. “Well I assure my lady that I would have been on time had I known that we were attending such a celebration rather than just spending the evening alone with you.” His fingertips lingered on her shoulders the intimacy in his voice suggesting that perhaps he would have enjoyed such a thing more than the pompous gathering they were headed to. It was his way of returning her little jab as well.

He snorted, “Of course I want no one to see how beautiful you are, I may have to kill the next suitor to keep some lowlife from besmirching your honor.” He let his eyes roam over her, “Although I must admit that gown flatters your “assets” very well... “A prince hmmm? The only other prince in the land besides for myself is Malacai, and as far as I know he is still away in Rercar.” Vallon’s younger brother had been fostered in the land of their on again and off again enemies, as part of a piece initiative. Malacai returned to his homeland very infrequently and all the rumors spoke that Malacai did not wish to return on a permanent basis, that the foreign land was now his home. Vallon honestly could not say, his brother never really talked about it to his estranged older brother.

“Aye my lady, we must away.” He said, he had switched to addressing her in a more formal manner, abandoning the familiarity of little one for the formal my lady, even still, the name still sounded familiar rolling from his tongue, for he would never address her so familiarly as little one in public. He bowed over her hand kissing it softly before he tucked it into the crook of his arm.

He walked with her to the ballroom, noting that they were one of the last ones to enter; he couldn’t help smiling at that, just how he liked it…the less time he had to spend with the sycophantic nobles the better. There were lots of whispers as the two strowed through the elegant ballroom. They did make a lovely sight together, Vallon was considered to be very handsome and strong, while Elianna was nothing but beautiful. Vallon considered her question, “Which option gets me out of socializing with these…people?” he said, the pause suggesting that people had not been his first choice in descriptors. As he guided her through the room he was forced to stop and greet many of the nobles, all eager to ingratiate themselves with the prince. Many of them also greeted Elia, for her father was also very well known. Elia earned more than one glare for being on Vallon’s arm, a coveted honor that others dearly wanted.
 
The young woman preferred his tender endearment, his private affection in their single moments of peace. Something that seemed to be happening less and less the older they grew. Were it not for adult responsibilities they could wile away their days in one another's company. Though if it weren't for her father's complaints she'd have begun to accompany him on one of his many excursions, even though she was sure Vallon himself would be aghast to allow. Stating the dangers and hardships she might bare. However, she couldn't imagine anything but pleasantries in being his constant and faithful companion.

Elia tried not to think of how his simple kiss made her skin tingle with delight. How it made her heart fill to bursting. All eyes were on them and it did her good not to think such things. She smiled up at him, a wide and enchanting thing. "Now now," she chided gently patting his arm. She knew of his dislike and therefore the idea of calling it dance lessons had eased his comfort level, though she was sure it spiked the further the duo worked into the gathering. The smiled and glares were met with grace, how close she was to knowing how they felt. For even imagining another on his arm brought disdain to the forefront of her mind.

"Come let us dance Vallon," She smiled up at him tugging him onto the floor. Others gathered and some followed. most making room for the young prince and lady. Parting she ran her hands down his arm to his fingers. She smiled at the contact of their bare fingers, her hand shook as the sparks affected her entire being. The music started, the loud beginning notes before they were stepping close and then away, close and then away. Fingers entwined for a few inches as they moved in an elegant circle. Her cheeks colored as she laughed, the duo twirling as her skirt wrapped about his legs and she pressed closer.

The dance was followed by another, each going their separate ways before being joined again to move as one. She found it indicative of their lives. They would always be apart, but come back together. Her cheeks were high in color and a wide smile on her lips as she pulled him off the floor with a soft giggle. "I need a break, perhaps a refreshment and then a cooling walk in the gardens?" She mused, though really it wasn't an option. Elia moved through the crowd and secured a glass of punch before moving to his side and nodding toward the balcony behind them.

Her eyes shone up at him in the moonlight when he joined her, the punch cup poised at her lips. The gardens were silver, bathed in the light of the moon. She smiled up at him, "You are a fantastic dancer Vallon. Perhaps you could show me more of your moves when alone in the garden?" She wanted him to pull her close and keep her there, something many frowned upon though she had seen her parents dance this way in their parlor many times. Her heart thundered, willing her to confess her undying love of him, but her lips stayed silent.
 
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