In need of help on a piece...

[TheyDontKnowIBurn]

This is the piece...

And I need to make it better for an art show.
Critque, pleeeease?

 

[M3lll1c]

What is the art show about, what is the theme persay?

 

[TheyDontKnowIBurn]

No theme. Just random pieces. I'm a senior and so this year is my last chance.

 

[Nihilistic_Impact]

Maybe add a logo/design to the shirt to give it some more depth and complexity to the whole piece.

 

[Abulurd]

The head is at profile, but the rest of the body you're almost entirely seeing the back. It looks a little unnatural to me. I'd maybe redraw the head and have it looking more front-and-to-the-left rather than looking straight to the left.

The head's also a bit big, maybe. But hey, I'm not an artist; that's just me...

 

[Kite Xiroh]

You need a big, epic logo on the back of that shirt. Also, add some complexity to the pants.

Multiple belts, studs, even pockets.