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I know that request threads should usually have multiple stories but right now I am just interested in one that came to me very recently. I have already written the first post to it but if you like the basic idea and just want to change a few details just let me know and I am sure we can work something out. The basic plot is two best friends in college fought over the same girl, and in the end the kind friend won out over the playboy. A few years later however the relationship has lost some of its spark, and while the husband is away on one of his many business trips the old playboy friend decides to contact the wife. She usually would turn him down knowing his intentions, but she decides to give him one more shot, maybe just because she wants some of that excitement back.

Here is the first post, that way you can see my writing style and see if it is something you would want to work with.


Chris woke up early in the morning to kiss his wife goodbye while she still slept. He had a 8:00am flight to Detroit and he would not return until the following week. He whispered goodbye before walking out of the bedroom and getting in the taxi. He had been married to her for 4 years and he thought everything was going great, they had calmed down from their partying life, went to neighborhood parties, and still had sex at least once or twice a week. Chris barely missed the nights at the bars and the frat house, even though his friend David did not think that way. David was Chris's best friend since freshman year. Despite this they were polar opposites, Chris was a 5 foot 11 man with short brown hair and brown eyes. He came from Florida and grew up on the beach and was a swimmer throughout all of his school. This made him a lean man, his muscles were well defined, although his suit that he now had to wear hid that. David on the other hand was 6 foot 3, he had sandy blonde hair and forest green eyes. He was a football player, although it never took him anywhere after college. Even though he had stopped playing after they graduated he still was in amazing shape, thinking of himself as regular Adonis, and this wasn't too far from the truth. His ego was almost as large as his biceps, and it was backed up by the fact that he had gotten any girl he had ever sought after. Except of course for Chris's wife, both had gone after her at the same time but she had fallen for Chris for some reason that he had never understood. This did not stop David from hitting on her throughout the dating process and even after the two of them had gotten married.

Now that Chris had left David thought it was finally his chance to be with David's wife. He sent her a text at noon that day, telling her that she should meet up with him at the bar at 8. David of course had arrived at 7:30, ordering a nice tall dark beer and going to sit in a booth in the back. He was wearing a black designer suit with a white button up shirt underneath. The white shirt had the first few buttons undone so that anyone could see his defined pecks budging against his clothes. He was sipping on his beer as it approached 8:00, wondering if she was actually going to show up for a night out on the town.
 
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