Nightingale
Super-Earth
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It's a work in progress, but critiques, suggestions, comments? Please!
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- Thread starter Nightingale
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Forbidden6ex
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- Feb 2, 2011
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- United States
I'm not a good one to critique cause anyone who can draw a straight line impresses me cause i have a hard time doing even that.
but i would say i would like to see her face a bit softer with, the strong jaw line and cheek bones gives her a bit of a masculine quality.
but i would say i would like to see her face a bit softer with, the strong jaw line and cheek bones gives her a bit of a masculine quality.
Ahroun_Deltori
Super-Earth
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- Feb 14, 2011
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- Manchester NH
That's pretty good, Though I would have to agree with Forbidden about the jawline, maybe if you angled it up a bit more and soften it up. Other than that, I can say I love the way it looks like the wind is pulling at the shorter tresses near the top of her head. It gives it a more natural feel. Less superimposed. If that makes any sense