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kogohazan
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- May 15, 2013
Hello everyone!
Putting it out there to see if anyone is interested in a Hazbin hotel story. Primary the story would be Hazbin, but I am not against adding the Hellava boss characters as the story progresses.
WHAT I AM LOOKING FOR
My OC x your OC
My OC x Charlie
(My OC is an Angel pretending to be a sinner and will be taking Vaggie's place. Charlie is single when the story starts)
Having a good time with characters at the hotel. I love doing slice of life and fun little things on the side.
WHAT I AM WILLING TO DO
I will play any and all male characters that you would like and can play female characters as well against any character you would like. I'm willing to at least try almost anything you want, and am very willing to do what you would like if you would like a character played a certain way.
Incorporate any ideas you want added. I love having a thought out story plan but I also love surprises too!
WHAT YOU CAN EXPECT FROM ME
I at the very least will try to post once a day. Things happen and I may not be able too but usually I can keep that promise. I do not expect the same from you, but fairly frequent posts are appreciated. I generally write three to five paragraphs, I can get in the zone though and write very long responses. If you know you wont be able to post for a while or simply wish to end the story, just let me know! I am very accommodating and their will be no hard feelings. My preference is for the story to be 80/90% story and 20/10% smut. Making sure everyone has believable relationships is very important to me, but also love doing side content for fast and fun/sex scenes
Sinners are still sterile as they are in the show. HOWEVER I do have a work around that I will explain if your interested. I love impregnation and birth and do want them in the story so I have added a way for committed couples to have kids while keeping things safe for random flings
What I like!
Story
Romance
Fluff
Genuine affection/passion
impregnation
Birth
Talking out of story/planning story beats
What I don't
any bathroom stuff
generally no rape (But it is hell and sinners will be sinners so if its for the story then I'm ok) So my characters won't be doing it....but sinners on the street still might.
If you or interested / have questions/ or want to know more. Send me a message and I'll get back to you as soon as I can! I can play here or on Discord whatever works better for you!
Putting it out there to see if anyone is interested in a Hazbin hotel story. Primary the story would be Hazbin, but I am not against adding the Hellava boss characters as the story progresses.
WHAT I AM LOOKING FOR
My OC x your OC
My OC x Charlie
(My OC is an Angel pretending to be a sinner and will be taking Vaggie's place. Charlie is single when the story starts)
Having a good time with characters at the hotel. I love doing slice of life and fun little things on the side.
WHAT I AM WILLING TO DO
I will play any and all male characters that you would like and can play female characters as well against any character you would like. I'm willing to at least try almost anything you want, and am very willing to do what you would like if you would like a character played a certain way.
Incorporate any ideas you want added. I love having a thought out story plan but I also love surprises too!
WHAT YOU CAN EXPECT FROM ME
I at the very least will try to post once a day. Things happen and I may not be able too but usually I can keep that promise. I do not expect the same from you, but fairly frequent posts are appreciated. I generally write three to five paragraphs, I can get in the zone though and write very long responses. If you know you wont be able to post for a while or simply wish to end the story, just let me know! I am very accommodating and their will be no hard feelings. My preference is for the story to be 80/90% story and 20/10% smut. Making sure everyone has believable relationships is very important to me, but also love doing side content for fast and fun/sex scenes
Sinners are still sterile as they are in the show. HOWEVER I do have a work around that I will explain if your interested. I love impregnation and birth and do want them in the story so I have added a way for committed couples to have kids while keeping things safe for random flings
What I like!
Story
Romance
Fluff
Genuine affection/passion
impregnation
Birth
Talking out of story/planning story beats
What I don't
any bathroom stuff
generally no rape (But it is hell and sinners will be sinners so if its for the story then I'm ok) So my characters won't be doing it....but sinners on the street still might.
If you or interested / have questions/ or want to know more. Send me a message and I'll get back to you as soon as I can! I can play here or on Discord whatever works better for you!
Writing sample- The night before sinsmas
(This was a present I made for a friend at Christmas)
It had been a few weeks after being brought to the Hazbin Hotel by Charlie and Mars had settled into his new surroundings. True to his word he had given her his ideas on how he thought she could improve the redemption experience, and after a slightly problematic but overall worthwhile meeting with her father the place was looking much better than it had when he had first arrived. She and the other house guests were still in the dark about what he did once night fell but during the day when he was following his end of the deal and going to Charlie's lessons. It was where he found himself at the moment waiting on the couch with Angel, where he had been for almost the past hour. It had been an awkward sort of silence and Angel dicked around on his phone, clearly bored out of his mind and Mars kept checking his watch to see the time. Charlie was fantastically late for the lessons start time, but neither of them had bothered to check where she was. They both really didn't want to do it, there was only so much one could take of the princess's shitty plays, sing-alongs, and trust activities so a day off was nice, but still it was not like her. In the lounge the great grandfather clock went off signaling the hour and they both looked at it.
"Well that's the hour. Guess we are done." Mars said standing up. "Yep." Angel said standing and stretching. "Where the fuck is doll face? Not like her to miss a lesson." Mars said. "Not my problem. I only had ta show for the lesson and since she didn't tat means I'm free for the afternoon!" Angel said. He hurried out of the lounge to the main hall where the bar was jumping to his seat. "Oh Huuuuuuusky! I'm all yours now." Angel said going and making eyes at Husk. "Lucky fucking me." Husk said grumbling as he cleaned a glass. Mars walked out as well but still couldn't let Charlie's disappearance go unanswered. "You didn't see chatterbox did you kitty?" Mars asked. "First off, fuck you. And secondly no." She hasn't been down all morning." Husk said. She hadn't been seen downstairs at all. So the best place to check would be her room. Ignoring the cat and the spider for now Mars headed up to see if he could find her.
Mars walked silently through the halls of the hotel as he made his way to the princess's room As he got closer to Charlie's room Mars thought that he heard a voice coming from it. When he got to the door he was about to knock but stopped when he heard her voice far more clearly. "Hey mom, um I know I keep calling but, um….uh I was just wondering when we could talk again. I just, I don't know how the hotel is going right now. I mean it's great I'm seeing so much improvement from the sinners I have here, but still nothing concrete that what I'm doing is working, that it's enough, and I feel like it's my fault. Mom I could really just use some advice please please call me back, just one time. Sorry um I'll uh hang up before this gets really long. I love you…Bye." He heard the sound of a call ending and after a moment a few quiet sobs came from her room. Mars thought about just walking away but the princess really sounded like she was in a rough spot. He breathed a deep sigh, cheering people up was not his strong suit but for some reason he felt he had to try.
He reached out to her door and gave it a few light knocks. "Charlie?" He called out. "AH!" He heard a small scream of surprise come from behind her door. "Mars? Is that you? Um..one minute!" She called out clearly she was trying to collect herself before she opened the door. There were sounds of her moving and nose being blown before he heard her come to the door and it opened. He could see her eyes were red and irritated but she had a big smile trying to hide it. "Hey there! What's up? Did you need something before lessons?" She asked. "It's kinda about that. Lessons are over. I was wondering where you were?" He asked. She gave a chuckle, laughing it off. "You're silly, I wouldn't have missed lessons! It's…" She looked at her clock and saw that it was 11:10, and realized that lessons had been over for 10 minutes. "It's past 11…I missed them." She said her face somehow went more pale as she realized he was right. Her mouth opened and closed a few times but no noise came out as he watched her. "Are…you ok Charlie?" he asked her. "I…I…" She tried to say, in order to get something out before speaking again. "NO!" She said, starting to cry. Mars looked around not sure what to do. A woman crying, something he had no clue how to stop. He didn't want the others coming across this, he would catch shit for sure. "Ok..ok…come on..let's go inside and talk." He said taking her hand and going into hers and leading her into her room before shutting the door.
Charlie sniffled and sob as they walked to the middle of her room. "Alright. Now, take a minute, and when you can, tell me what's going on." Mars said. Charlie was still a bit of a wreck and it would be hard to talk to her like this. As he waited for her to collect herself his perceptive eyes couldn't help but look around her room. Her desk, her walls, even her bed. They were covered in papers and plans that seemed to have all of her ideas for redemption over them. There were cute drawings of all of them in heaven over the room and motivational phrases seemingly written by her to herself. Things like "You can do it!" and "They are all counting on you!" were placed where they could be easily seen. She cried for a bit more before calming down enough to speak. "So, can you tell me what's bothering you?" he said. "Well…I was planning for the Sinsmas party we are having in a few days. And it was…just so much. I got overwhelmed. It has to be perfect and I just can't do everything by myself." Charlie said to him. Right away Mars felt there was more to it than that. The princess had her walls too it seemed. But if he just called her on it she would probably just deny and retreat. Better to keep her on this thought for the moment, and see if he could figure out what was really going on. "Why does it need to be perfect? I think everyone will be happy with whatever we do?" He said. To be honest he didn't think half the guests wanted it in the first place but he wasn't going to tell her that. "NO! It has to be perfect! I have to show Dad just how far all of you have come! I have to show him that redemption is possible! I have to...show him something." She said trailing off. Mars thought he saw what was really bothering her now. He would have to try to approach this with tact, something he lacked in spades. "Oh boy" he thought to himself.
He looked around the room seeing that her room had a balcony overlooking Pentagram city. "Here…come with me." He said taking her hand again and going to the glass door. He opened it and brought her out to the balcony walking to the edge and putting their hands on the railing. From where they were it felt like they could see the whole city. Cars, yells, and the occasional gunshots were heard as the two of them watched the citizens live their afterlives. "It might not be much…but it's home, right?" Mars said. Charlie looked at him a bit confused but nodded after a moment. "Yeah…" She said looking out to the city. Mars reached into his coat and pulled out a pack of cigarettes. With his other hand he pulled out a lighter and quickly took one out before lighting it and putting it in his mouth. He offered one to Charlie but she refused with a hand wave. She was still a goody two-shoes. "I didn't think a doctor would smoke." She said, "Yeah…well you spend your life telling people not to do something and then you die." he said dismissively "It always did look fun, and not like they can kill me again." with a chuckle. There was a long pause before he spoke again. "You know what your problem is?" He asked her. She looked at him, taken aback by the question she had been asked. He took a drag from his cigarette and blew the smoke out over the balcony before answering. "You try to do too much." He told her. "I have too! For all your sakes!" She yelled at him. "Yeah…" He said taking another drag. "But no one said you have to do it alone." He said.
"I told you when we met that I would help you, but you haven't asked me to do one damn thing. I gave your old man my two cents and thankfully he listened. After that though I have been watching you run yourself ragged." He told her. "You want this party to be perfect, fine. We can do this party exactly like you want it, you just have to let us know how we can help. You don't have to do everything alone." He told her. She looked down over the balcony as if she was unsure what to say before he spoke again. "But this isn't about the party is it?" He asked, looking at her.
Charlie looked back and went to speak before stopping herself and then looking down again. "Is it that obvious?" She asked. "For me to notice? Yeah." he said, earning himself a dirty look from the princess. "What's really wrong?" he asked her. She looked out to the city, sighing to herself before she spoke. "I just, I want this to work. More than anything, I need this to work. I'm trying so hard. I'm doing everything I can and you all are doing so well." She said clearly not blaming the sinners in the hotel. "But, there is still no proof that this hotel even works! How long do we have to wait till we get that proof! Proof so my people don't get slaughtered in the streets year after year." She said looking out to the city. "I know other sinners aren't going to come without proof. And I can't give it to them. I'm their princess and a sucky one at that. I try and I try but I have nothing to show for it. And today I missed lessons. What good am I if I can't even be there to help you? I'm not helping you guys at all. I'm just hurting you. All I'm doing is failing. And it makes me feel worse than the worst Overlord in hell, because I'm offering something I don't even know that I can give you!" She started to cry again. Missing the lesson clearly upset her terribly. Her hands went to her arms and she curled her back up a bit, hugging herself as a way to try and calm herself.
"It's just so much pressure. And I don't know if what I'm doing is working. I just…need someone to talk to, someone to tell me I'm on the right track. That I'm doing the right thing." She said before starting to really cry again. Mars again wasn't sure what the right move was but he did the first thing that came to his mind. His hand went to her back and began to rub her gently. "There there, it's ok." he told her trying to get her to calm down. To him it looked like she just needed a good cry and he would let her have it. As she did he continued to rub her back "Just let it out." He told her. For a few minutes the two of them stood there until Charlie once again had calmed down enough to talk. "Feeling better?" He asked. "A…a little.." she said in between a sob. "Ok, now let's see what we can do. First things first.." He said, flicking the butt of his cigarette off the balcony. "...let's go back inside." He said, leading her back in. "Now, you're going to sit here." he said, clearing off a space on her bed. "While I go get something, and when I get back we are going to work on this shit together," he told her. "You don't.." she started to say. "No but's missy." he said, giving her a stern look followed by a wink as he headed out of her room.
Mars headed downstairs and then banked a right to the kitchen. Heading in Mars looked through the cabinets for some sort of tea that might help the princess relax, chamomile or honey, something that would be soothing to her nerves. "Where are you?" he said not believing that there was nothing in such a large kitchen. Finally he spotted them tucked away. "Gotcha!" he said getting out a tea bag. It took him a few minutes to heat the water and then once it was ready he placed it in the water with some honey and stirred it up. With the cup ready he headed back up to Charlie's room where he found her still on the bed holding a tissue and wiping her eyes. "Oh, your back." She said to him. "I said I would be." he told her, handing her the mug. "Here." he said offering the beverage. "Drink, it will help you calm down." He told her. She took it and took a little sip before giving a jump "HOT!" she yelled. "Yes, tea tends to be hot." he said laughing at her. "Jerk." Charlie pouted, giving him a face to match. "So..what's this plan of yours?" She asked him. "First, we work on the most important thing, you." He told her. She opened her mouth to protest but he stopped her. "If you're so stressed and burnt out that your missing lessons then you need to take care of yourself." He said flatly. "Once we're done with you, then we help everyone else." he said. She started for a moment before giving in. "Alright, what do we do?" She asked.
"You drink." He said pointing to the tea. "I help you." he said, pointing to himself. He got on the bed with her and rubbed his hands. "Just try and relax." he said as his hands went to the back of her neck and shoulders. He felt around for a moment with his thumbs before speaking. "Fucking Christ girl, you have knots harder than rocks." He told her. "What does that mean?" She asked, a little nervous about him touching her. She hadn't had a man touch her like this before. "It means that you're stressed out, and it's affecting your health." He told her. "Shoulders and necks are where a lot of people keep their stress, thankfully it's fairly easy to work out, and it will make you feel better." He told her as he started to use his thumbs to work the space under her collarbone. "I…oh…oh wow…that…that actually…feels really nice." Charlie said, closing her eyes as he worked out her stress. "Good, just relax, deep breaths, drink your tea." Mars said, working his hands in small circles around her neck. Whenever he found a knot he would work it out pressing and rubbing until he felt it dissipate. He only worked on her neck and shoulders rubbing out what he could with his hands above her clothes but even that sent small pulses through Charlie as she got her first massage.
For around twenty minutes Mars worked to relieve her tension and just as she finished her tea he stopped. "Ok, good enough for now." He said getting up. "Your still all kinds of fucked up. But there's only so much I can do here." "Gee thanks." Charlie said glaring at him. "You should come spend some time in the spa. What good was convincing daddy if we don't use it." He said giving her a wink "It would really help you relax, all that stress build up is not good for you. And I can really get at those problem areas. You gotta take care of yourself first. Doctors orders." He said pointing at her. "Now..where are those Sinsmas party plans?" He asked. She looked at him and pointed to her desk. "Over there." She said. "Wonderful. Now, the second part. Delegation." He said going over to the desk picking up the papers and going over what she had. "Ok, food, music, decorations. All pretty standard." He said. "So what are we going to do?" She asked. "WE aren't doing shit." He told her. "You, are going to stay here, take a rest, and when your ready make the best fucking lesson plan you ever had. And I am going to round up every chucklefuck in this place and let them know that ALL of us are going to get the hotel ready for a perfect Sinsmas party." he told her. "This is all easy enough, I'll work on food, Nifty on decorations, Husk and Angel on setting up the tree, maybe Angel can even get Cherri to come. If there's food and booze she's bound to show right?" He asked. Charlie nodded, she had to agree on that one.
"Alastor for music, and I will get everything else set up. And we will make this Christmas party perfect." he told her. "We show daddy just how far we come and make a party no one will ever forget. We make it so damn good that everyone wants to come next year and make this place full." He said his words full of determination. "You fucking ready?" He said, offering her a fist. Charlie stared at him for a moment before she made her own and lightly tapped him. "Hell yeah." he said with a fist pump. He turned to leave ready to give everyone their jobs and took a few steps towards her door. "Mars!" Charlie called to him, making him stop and look back. "Yeah?" He asked. "Thank you." She said, giving him a smile. "Any time." He told her, glad that smile was back on her face. "We do this together from now on ok? You help us, we help you, And all of us will make this place special." he told her before taking off to hand out everyone's jobs.
(This was a present I made for a friend at Christmas)
It had been a few weeks after being brought to the Hazbin Hotel by Charlie and Mars had settled into his new surroundings. True to his word he had given her his ideas on how he thought she could improve the redemption experience, and after a slightly problematic but overall worthwhile meeting with her father the place was looking much better than it had when he had first arrived. She and the other house guests were still in the dark about what he did once night fell but during the day when he was following his end of the deal and going to Charlie's lessons. It was where he found himself at the moment waiting on the couch with Angel, where he had been for almost the past hour. It had been an awkward sort of silence and Angel dicked around on his phone, clearly bored out of his mind and Mars kept checking his watch to see the time. Charlie was fantastically late for the lessons start time, but neither of them had bothered to check where she was. They both really didn't want to do it, there was only so much one could take of the princess's shitty plays, sing-alongs, and trust activities so a day off was nice, but still it was not like her. In the lounge the great grandfather clock went off signaling the hour and they both looked at it.
"Well that's the hour. Guess we are done." Mars said standing up. "Yep." Angel said standing and stretching. "Where the fuck is doll face? Not like her to miss a lesson." Mars said. "Not my problem. I only had ta show for the lesson and since she didn't tat means I'm free for the afternoon!" Angel said. He hurried out of the lounge to the main hall where the bar was jumping to his seat. "Oh Huuuuuuusky! I'm all yours now." Angel said going and making eyes at Husk. "Lucky fucking me." Husk said grumbling as he cleaned a glass. Mars walked out as well but still couldn't let Charlie's disappearance go unanswered. "You didn't see chatterbox did you kitty?" Mars asked. "First off, fuck you. And secondly no." She hasn't been down all morning." Husk said. She hadn't been seen downstairs at all. So the best place to check would be her room. Ignoring the cat and the spider for now Mars headed up to see if he could find her.
Mars walked silently through the halls of the hotel as he made his way to the princess's room As he got closer to Charlie's room Mars thought that he heard a voice coming from it. When he got to the door he was about to knock but stopped when he heard her voice far more clearly. "Hey mom, um I know I keep calling but, um….uh I was just wondering when we could talk again. I just, I don't know how the hotel is going right now. I mean it's great I'm seeing so much improvement from the sinners I have here, but still nothing concrete that what I'm doing is working, that it's enough, and I feel like it's my fault. Mom I could really just use some advice please please call me back, just one time. Sorry um I'll uh hang up before this gets really long. I love you…Bye." He heard the sound of a call ending and after a moment a few quiet sobs came from her room. Mars thought about just walking away but the princess really sounded like she was in a rough spot. He breathed a deep sigh, cheering people up was not his strong suit but for some reason he felt he had to try.
He reached out to her door and gave it a few light knocks. "Charlie?" He called out. "AH!" He heard a small scream of surprise come from behind her door. "Mars? Is that you? Um..one minute!" She called out clearly she was trying to collect herself before she opened the door. There were sounds of her moving and nose being blown before he heard her come to the door and it opened. He could see her eyes were red and irritated but she had a big smile trying to hide it. "Hey there! What's up? Did you need something before lessons?" She asked. "It's kinda about that. Lessons are over. I was wondering where you were?" He asked. She gave a chuckle, laughing it off. "You're silly, I wouldn't have missed lessons! It's…" She looked at her clock and saw that it was 11:10, and realized that lessons had been over for 10 minutes. "It's past 11…I missed them." She said her face somehow went more pale as she realized he was right. Her mouth opened and closed a few times but no noise came out as he watched her. "Are…you ok Charlie?" he asked her. "I…I…" She tried to say, in order to get something out before speaking again. "NO!" She said, starting to cry. Mars looked around not sure what to do. A woman crying, something he had no clue how to stop. He didn't want the others coming across this, he would catch shit for sure. "Ok..ok…come on..let's go inside and talk." He said taking her hand and going into hers and leading her into her room before shutting the door.
Charlie sniffled and sob as they walked to the middle of her room. "Alright. Now, take a minute, and when you can, tell me what's going on." Mars said. Charlie was still a bit of a wreck and it would be hard to talk to her like this. As he waited for her to collect herself his perceptive eyes couldn't help but look around her room. Her desk, her walls, even her bed. They were covered in papers and plans that seemed to have all of her ideas for redemption over them. There were cute drawings of all of them in heaven over the room and motivational phrases seemingly written by her to herself. Things like "You can do it!" and "They are all counting on you!" were placed where they could be easily seen. She cried for a bit more before calming down enough to speak. "So, can you tell me what's bothering you?" he said. "Well…I was planning for the Sinsmas party we are having in a few days. And it was…just so much. I got overwhelmed. It has to be perfect and I just can't do everything by myself." Charlie said to him. Right away Mars felt there was more to it than that. The princess had her walls too it seemed. But if he just called her on it she would probably just deny and retreat. Better to keep her on this thought for the moment, and see if he could figure out what was really going on. "Why does it need to be perfect? I think everyone will be happy with whatever we do?" He said. To be honest he didn't think half the guests wanted it in the first place but he wasn't going to tell her that. "NO! It has to be perfect! I have to show Dad just how far all of you have come! I have to show him that redemption is possible! I have to...show him something." She said trailing off. Mars thought he saw what was really bothering her now. He would have to try to approach this with tact, something he lacked in spades. "Oh boy" he thought to himself.
He looked around the room seeing that her room had a balcony overlooking Pentagram city. "Here…come with me." He said taking her hand again and going to the glass door. He opened it and brought her out to the balcony walking to the edge and putting their hands on the railing. From where they were it felt like they could see the whole city. Cars, yells, and the occasional gunshots were heard as the two of them watched the citizens live their afterlives. "It might not be much…but it's home, right?" Mars said. Charlie looked at him a bit confused but nodded after a moment. "Yeah…" She said looking out to the city. Mars reached into his coat and pulled out a pack of cigarettes. With his other hand he pulled out a lighter and quickly took one out before lighting it and putting it in his mouth. He offered one to Charlie but she refused with a hand wave. She was still a goody two-shoes. "I didn't think a doctor would smoke." She said, "Yeah…well you spend your life telling people not to do something and then you die." he said dismissively "It always did look fun, and not like they can kill me again." with a chuckle. There was a long pause before he spoke again. "You know what your problem is?" He asked her. She looked at him, taken aback by the question she had been asked. He took a drag from his cigarette and blew the smoke out over the balcony before answering. "You try to do too much." He told her. "I have too! For all your sakes!" She yelled at him. "Yeah…" He said taking another drag. "But no one said you have to do it alone." He said.
"I told you when we met that I would help you, but you haven't asked me to do one damn thing. I gave your old man my two cents and thankfully he listened. After that though I have been watching you run yourself ragged." He told her. "You want this party to be perfect, fine. We can do this party exactly like you want it, you just have to let us know how we can help. You don't have to do everything alone." He told her. She looked down over the balcony as if she was unsure what to say before he spoke again. "But this isn't about the party is it?" He asked, looking at her.
Charlie looked back and went to speak before stopping herself and then looking down again. "Is it that obvious?" She asked. "For me to notice? Yeah." he said, earning himself a dirty look from the princess. "What's really wrong?" he asked her. She looked out to the city, sighing to herself before she spoke. "I just, I want this to work. More than anything, I need this to work. I'm trying so hard. I'm doing everything I can and you all are doing so well." She said clearly not blaming the sinners in the hotel. "But, there is still no proof that this hotel even works! How long do we have to wait till we get that proof! Proof so my people don't get slaughtered in the streets year after year." She said looking out to the city. "I know other sinners aren't going to come without proof. And I can't give it to them. I'm their princess and a sucky one at that. I try and I try but I have nothing to show for it. And today I missed lessons. What good am I if I can't even be there to help you? I'm not helping you guys at all. I'm just hurting you. All I'm doing is failing. And it makes me feel worse than the worst Overlord in hell, because I'm offering something I don't even know that I can give you!" She started to cry again. Missing the lesson clearly upset her terribly. Her hands went to her arms and she curled her back up a bit, hugging herself as a way to try and calm herself.
"It's just so much pressure. And I don't know if what I'm doing is working. I just…need someone to talk to, someone to tell me I'm on the right track. That I'm doing the right thing." She said before starting to really cry again. Mars again wasn't sure what the right move was but he did the first thing that came to his mind. His hand went to her back and began to rub her gently. "There there, it's ok." he told her trying to get her to calm down. To him it looked like she just needed a good cry and he would let her have it. As she did he continued to rub her back "Just let it out." He told her. For a few minutes the two of them stood there until Charlie once again had calmed down enough to talk. "Feeling better?" He asked. "A…a little.." she said in between a sob. "Ok, now let's see what we can do. First things first.." He said, flicking the butt of his cigarette off the balcony. "...let's go back inside." He said, leading her back in. "Now, you're going to sit here." he said, clearing off a space on her bed. "While I go get something, and when I get back we are going to work on this shit together," he told her. "You don't.." she started to say. "No but's missy." he said, giving her a stern look followed by a wink as he headed out of her room.
Mars headed downstairs and then banked a right to the kitchen. Heading in Mars looked through the cabinets for some sort of tea that might help the princess relax, chamomile or honey, something that would be soothing to her nerves. "Where are you?" he said not believing that there was nothing in such a large kitchen. Finally he spotted them tucked away. "Gotcha!" he said getting out a tea bag. It took him a few minutes to heat the water and then once it was ready he placed it in the water with some honey and stirred it up. With the cup ready he headed back up to Charlie's room where he found her still on the bed holding a tissue and wiping her eyes. "Oh, your back." She said to him. "I said I would be." he told her, handing her the mug. "Here." he said offering the beverage. "Drink, it will help you calm down." He told her. She took it and took a little sip before giving a jump "HOT!" she yelled. "Yes, tea tends to be hot." he said laughing at her. "Jerk." Charlie pouted, giving him a face to match. "So..what's this plan of yours?" She asked him. "First, we work on the most important thing, you." He told her. She opened her mouth to protest but he stopped her. "If you're so stressed and burnt out that your missing lessons then you need to take care of yourself." He said flatly. "Once we're done with you, then we help everyone else." he said. She started for a moment before giving in. "Alright, what do we do?" She asked.
"You drink." He said pointing to the tea. "I help you." he said, pointing to himself. He got on the bed with her and rubbed his hands. "Just try and relax." he said as his hands went to the back of her neck and shoulders. He felt around for a moment with his thumbs before speaking. "Fucking Christ girl, you have knots harder than rocks." He told her. "What does that mean?" She asked, a little nervous about him touching her. She hadn't had a man touch her like this before. "It means that you're stressed out, and it's affecting your health." He told her. "Shoulders and necks are where a lot of people keep their stress, thankfully it's fairly easy to work out, and it will make you feel better." He told her as he started to use his thumbs to work the space under her collarbone. "I…oh…oh wow…that…that actually…feels really nice." Charlie said, closing her eyes as he worked out her stress. "Good, just relax, deep breaths, drink your tea." Mars said, working his hands in small circles around her neck. Whenever he found a knot he would work it out pressing and rubbing until he felt it dissipate. He only worked on her neck and shoulders rubbing out what he could with his hands above her clothes but even that sent small pulses through Charlie as she got her first massage.
For around twenty minutes Mars worked to relieve her tension and just as she finished her tea he stopped. "Ok, good enough for now." He said getting up. "Your still all kinds of fucked up. But there's only so much I can do here." "Gee thanks." Charlie said glaring at him. "You should come spend some time in the spa. What good was convincing daddy if we don't use it." He said giving her a wink "It would really help you relax, all that stress build up is not good for you. And I can really get at those problem areas. You gotta take care of yourself first. Doctors orders." He said pointing at her. "Now..where are those Sinsmas party plans?" He asked. She looked at him and pointed to her desk. "Over there." She said. "Wonderful. Now, the second part. Delegation." He said going over to the desk picking up the papers and going over what she had. "Ok, food, music, decorations. All pretty standard." He said. "So what are we going to do?" She asked. "WE aren't doing shit." He told her. "You, are going to stay here, take a rest, and when your ready make the best fucking lesson plan you ever had. And I am going to round up every chucklefuck in this place and let them know that ALL of us are going to get the hotel ready for a perfect Sinsmas party." he told her. "This is all easy enough, I'll work on food, Nifty on decorations, Husk and Angel on setting up the tree, maybe Angel can even get Cherri to come. If there's food and booze she's bound to show right?" He asked. Charlie nodded, she had to agree on that one.
"Alastor for music, and I will get everything else set up. And we will make this Christmas party perfect." he told her. "We show daddy just how far we come and make a party no one will ever forget. We make it so damn good that everyone wants to come next year and make this place full." He said his words full of determination. "You fucking ready?" He said, offering her a fist. Charlie stared at him for a moment before she made her own and lightly tapped him. "Hell yeah." he said with a fist pump. He turned to leave ready to give everyone their jobs and took a few steps towards her door. "Mars!" Charlie called to him, making him stop and look back. "Yeah?" He asked. "Thank you." She said, giving him a smile. "Any time." He told her, glad that smile was back on her face. "We do this together from now on ok? You help us, we help you, And all of us will make this place special." he told her before taking off to hand out everyone's jobs.
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