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Lynn.Z
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- Sep 15, 2022
This is the beginning of my request thread. I’ll work on it over time. It hardly qualifies as a draft at this point. There is an F-List in Doing Her Part for the Climate. I'm pretty kink friendly and in a shorter term role play willing to explore most things. Yet I am also learning the limits of what I can write. I certifiably suck at writing truly monstrous sex and by monstrous I mean sex involving monsters, not taboo.
As for what I'm looking for, I have an emotional and to a lesser extent physical masochistic streak in my fantasies. I enjoy a roller coaster of emotions, but I definitely crave a dollop of angst in my role play. I play cheating sluts, bad girls, sex workers, and girls with deep submissive fantasies. In other words, I enjoy a lot of the alpha male bullshit mine and your grandmother found in their 1980s romance novels, but darker.
So Much Darker.
Speaking of grandma’s romance novels. Want a nice story where the Viking Hero enslaves his love, has a blacksmith weld an iron collar around her neck, rapes her, puts her to work in the fields and they end up happy together? Try Season of the Sun by Catherine Coulter. And please don't overlook Patricia Matthews’ Loves Avenging Heart (which is so fucking dark). Below is part of the description used to market this "romance" (damn political correctness, they don't mainstream stuff like this anymore):
“After all, she was only a wench, a body to be owned, used or bartered. But Hannah would do more than survive, she would win. She would overcome the sadistic beatings, the rapes, the treachery, the crushing humiliation of her circumstances. She would discover the all-consuming raptures of passion when love came to free her questing heart.”
And for fun, twelve dark romance novels that take "love" to the extreme (happy to created our own version of any of the listed plots).
“Happy Ending” isn’t a euphemism for getting killed or riding off under a double rainbow. It’s the classic “happy ending” a man might get from a pretty girl after an enthusiastic, but unskilled massage. And “Happy Ending Girl” is analogous to a sex-worker of all sorts. Thus, in one version of the story, MC might work in an off-base massage parlor and in another, she could be a stripper or she’s a club girl for a Sons of Anarchy style gang.
“Serial killer” in this case is analogous to a bad man. He could be a serial killer or a brutal bank robber. Maybe he rides a Harley-Davidson and is the chief enforcer for his club. But his badness has one clear exception; YC has a fondness for his “happy ending girl.”
Mind you, his fondness might take a variety of forms from classically romantic in “I want to save this troubled lass” to I’m happiest when my cock is buried in her throat with a mix of semen and saliva on her lips.
This plot is inspired by a wide-variety of films and books. Taxi Driver, the Equalizer, Wild Card, Bad Guy, and so many 1980s Alpha male romance novels. I’d love an emotional feeling of him using her, but also protective.
I’d like our writing to show both sides of our respective characters. In other words, maybe there’s a scene where MC is off screen. And YC brutally murders someone (I can write the “someone” and any NPCs if that works for our writing style, or you can simply develop the scene yourself). We see this ruthless side of him (for example).
Later, I write a scene where MC is servicing some client. She’s almost bored. It’s a job. She may not enjoy it or she may. Other scenes might be her out with friends, drinking. Through these scenes we might see one side of her. You could write the NPCs as appropriate or if you prefer, I could write it out.
Later though, we now write together and develop their story. How she can’t help but smile when he enters the room. How she is enthusiastic in pleasuring him. If that’s appropriate for our particular story. How he treats her as opposed to how he treats other people.
Finally, we’d have your classic rescued damsel in distress scenes. Someone abuses her, immigration wants to deport her, she’s arrested, she gets pregnant, YC is going to be the one who solves her problems. It might be through violence, bestowed wisdom, bribery, knowledge, etc. I do love the classic protective warrior scenes.
A potential twist might be if he has some responsibility for her current life choices. Maybe he was involved in initially trafficking her or breaking her? Then they start out in a state of dislike or even hatred and then it might be something of a redemption story.
Our particular story can end in a variety of ways. She betrays him? Maybe the cops or bad guys are looking for him? Or she might be kidnapped and trafficked when she refuses to give him up. The story might have a happy ending where they ride off in his black muscle car for some unknown destination or he might die in a hail of bullets, leaving her the key to a bus station locker. I wouldn’t expect us to decide the ending before we started. But if you watch as much television and film and read as much as I do, you know both happy endings and angsty tragedies can be equally delicious.
As for what I'm looking for, I have an emotional and to a lesser extent physical masochistic streak in my fantasies. I enjoy a roller coaster of emotions, but I definitely crave a dollop of angst in my role play. I play cheating sluts, bad girls, sex workers, and girls with deep submissive fantasies. In other words, I enjoy a lot of the alpha male bullshit mine and your grandmother found in their 1980s romance novels, but darker.
So Much Darker.
Speaking of grandma’s romance novels. Want a nice story where the Viking Hero enslaves his love, has a blacksmith weld an iron collar around her neck, rapes her, puts her to work in the fields and they end up happy together? Try Season of the Sun by Catherine Coulter. And please don't overlook Patricia Matthews’ Loves Avenging Heart (which is so fucking dark). Below is part of the description used to market this "romance" (damn political correctness, they don't mainstream stuff like this anymore):
“After all, she was only a wench, a body to be owned, used or bartered. But Hannah would do more than survive, she would win. She would overcome the sadistic beatings, the rapes, the treachery, the crushing humiliation of her circumstances. She would discover the all-consuming raptures of passion when love came to free her questing heart.”
And for fun, twelve dark romance novels that take "love" to the extreme (happy to created our own version of any of the listed plots).
Plots
Once upon a time YC mistook MC (Older Man) for a prostitute and she went along with it. Since then, YC occasionally calls her for services. It's not in any sense a romantic relationship. In fact, he sometimes flies in several other girls, sleeping with MC and the other two four to a bed. He treats MC like a whore and also gently guides her to be better at what she's let him believe is her chosen profession and introduces her to new and different kinks from time to time.
[Dark Optional Incestual Twist (MC was actually at the hotel trying to meet her biological father. She'd been adopted and searching for him It fell through and she never found her father, but she did hook up with YC. In the end, at some point, after fucking him and doing all sorts of kinky shit over a period of time ranging from months to years, MC learns that the man she's been fucking for money is her biological father. Worse, he's known that she's his daughter the entire time.]
[Dark Optional Incestual Twist (MC was actually at the hotel trying to meet her biological father. She'd been adopted and searching for him It fell through and she never found her father, but she did hook up with YC. In the end, at some point, after fucking him and doing all sorts of kinky shit over a period of time ranging from months to years, MC learns that the man she's been fucking for money is her biological father. Worse, he's known that she's his daughter the entire time.]
The loose inspiration for this roleplay is a book I read called The Boyfriend School and web series with Nathan Fillion called Dr. Horrible’s Sing Along Blog and so many other stories where a nerd is molded or becomes the perfect boyfriend or villain or sex symbol.
In this story, YC starts out as a normal Joe unhappy with his life and fantasizing about being a sexually dominant bad guy. MC starts out as a flirtatious little slut who decides to help YC achieve his dreams and not incidentally perhaps, her fantasies.
It’ll start out light. Like the scenes where the guy tries on different suits for the girl, him not liking some, she liking others until they decide on the right “look.” But in this case, the look is what kind of villain he’s going to become. What kind of thug or gangster or criminal?
Then it might move to her building up his confidence and getting him to work out at a gym. Getting him into an unarmed combat school and having him start taking skill courses appropriate to his chosen “villain role.”
In between, they’ll talk, they’ll eat, they’ll flirt. But keep in mind, this isn’t a romance! No traditional happy endings oh wait, okay yeah, there is one kind of happy ending that’ll likely appear in this story. I’ll eventually come up with something sweet and romantic, but those plots are on the back burner as I’ve already got a few being played out.
Now it’ll move to something still light, but potentially criminal. She may get him to shoplift. She may hire a hooker for him to let him role play dominating a girl and spanking her. While MC watches of course and maybe even videotapes it for critiques later.
Maybe if YC starts getting to involved, she’ll fuck some other guy and convince him to be YC’s henchman. Maybe YC complains when do I get to fuck you? And MC says when you man up and force me. When you can deal with tears and regret like a proper villain.
And then at some later point, when MC is YC’s proper little slut along with a few other honeys and he’s got his own wrecking crew of proto villains. We’ll approach the unhappy ending. Well, unhappy from a lot of male views, but hot for me.
YC will sell MC and she’ll end up stroking cocks in some San Francisco back alley illegal massage parlor and she’ll occasionally get word of his latest achievements of how he’s becoming someone who really matters in this world.
Then, and only enough time to experience the true degradation of sex work, YC has the option and it’s just the option of returning to rescue MC to let him cook and clean and pleasure him as he goes about taking over the fucking world.
In this story, YC starts out as a normal Joe unhappy with his life and fantasizing about being a sexually dominant bad guy. MC starts out as a flirtatious little slut who decides to help YC achieve his dreams and not incidentally perhaps, her fantasies.
It’ll start out light. Like the scenes where the guy tries on different suits for the girl, him not liking some, she liking others until they decide on the right “look.” But in this case, the look is what kind of villain he’s going to become. What kind of thug or gangster or criminal?
Then it might move to her building up his confidence and getting him to work out at a gym. Getting him into an unarmed combat school and having him start taking skill courses appropriate to his chosen “villain role.”
In between, they’ll talk, they’ll eat, they’ll flirt. But keep in mind, this isn’t a romance! No traditional happy endings oh wait, okay yeah, there is one kind of happy ending that’ll likely appear in this story. I’ll eventually come up with something sweet and romantic, but those plots are on the back burner as I’ve already got a few being played out.
Now it’ll move to something still light, but potentially criminal. She may get him to shoplift. She may hire a hooker for him to let him role play dominating a girl and spanking her. While MC watches of course and maybe even videotapes it for critiques later.
Maybe if YC starts getting to involved, she’ll fuck some other guy and convince him to be YC’s henchman. Maybe YC complains when do I get to fuck you? And MC says when you man up and force me. When you can deal with tears and regret like a proper villain.
And then at some later point, when MC is YC’s proper little slut along with a few other honeys and he’s got his own wrecking crew of proto villains. We’ll approach the unhappy ending. Well, unhappy from a lot of male views, but hot for me.
YC will sell MC and she’ll end up stroking cocks in some San Francisco back alley illegal massage parlor and she’ll occasionally get word of his latest achievements of how he’s becoming someone who really matters in this world.
Then, and only enough time to experience the true degradation of sex work, YC has the option and it’s just the option of returning to rescue MC to let him cook and clean and pleasure him as he goes about taking over the fucking world.
“One way to offset carbon pollution is to permanently remove it from the atmosphere. The Swiss company Climeworks is one approach to removing carbon pollutants. The company sucks carbon dioxide from the air and turns it into a solid material underground. While this is arguably the “most certain” way to offset carbon emissions; it’s also the most expensive. Climeworks charges more than $1,000 to remove a ton of CO₂ from the atmosphere. For context: If you wanted to offset the carbon dioxide emitted by the average U.S. car each year, you’d be set back $4,600.”
MC is a twenty-three year old, currently unemployed post-baccalaureate graduate student. She’s decided to dedicate her body to ‘going green.’ For the right agreed upon donation directly to Climeworks, she will act as someone’s girlfriend, let them fuck her silly, peg them, let them beat her and then comfort her afterward, or she’ll pee on them if that’s their chosen fantasy.
It’s a dangerous world MC has entered. YC? Well, he or she is someone who’s contacted MC with a list of kinky demands. Assuming YC and MC agree on a price, she’ll show up. Most of these scenes will be short term and what happens is extremely variable. Do they simply play out the chosen sexual role play? Is she abducted and trafficked? Murdered?
Or does YC fall in love with MC and start to stalk her? The possibilities are wide open and MC’s stated limits are few. On the other hand, at least initially, she’s going to be new at this and may find it harder to fulfill some requests than others.
But she wants to do her part. Other potential roles for YC? A boyfriend, her priest. I’m willing to consider a lot of possibilities as long as the story is interesting.
Even the negotiation might be interesting; especially if MC says no. I mean does she really care about saving the world?
List of Kinks She's Willing to Consider
MC is a twenty-three year old, currently unemployed post-baccalaureate graduate student. She’s decided to dedicate her body to ‘going green.’ For the right agreed upon donation directly to Climeworks, she will act as someone’s girlfriend, let them fuck her silly, peg them, let them beat her and then comfort her afterward, or she’ll pee on them if that’s their chosen fantasy.
It’s a dangerous world MC has entered. YC? Well, he or she is someone who’s contacted MC with a list of kinky demands. Assuming YC and MC agree on a price, she’ll show up. Most of these scenes will be short term and what happens is extremely variable. Do they simply play out the chosen sexual role play? Is she abducted and trafficked? Murdered?
Or does YC fall in love with MC and start to stalk her? The possibilities are wide open and MC’s stated limits are few. On the other hand, at least initially, she’s going to be new at this and may find it harder to fulfill some requests than others.
But she wants to do her part. Other potential roles for YC? A boyfriend, her priest. I’m willing to consider a lot of possibilities as long as the story is interesting.
Even the negotiation might be interesting; especially if MC says no. I mean does she really care about saving the world?
List of Kinks She's Willing to Consider
MC, the youngest daughter of the King of the Elvish Kingdom of Ylladrian, ran away from home to be with YC, the Orcish Clan Chief of the Legion of Mazhok. She wanted a big, dumb brute. She got sweet and decent.
She expected to be enslaved and ravished. He married her using Elven rites and covered her bridal bed in flowers. The sex is fucking fantastic, but he’s not satisfying her submissive fuck toy fantasies and so her eyes have begun to stray.
She expected to be enslaved and ravished. He married her using Elven rites and covered her bridal bed in flowers. The sex is fucking fantastic, but he’s not satisfying her submissive fuck toy fantasies and so her eyes have begun to stray.
Your basic two part story. MC is a North Korean military officer assigned to an intelligence mission. It all goes south and she is captured by the 14K triad and sex trafficked to the United States where she is put to work in a massage parlor in Arizona outside a TAC military base. She begins to surreptitiously murder the men who abused her and other trafficked women while contacting her North Korean handlers who order her to start spying on the military base, political figures, and those with access to important technology.
YC is either in military intelligence or the CIA investigating possible spying. Or YC is in law enforcement investigating a string of murders. We’ll figure out the details.
YC is either in military intelligence or the CIA investigating possible spying. Or YC is in law enforcement investigating a string of murders. We’ll figure out the details.
This role play should involve a couple who are not your classic monogamous, romantic couple. Two friends at school? A pair of hook up artists who start one-upping each other? Father and daughter? Brother and sister? Teacher and eighteen plus year old student? Husband and wife in an open marriage? Maybe even a man and woman who used to be romantic, but now kind of hate each other and get into a one-upmanship game.
The goal is we create our own kinky purity test of sorts (the actual purity test is a little tame, but does have a few useful items). And the goal is the first person to get to zero wins. The way this would work isn’t so much that they do everything with each other, but we write a series of vignettes where MC does something and you play the NPC/side characters. Then I write the NPC/side characters for your scene. We come back together with YC and MC for a classic joint role play scene.
The key to a scene like this would be to develop characters with some depth and personality and maybe give it a setting where accomplishing the various kinky tasks is difficult. Oh and to decide just how dirty we want to get and what specific taboo items are going to be on our purity test.
An example might be a pair of soldier’s fighting on some hot, dusty desert planet. It’s a slow, dirty war, the kind of war where the deaths are a constant trickle and no one expects to go home whole or even alive. So, this sergeant and private who found themselves sharing the same dusty pit again and again, fighting off the occasional charge of alien bug creatures, started to one up each other with kinky sex talk and eventually drew up this one hundred item purity test. First one to hit zero gets to make the other his fuck-toy for the rest of the tour or whatever. So we get scenes like,
Private Z grins over at Sergeant A. “Pierced my own nipples last night and rimmed the captain. Bingo jack!”
He laughed. “Gratz. But I always knew you had your nose buried up Captain McRay’s ass. You’re going to have to do better than that to beat me. Snuck off base into the Kreiger camp and fucked one of them blue tittied aliens that work the cantinas. Got arrested for unauthorized fraternization and had to bribe my way out of the base jail.”
Z frowned. “Bribery isn’t on our list.”
He laughed. “Yeah, but fucking an alien and spending a night in jail is on the list.”
She shook her head. “You didn’t spend the night in jail, because you bribed yourself out. Doesn’t count. Alien counts. I’m envious, but I still went down two points to your one. I’ll score an alien eventually.”
He grinned. “Nipple piercing is only half a point. Got to get some jewelry in your clit for the full point.”
“Hey,” she protested. “Do you really want to interpret it that way? Or is Mr. Prince Albert coming to town?”
The goal is we create our own kinky purity test of sorts (the actual purity test is a little tame, but does have a few useful items). And the goal is the first person to get to zero wins. The way this would work isn’t so much that they do everything with each other, but we write a series of vignettes where MC does something and you play the NPC/side characters. Then I write the NPC/side characters for your scene. We come back together with YC and MC for a classic joint role play scene.
The key to a scene like this would be to develop characters with some depth and personality and maybe give it a setting where accomplishing the various kinky tasks is difficult. Oh and to decide just how dirty we want to get and what specific taboo items are going to be on our purity test.
An example might be a pair of soldier’s fighting on some hot, dusty desert planet. It’s a slow, dirty war, the kind of war where the deaths are a constant trickle and no one expects to go home whole or even alive. So, this sergeant and private who found themselves sharing the same dusty pit again and again, fighting off the occasional charge of alien bug creatures, started to one up each other with kinky sex talk and eventually drew up this one hundred item purity test. First one to hit zero gets to make the other his fuck-toy for the rest of the tour or whatever. So we get scenes like,
Private Z grins over at Sergeant A. “Pierced my own nipples last night and rimmed the captain. Bingo jack!”
He laughed. “Gratz. But I always knew you had your nose buried up Captain McRay’s ass. You’re going to have to do better than that to beat me. Snuck off base into the Kreiger camp and fucked one of them blue tittied aliens that work the cantinas. Got arrested for unauthorized fraternization and had to bribe my way out of the base jail.”
Z frowned. “Bribery isn’t on our list.”
He laughed. “Yeah, but fucking an alien and spending a night in jail is on the list.”
She shook her head. “You didn’t spend the night in jail, because you bribed yourself out. Doesn’t count. Alien counts. I’m envious, but I still went down two points to your one. I’ll score an alien eventually.”
He grinned. “Nipple piercing is only half a point. Got to get some jewelry in your clit for the full point.”
“Hey,” she protested. “Do you really want to interpret it that way? Or is Mr. Prince Albert coming to town?”
I’d like to do a story involving a girl involved in sex work where she got into it consensually and she loves her work. Where she chooses who she fucks and takes pride in pleasing her clients. Then when we establish that she loves being a whore (for example), we introduce that romantic element and she has to decide what to do? Give up something that she’s good at and enjoys even if society doesn’t approve or give up this funny, flirtatious guy who she loves spending time with, but maybe he struggles with her profession or doesn’t even know about it.
I'll consider most stories where MC gets more cock than a good girl should.
As always, the characters and settings may change. While I wrote this out, it's the concept that's important. The little details (like almost everything) can be changed and tailored to suit our tastes and cater to or remove specific kinks.
The initial setting is Diamond Bar, California in a discreet four-bedroom family home up the hill from and within walking distance of Diamond Bar High School. Twenty-three year old Lin (MC) and her eighteen-year old brother (we'll call him Kenny for this little vignette) live alone as after their parents split up, their mother married a man in Germany and their father moved to Shanghai to be able to spend time at his factory. Lin graduated from UC Riverside with a degree in nursing and her brother just graduated from high school today. Lin went to his ceremony and sent pictures to everyone in the family. Lin is ethnically Vietnamese. She may be adopted in which case Kenny would not be her biological brother.
Kenny nodded. "Get naked, I need pictures." Lin blushed and her brother laughed. "You're going to be lucky to spend any time in clothes in the future. I said I'd dungeon master your fantasy for real, but you need to be serious."
Lin nodded. Her brother wasn't strictly normal; he was definitely on the spectrum and terrible with people, but he adored her and would do anything for her. And he was a fucking genius, amazing with data and processed things in a way normal people never could. She undressed.
"Go by the window and pose. Something a snakehead might like." Lin swallowed and did as her brother asked. He showed her the picture and she nodded.
He paused to write something down. "Okay, I'm going to start you on a butt plug regime before we fly to Vietnam for your sale. I've hacked into law enforcement and dark web sites and have a good idea of who to sell you to so we have the best chance of you being trafficked back to the United States for work in either Nevada in a brothel or San Francisco in an unlicensed massage facility. These particular traffickers are pretty good about taking care of their merchandise and the risk of you not arriving is lower than elsewhere."
Lin swallowed and tried to smile. "Okay." She didn't really understand everything her brother said, but she knew he was dead serious about making her fantasy come true.
Kenny said. "I've ordered a fuck-machine for delivery to the basement. I've transferred the trust to my name. I didn't like the way this machine worked, so I'm going to modify it. "It's important that you get used to constant vaginal and anal stimulation. You'll be strapped in for at least three hours a day. I'm going to handle your piercings myself. I've got twelve planned. I haven't really figured out how to deal with your throat training. But before we fly to Vietnam, you'll be skilled at oral stimulation. I'm busy deleting all records of your birth in the United States, removing any fingerprints or DNA data. I've erased your school records. Your new identity will be as a Vietnamese citizen named Phúc Kim Vu. You are a graduate of high school in Vietnam and I'll be working on your accent."
At this point, Kenny looked stern. "Pursuant to your instructions, the game will not end until I retrieve you after six months of sex-work. You have told me to be firm and ignore tears, pleading, and begging to change your mind. I will honor your request. Once we begin, I will use physical discipline to enforce the training regime. I will also modify your behavior so that you act appropriate for your new status in life. This is important as I don't want you killed by the traffickers."
Lin nodded.
"Are you ready to begin Fook?" Kenny said, pronouncing her new name correctly.
*****
The initial setting is Diamond Bar, California in a discreet four-bedroom family home up the hill from and within walking distance of Diamond Bar High School. Twenty-three year old Lin (MC) and her eighteen-year old brother (we'll call him Kenny for this little vignette) live alone as after their parents split up, their mother married a man in Germany and their father moved to Shanghai to be able to spend time at his factory. Lin graduated from UC Riverside with a degree in nursing and her brother just graduated from high school today. Lin went to his ceremony and sent pictures to everyone in the family. Lin is ethnically Vietnamese. She may be adopted in which case Kenny would not be her biological brother.
Kenny nodded. "Get naked, I need pictures." Lin blushed and her brother laughed. "You're going to be lucky to spend any time in clothes in the future. I said I'd dungeon master your fantasy for real, but you need to be serious."
Lin nodded. Her brother wasn't strictly normal; he was definitely on the spectrum and terrible with people, but he adored her and would do anything for her. And he was a fucking genius, amazing with data and processed things in a way normal people never could. She undressed.
"Go by the window and pose. Something a snakehead might like." Lin swallowed and did as her brother asked. He showed her the picture and she nodded.
He paused to write something down. "Okay, I'm going to start you on a butt plug regime before we fly to Vietnam for your sale. I've hacked into law enforcement and dark web sites and have a good idea of who to sell you to so we have the best chance of you being trafficked back to the United States for work in either Nevada in a brothel or San Francisco in an unlicensed massage facility. These particular traffickers are pretty good about taking care of their merchandise and the risk of you not arriving is lower than elsewhere."
Lin swallowed and tried to smile. "Okay." She didn't really understand everything her brother said, but she knew he was dead serious about making her fantasy come true.
Kenny said. "I've ordered a fuck-machine for delivery to the basement. I've transferred the trust to my name. I didn't like the way this machine worked, so I'm going to modify it. "It's important that you get used to constant vaginal and anal stimulation. You'll be strapped in for at least three hours a day. I'm going to handle your piercings myself. I've got twelve planned. I haven't really figured out how to deal with your throat training. But before we fly to Vietnam, you'll be skilled at oral stimulation. I'm busy deleting all records of your birth in the United States, removing any fingerprints or DNA data. I've erased your school records. Your new identity will be as a Vietnamese citizen named Phúc Kim Vu. You are a graduate of high school in Vietnam and I'll be working on your accent."
At this point, Kenny looked stern. "Pursuant to your instructions, the game will not end until I retrieve you after six months of sex-work. You have told me to be firm and ignore tears, pleading, and begging to change your mind. I will honor your request. Once we begin, I will use physical discipline to enforce the training regime. I will also modify your behavior so that you act appropriate for your new status in life. This is important as I don't want you killed by the traffickers."
Lin nodded.
"Are you ready to begin Fook?" Kenny said, pronouncing her new name correctly.
*****
“Serial killer” in this case is analogous to a bad man. He could be a serial killer or a brutal bank robber. Maybe he rides a Harley-Davidson and is the chief enforcer for his club. But his badness has one clear exception; YC has a fondness for his “happy ending girl.”
Mind you, his fondness might take a variety of forms from classically romantic in “I want to save this troubled lass” to I’m happiest when my cock is buried in her throat with a mix of semen and saliva on her lips.
This plot is inspired by a wide-variety of films and books. Taxi Driver, the Equalizer, Wild Card, Bad Guy, and so many 1980s Alpha male romance novels. I’d love an emotional feeling of him using her, but also protective.
I’d like our writing to show both sides of our respective characters. In other words, maybe there’s a scene where MC is off screen. And YC brutally murders someone (I can write the “someone” and any NPCs if that works for our writing style, or you can simply develop the scene yourself). We see this ruthless side of him (for example).
Later, I write a scene where MC is servicing some client. She’s almost bored. It’s a job. She may not enjoy it or she may. Other scenes might be her out with friends, drinking. Through these scenes we might see one side of her. You could write the NPCs as appropriate or if you prefer, I could write it out.
Later though, we now write together and develop their story. How she can’t help but smile when he enters the room. How she is enthusiastic in pleasuring him. If that’s appropriate for our particular story. How he treats her as opposed to how he treats other people.
Finally, we’d have your classic rescued damsel in distress scenes. Someone abuses her, immigration wants to deport her, she’s arrested, she gets pregnant, YC is going to be the one who solves her problems. It might be through violence, bestowed wisdom, bribery, knowledge, etc. I do love the classic protective warrior scenes.
A potential twist might be if he has some responsibility for her current life choices. Maybe he was involved in initially trafficking her or breaking her? Then they start out in a state of dislike or even hatred and then it might be something of a redemption story.
Our particular story can end in a variety of ways. She betrays him? Maybe the cops or bad guys are looking for him? Or she might be kidnapped and trafficked when she refuses to give him up. The story might have a happy ending where they ride off in his black muscle car for some unknown destination or he might die in a hail of bullets, leaving her the key to a bus station locker. I wouldn’t expect us to decide the ending before we started. But if you watch as much television and film and read as much as I do, you know both happy endings and angsty tragedies can be equally delicious.
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