I honestly have no idea if anyone is going to read this, but if you do, then fair enough! It's a story that I plan to add to whenever I have free time to write, and ideas to fill it. Partly it is to help me fulfill an idea I never had much luck writing in an RP format, but this will also act as a writing sample of sorts.
All I would ask is that if you have any comments / questions / suggestions / feedback.... anything like that; please do not post anything here. Message it to me. The reason for this is that I don't want other people's messages appearing in the middle of my story.
Also, fair warning, this story is going to very furry / non-human character heavy. If that's not your thing, don't read it. Other than that I'm not really into anything too extreme, so it should be a fairly safe read. If there are any potential trigger-warning-worthy posts though, I will mark them as such.
Trying to sleep through noise was nothing new to Kari. Being able to ignore strange sounds in a tower full of people who never seemed to sleep at the same time as each other was an essential skill. Only the sound jarring sound of the morning bell usually woke her. Listening, the young woman didn’t hear that dreaded sound. So what had woken her?
In a moment she disregarded the question. If it wasn’t time to wake up yet, then she intended to make the most of it. In recent months, the schedule her tutors had assigned her was brutal, every moment of sleep she could steal was a gift indeed. And that was when it dawned on her.
For the first time in what seemed like ages, Kari didn’t feel tired. She was still groggy from having only just woken, but there was no pressure in her head, no ache behind her eyes. In a moment of worry, she bolted upright and attempted to throw her blanket off herself. She must have overslept. Oh no, this was bad. Sister Utilda was going to be furious.
Eyes blinking to adjust to the bright light, she found that her blanket was nowhere to be found. For matter… light? Kari’s small novice room was on the interior of the tower and held no windows. Even in the middle of the day with her door wide open, it was never anything other than gloomy.
That was when it all came rushing back. Kari wasn’t in her tower bedroom. Admittedly the stone floor that she had been laying on was about equal to her bed in terms of softness, but no. Now that she was awake it was quite obvious. This was not home.
Kari was in a stone building of some sort, or rather, she was in what remained of it. The larger stone blocks that made up the walls seemed mostly intact, but there was a large gaping hole in the roof. The hole must have been there for quite some time, as the debris underneath the opening was covered in a carpet of moss.
The damage seemed strangely confined, and as she pondered it, Kari realised why. The amount of fallen debris and rubble seemed too small, compared to the wide hole in the ceiling. Someone must have started to clear away the damage, but never finished the job.
It was then that she heard a clattering sound deeper in the long corridor-like room, in the darker recesses where the light struggled to reach. Someone, or something, was moving back there. Squinting, Kari tried to make out what it was. It wasn’t until the figure moved again, with another clatter, that the young woman recognised what she was seeing.
A hunched over robed figure, the green material of the garment acting almost like camouflage when in front of a similarly coloured fresco wall.
Memories of the night before flooded back into Kari’s mind, and a icy feeling of dread suffused her. A basement room, robed and hooded figures gathered around her, chanting, and herself placed in the centre of an arcane symbol drawn on the floor.
Reflexively, Kari looked down at the stone floor where she sat. With a horrified gasp, she saw that she was still was in a centre of a symbol! Two concentric rings of a chalky white marking, with unfamiliar symbols and markings between the two lines. In the middle of the inner circle, right under her body, was a starburst shape, the points of which just touched the inner circle’s rim.
It wasn’t the same as the one she had seen last night, but Kari reacted on instinct. She scrambled backwards, not even wasting the time to stand up, just trying to get herself out. Her gasp and movement attracted the attention of the robed figured, who called something, but as preoccupied as she was, Kari paid no attention.
With a last burst of desperate effort, Kari threw herself free of the boundary of the symbol… and immediately collapsed to the floor. She tried to get up, but her muscles pointedly refused to even move an inch.
Even breathing seemed to become difficult, the muscles that worked the young woman’s lungs feeling too weak to draw in much of a breath. As she gasped for air, Kari felt a dizzy sensation, and her vision once again started to blur. She was going to pass out. Worse, if she didn’t regain consciousness before she recovered enough to breathe…
With mounting fear, Kari felt a pair of hands take hold of her ankles. She wanted to kick and break free, but her legs still refused to obey. She was dragged against her will back towards the circle. As soon as her foot passed back into it, she felt life return to her body, and with a sucked in breath, she kicked her right foot free of the hand on her.
“Hey!” the robed figure protested, snatching hold of Kari again, with ease, as she had once again gone limp as her foot fell outside the symbol. “I’m trying to help you, will you stop struggling so much?”
Help? Kari had been tricked only the night before by women wearing robes, and she was quite understandably wary of both that as well as magical symbols. For now though she realised there was simply no choice. She couldn’t even breathe outside the circle, she had to stay inside it for now.
It was a relief and a surprise how quickly she started to feel better after being wholly dragged back into the design marked on the floor. Only a second or two after her legs were let go of, Kari felt well enough to sit upright again and take a proper look at the person who had been manhandling her.
She should have been shocked.
She wasn’t.
Common sense told her that she should be scared.
She wasn’t.
The woman standing in front of Kari wasn’t human. The word ‘mouse’ was what came immediately to mind.
Short fur of a light grey colour covered her face, and indeed everywhere on her body that wasn’t hidden by the loose-fitting robe. The only place that had no fur was the woman’s head, which had a neck-length bob of straight brown hair. Even the large round ears atop her head had furred backs. Further, the face had a slight muzzle-like shape to it. A pink and slightly flat nose held at the end, surrounded by delicate whiskers.
The way that nose twitched slightly in anxiety and made the whiskers shake a little was, quite adorable, and utterly disarming. With big and expressive brown eyes, the woman looked down at Kari. It was surprisingly easy to tell, she seemed to be about the same age as Kari, a young adult.
“This is going to sound really strange…” Kari faltered a little, but pressed on. “…I had a dream about you”.
With a shaky smile, the mousey woman nodded her head. “Yeah, not as strange as you might think. I had something like that too, but I don’t think it was a dream”.
Clearing her throat and gesturing at the circles drawn on the floor, Kari asked “So are we going to talk about why you’re keeping me captive here?”
With a horrified look on her face, the mousey woman brought her hand up to her mouth as if to stifle a gasp. “No, no, that’s not it at all” she blurted out in a rush. Gesturing at the pattern on the ground she insisted “That’s a healing circle, surely you’ve seen one before?”
Kari shook her head “Can’t say that I have” she countered, then probed further. “If you say this is a healing spell of some kind, why does it make me collapse and stop breathing if I leave the circle?”
This time it was the furred woman shook her head. “That’s not right at all. For one thing this isn’t a spell. And quite besides that, you’re making a basic causation reversal fallacy. Just because…”
The human groaned and waved a hand to stop the other woman. She had worked alongside sisters in the tower library back home who talked this way. Jump to a conclusion and rather than tell you the correct answer, they would lecture you on how your logic was wrong.
“Let’s keep it really simple here” she insisted. “What do you mean about me being wrong. I can leave?”
From the way the mouse talked very carefully, it was clear that it took a deal of effort for her to stick to the strictly relevant points. “The circle isn’t making you collapse” she explained. “It’s the opposite. The circle is stopping you from collapsing, but only works when you’re inside it”.
Kari was fairly certain she knew the answer, but wanted to see just how much this woman seemed to know about her. “And why would I be collapsing in the first place?”
With a shrug, the furry creature sat down on the floor, directly in front of Kari. The mousey woman’s short stature meant that she hadn’t been exactly looming, but she had obviously decided that if there was going to be a conversation, it would be face-to-face.
“You were nearly dead when I found you” she continued. “You were out in the forest, in a heap on the ground. I have no idea how you got there. I dragged you back here to where it’s dry and sheltered, then drew the healing circle to put you in”.
Forest… there were no forests near the tower. If talking to a strange semi-human creature wasn’t proof enough, that was all Kari needed to start believing the rest of her dream. However, the longer she stayed awake, the fuzzier the details became.
“Where am I? What is this place called?” the human asked.
“Weilin Forest” was the reply.
“No, that’s not what I meant” Kari insisted. She tried to think of how to explain herself better. Making an expansive gesture with her hands, she reiterated “What’s everything called. The whole word”.
Raising an eyebrow, obviously wondering why the human didn’t know such as basic thing, the mouse responded “Teranathi”. In turn, she asked “Where exactly is it that you come from?”
“That’s a long story” Kari offered, but could immediately see that her dismissive answer had not deterred further questions.
Sure enough, the mouse said right back “Well you’re not going to be able to leave that circle for at least the next few hours…”
All I would ask is that if you have any comments / questions / suggestions / feedback.... anything like that; please do not post anything here. Message it to me. The reason for this is that I don't want other people's messages appearing in the middle of my story.
Also, fair warning, this story is going to very furry / non-human character heavy. If that's not your thing, don't read it. Other than that I'm not really into anything too extreme, so it should be a fairly safe read. If there are any potential trigger-warning-worthy posts though, I will mark them as such.
Kari's Tale.
Trying to sleep through noise was nothing new to Kari. Being able to ignore strange sounds in a tower full of people who never seemed to sleep at the same time as each other was an essential skill. Only the sound jarring sound of the morning bell usually woke her. Listening, the young woman didn’t hear that dreaded sound. So what had woken her?
In a moment she disregarded the question. If it wasn’t time to wake up yet, then she intended to make the most of it. In recent months, the schedule her tutors had assigned her was brutal, every moment of sleep she could steal was a gift indeed. And that was when it dawned on her.
For the first time in what seemed like ages, Kari didn’t feel tired. She was still groggy from having only just woken, but there was no pressure in her head, no ache behind her eyes. In a moment of worry, she bolted upright and attempted to throw her blanket off herself. She must have overslept. Oh no, this was bad. Sister Utilda was going to be furious.
Eyes blinking to adjust to the bright light, she found that her blanket was nowhere to be found. For matter… light? Kari’s small novice room was on the interior of the tower and held no windows. Even in the middle of the day with her door wide open, it was never anything other than gloomy.
That was when it all came rushing back. Kari wasn’t in her tower bedroom. Admittedly the stone floor that she had been laying on was about equal to her bed in terms of softness, but no. Now that she was awake it was quite obvious. This was not home.
Kari was in a stone building of some sort, or rather, she was in what remained of it. The larger stone blocks that made up the walls seemed mostly intact, but there was a large gaping hole in the roof. The hole must have been there for quite some time, as the debris underneath the opening was covered in a carpet of moss.
The damage seemed strangely confined, and as she pondered it, Kari realised why. The amount of fallen debris and rubble seemed too small, compared to the wide hole in the ceiling. Someone must have started to clear away the damage, but never finished the job.
It was then that she heard a clattering sound deeper in the long corridor-like room, in the darker recesses where the light struggled to reach. Someone, or something, was moving back there. Squinting, Kari tried to make out what it was. It wasn’t until the figure moved again, with another clatter, that the young woman recognised what she was seeing.
A hunched over robed figure, the green material of the garment acting almost like camouflage when in front of a similarly coloured fresco wall.
Memories of the night before flooded back into Kari’s mind, and a icy feeling of dread suffused her. A basement room, robed and hooded figures gathered around her, chanting, and herself placed in the centre of an arcane symbol drawn on the floor.
Reflexively, Kari looked down at the stone floor where she sat. With a horrified gasp, she saw that she was still was in a centre of a symbol! Two concentric rings of a chalky white marking, with unfamiliar symbols and markings between the two lines. In the middle of the inner circle, right under her body, was a starburst shape, the points of which just touched the inner circle’s rim.
It wasn’t the same as the one she had seen last night, but Kari reacted on instinct. She scrambled backwards, not even wasting the time to stand up, just trying to get herself out. Her gasp and movement attracted the attention of the robed figured, who called something, but as preoccupied as she was, Kari paid no attention.
With a last burst of desperate effort, Kari threw herself free of the boundary of the symbol… and immediately collapsed to the floor. She tried to get up, but her muscles pointedly refused to even move an inch.
Even breathing seemed to become difficult, the muscles that worked the young woman’s lungs feeling too weak to draw in much of a breath. As she gasped for air, Kari felt a dizzy sensation, and her vision once again started to blur. She was going to pass out. Worse, if she didn’t regain consciousness before she recovered enough to breathe…
With mounting fear, Kari felt a pair of hands take hold of her ankles. She wanted to kick and break free, but her legs still refused to obey. She was dragged against her will back towards the circle. As soon as her foot passed back into it, she felt life return to her body, and with a sucked in breath, she kicked her right foot free of the hand on her.
“Hey!” the robed figure protested, snatching hold of Kari again, with ease, as she had once again gone limp as her foot fell outside the symbol. “I’m trying to help you, will you stop struggling so much?”
Help? Kari had been tricked only the night before by women wearing robes, and she was quite understandably wary of both that as well as magical symbols. For now though she realised there was simply no choice. She couldn’t even breathe outside the circle, she had to stay inside it for now.
It was a relief and a surprise how quickly she started to feel better after being wholly dragged back into the design marked on the floor. Only a second or two after her legs were let go of, Kari felt well enough to sit upright again and take a proper look at the person who had been manhandling her.
She should have been shocked.
She wasn’t.
Common sense told her that she should be scared.
She wasn’t.
The woman standing in front of Kari wasn’t human. The word ‘mouse’ was what came immediately to mind.
Short fur of a light grey colour covered her face, and indeed everywhere on her body that wasn’t hidden by the loose-fitting robe. The only place that had no fur was the woman’s head, which had a neck-length bob of straight brown hair. Even the large round ears atop her head had furred backs. Further, the face had a slight muzzle-like shape to it. A pink and slightly flat nose held at the end, surrounded by delicate whiskers.
The way that nose twitched slightly in anxiety and made the whiskers shake a little was, quite adorable, and utterly disarming. With big and expressive brown eyes, the woman looked down at Kari. It was surprisingly easy to tell, she seemed to be about the same age as Kari, a young adult.
“This is going to sound really strange…” Kari faltered a little, but pressed on. “…I had a dream about you”.
With a shaky smile, the mousey woman nodded her head. “Yeah, not as strange as you might think. I had something like that too, but I don’t think it was a dream”.
Clearing her throat and gesturing at the circles drawn on the floor, Kari asked “So are we going to talk about why you’re keeping me captive here?”
With a horrified look on her face, the mousey woman brought her hand up to her mouth as if to stifle a gasp. “No, no, that’s not it at all” she blurted out in a rush. Gesturing at the pattern on the ground she insisted “That’s a healing circle, surely you’ve seen one before?”
Kari shook her head “Can’t say that I have” she countered, then probed further. “If you say this is a healing spell of some kind, why does it make me collapse and stop breathing if I leave the circle?”
This time it was the furred woman shook her head. “That’s not right at all. For one thing this isn’t a spell. And quite besides that, you’re making a basic causation reversal fallacy. Just because…”
The human groaned and waved a hand to stop the other woman. She had worked alongside sisters in the tower library back home who talked this way. Jump to a conclusion and rather than tell you the correct answer, they would lecture you on how your logic was wrong.
“Let’s keep it really simple here” she insisted. “What do you mean about me being wrong. I can leave?”
From the way the mouse talked very carefully, it was clear that it took a deal of effort for her to stick to the strictly relevant points. “The circle isn’t making you collapse” she explained. “It’s the opposite. The circle is stopping you from collapsing, but only works when you’re inside it”.
Kari was fairly certain she knew the answer, but wanted to see just how much this woman seemed to know about her. “And why would I be collapsing in the first place?”
With a shrug, the furry creature sat down on the floor, directly in front of Kari. The mousey woman’s short stature meant that she hadn’t been exactly looming, but she had obviously decided that if there was going to be a conversation, it would be face-to-face.
“You were nearly dead when I found you” she continued. “You were out in the forest, in a heap on the ground. I have no idea how you got there. I dragged you back here to where it’s dry and sheltered, then drew the healing circle to put you in”.
Forest… there were no forests near the tower. If talking to a strange semi-human creature wasn’t proof enough, that was all Kari needed to start believing the rest of her dream. However, the longer she stayed awake, the fuzzier the details became.
“Where am I? What is this place called?” the human asked.
“Weilin Forest” was the reply.
“No, that’s not what I meant” Kari insisted. She tried to think of how to explain herself better. Making an expansive gesture with her hands, she reiterated “What’s everything called. The whole word”.
Raising an eyebrow, obviously wondering why the human didn’t know such as basic thing, the mouse responded “Teranathi”. In turn, she asked “Where exactly is it that you come from?”
“That’s a long story” Kari offered, but could immediately see that her dismissive answer had not deterred further questions.
Sure enough, the mouse said right back “Well you’re not going to be able to leave that circle for at least the next few hours…”