Becoming better, I need some help

[Malice_Nightshade]

I'm trying to become a better RPer by getting better with punctuation, I need someone to give me examples and critique my work, any one willing to help me?

 

[WaveVelour]

I think the best way to improve your writing would simply be RPing with more experienced partners. If you want to get constrictive criticism on your writing, you can start a journal and state that comments are welcome =)

 

[Xanaphia]

Have you looked into Grammarly?