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Guitarfan28 Can Be Poetic

guitarfan28

The Punisher
Joined
Jan 4, 2012
Location
Ohio
I have written poetry for awhile now and thought maybe I'd share some and see what people thought. Don't be afraid to be honest. If its horrible tell me. Hope you enjoy though!
Criticism good and bad is welcome.
 
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I can't say I was looking for you
Maybe this is all too good to be true
You see something in me
Something I always knew and wanted to be.

Around my heart, I built up a wall
Swearing I'd never let it fall
With you, you took it apart,
piece by piece from the start.

You've jumped into my soul
now I begin to feel whole
All my doubts have been killed
I feel our love can only build

Due to others your eyes have shed tears
I know as I, you have your fears
I know men have caused you pain
But I promise to never leave you alone in the rain

I always want to bring a smile to that beautiful face
If only words could explain our every embrace
With everything you make me feel
Makes me wonder if this can be real

I never want this feeling to end
You are becoming my new best friend
Please Always remember
That I will love you Forever



 
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