Critique me! Ver. 2

[Nightingale]

Just a quick practice done in Traditional Media (Something I haven't done in a while.)

Graphite Stick 2B and Eraser.

 

[Tsubaki-chan]

It's beautiful. She looks so peaceful, and I absolutely love the hair.​

 

[Disco_Lollipop]

It's really well done for a practice sketch. The only thing I would think of to change would be the tilt of the right eye. It's too upturned for the angle of her face.

 

[WriteMood]

Wow, I am jealous of your ability at noses. Yes, her nose! I can't draw a good nose to save my life. The only thing is maybe bring the slope of her shoulder up a little higher and further out so she looks more proportionate? Gorgeous.